Naruto: The Severing Spirit N:TSS

A young boy named Riku is born from a mother that is from an ancient clan forgotten by time and a father of one of the last kekkei genkai users that wasn't exterminated by Kirigakure. This young boy hopes to restore both of his parents clans to their former glory in a harsh shinobi world.

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