Chapter comments on the chapter Later, Satyr of the book Chimera Girl

There was only one part that threw me off. “She took a firm hold of the fuse and slide it through the hole.” I believe it should be “slid.” Other than that, wowza!

Loll, Nelda is really too funny! I’m loving this so far. Beautiful grammar and writing style. The risqué nature of the story is very interesting too. So fresh on WN!

Normally I'm extremely put off by stories with such a Risque nature. It's normally not my thing. Normally. I think the absolutely hilarious nature of our MC is what makes some of the more egregious moments fine for me. A gem, for sure.

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That was a surprising world...

At first, I was like ML? But I think that it would be a little too fast........haha