Reviews of Successor of Primordial Origin by ChallengeGod - Webnovel

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First time on webnovel but I already found a favorite fanfic. Keep up the great work author! Hopefully you don't drop this one since it's a really good novel.

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Read it even before it was rewritten. It's a really interesting and good novel which really makes the plot become unique. Hopefully author can make more chapters since its a very good novel.

At first it's good, but then he waste his wish. Instead wishing something like Ultimate Tracking Power, he only wish for the location of his father. If he have unlimited amount of wish, then that's no problem but it's limited. Instead of wishing Ultimate System he wish for something mediocre. Well, a lot of nosense and non common sense here. So be carefull. The author said, it will be Netori or NTR but all I know was that, it full of romance. He maybe doesn't know what is NTR. Just because in the original both were meant together, that won't become NTR if in the Fanfiction both haven't developed love interest each other.

Mediocre character setting A wannabe softcore p.0rn(only the bad part, no the fun one) FFS even the ntr done badly Only good things of this novel are: the mc indeed op.... and pretty much that. The other good part because source material (btth) is a Good novel...I think. Oh and Harem....but ffs the way author done it so bad it becomes so cringy. My bet author mentality hasn't grown past 15 y/o. A horny kid

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Instead of calling this a story it's more apt to call it a summary Very dry very bland Instead of calling this a story it's more apt to call it a summary Very dry very bland Instead of calling this a story it's more apt to call it a summary Very dry very bland

Nice work,but stupid mc....Author sama should utilized wish better...Alot of stuff that could had been better,but it had been ruined by forced plot of author sama...I will not say you sucks,since author sama is a fanfic sole writer without any official team helping..But at least,think carefully of the wish...My gosh,he just blow up wish like it's a trash....instant mastery is barely acceptable,but system that cant even be fully utilized?I mean,you can just specify the freaking system to used qi convert to currency,at least that show that you are the one wishing for that system,not the other way around!!!!

Went down hill fast.........Went down hill fast.........Went down hill fast.........Went down hill fast.........Went down hill fast.........Went down hill fast.........Went down hill fast.........Went down hill fast.........

To support the Handsome Author

Op Mc is love so 5 star . 😈 b. Op Mc is love so 5 star . 😈 b. Op Mc is love so 5 star . 😈 b. Op Mc is love so 5 star . 😈 b. Op Mc is love so 5 star . 😈 b. Op Mc is love so 5 star . 😈 b.

Yup its great! OP MC! BADDASS MC! Harem! Its too bad that the story pace too fast but whatever as long as its great! .......... ......... ......... .........

Not bad although lots of cliff hangers it is well made and suspenseful. Is the review over 140 Characters now? No really how about now... lovely not enough characters

Want a story where the mc just doesnt leave his past hanging ? This novel is actually the few where for someone that is reincarnated with a "system" he actually has the ability to go back where he came from.Second life takes place in BTTH with a vanilla setting,for those looking for action packed the novel doesnt give that much its more to the "Im op i can do with a pinky" kind of feel.

I like the novel very much please prioritize it more and keep on making chapters it is very nice to read im very glad that you are active make more chapters im rooting for ya

If you want 5 full stars, you have to make lots of chapters so I can change them. Because reading 1 chapter a day makes my wish become big and greedy.

yeh.... nope the worst possible novel i've seen... He's attitude make me wanna punch him to death man. nah i'm still gonna give it a one star cuz that's the only way.....?

I think you should do what you think makes the story better but personally do a modern world with hidden cultivation sects and big families that rule pocket dimensions. Thanks for the chapters

Good writing quality, Like a published novel however the pacing is a bit fast, and tends to just skip through details, also their is basically zero character development with the harem, it’s just like he says someone is his girl then author moves on

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Hahahaha good sorry so far I started reading this ytd and I'm at the last chapter and so far so good just some bad English but can be neglected 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

Definitely one of the best fan-fics out there, writing quality is nice. I haven't read the original, but I don't really feel left out. Main character isn't too OP or weak. Good writing :)

You are the one that is for me but your story is the thing I need so I am not a gold digger but a novel digger Btw f**k 140 word article in gonna prob watch then be a dam that the