Reviews of Divine Talent Born Mortal by goodlion - Webnovel

Couldn’t read more than a page or two due to have absolutely bad the translation was. I have to assume a lot of it was also just cropped out because it felt like words were missing that were needed on top of it being badly translated

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Cultivation stages or system and world background are not explained enough from what i've read. The character design is decent. Story Development is quite fast at the start from what i read but the main problem is the horrible broken english and grammatical mistakes it's horrible to read but the plot or story idea is the best part of this novel if someone can tell me when the english gets better or if it does i will endure and read it but if it doesn't get any better i'll drop it since this level of horrible english is something i hate in novels as i like smoother english or at least a little above avarage level english to read so please someone tell me so i know if i would waste my coins and time or if it could be worth it

The concepts from what I can tell are good and interesting however like the author mentioned the grammar and the like are what hold the book back

Good book, with a nice start that is not very standard. Rarely do we see MCs like that. There is only one issue with this book, that will make A LOT of people drop it - it's grammar/english level. It's APPALING, it's like reading some unedited MTL, so unless you have decent english skills or you don't mind reading broken english, don't start reading, you will only feel bad, that a decent book got ruined.

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Can you please tell me if the grammer has improved now or is it still the same ? Cuz I've read some older comments saying that the grammer is too bad.

my main discomfort in reading this novel was the improper use of the correct pronouns most of the time(you can tell by context who is be talked about, but it's annoying to read). I also found the mixing up of names annoying.also the constant blunder of referring to the divine PLANE as the divine plan.

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grammar is worse than mtl its the thing that made me stop reading this. \ decent potential but you need an editor and proof-reader / / / / /

Droped because the language makes it impossible for me to enjoy this book. Except of the language the progression is all right, the world is ok the characters seem a little weak, and the book is already finished.

Very fun and good novel if you like allies or a girl you eat a piece you are welcome And I eat bread in a cheese sandwich sandwich a cheese sandwich salad and bread sandwich and bread salad

Some sentences were incomprehensible because of some grammatical errors here and there. Some spelling errors of names and other words due to hasty typing.

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While the story is good, the inconsistency is impossible to over look. Even seeing two different names fir the same realm in the same paragraph isnt that uncommon. I also feel like the story is progressing a bit too quickly and it can get confusing.

the plot of the book is actually good, its just the story is full of errors. I don't know why it has yet to be edited when it is clear that it should be. personally think this should be wrote to make sense and to fix the many errors

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I just started the story but am Enjoying it so far. just please get an editor. this book has so much potential, but quality drops because it is not edited properly.

The story has some really good bones to it. Sadly the writing quality and grammar are horrendous. If this gets an editor even a subpar editor this can be easily trending. Great bones but very bad grammar.

this book is not a 4 in my eyes it is at most a 2 everything else was greater but whoever translated or made this book did not do any grammar checks or any editing on the book to make it make more sense

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There are so many grammatical mistakes that i could not read this anymore. I'm sure it would be a great story once it has been properly edited

This novel has good premise, good plot progression. But like always there's a catch. The novel is almost illegible , I have read MTL with better quality. My suggestion to author, use Grammerly. it's free and can help you clean portions that make no sense whatsoever. I realize that this novel is complete, but if you don't edit this novel. Readers will try to avoid your works despite your intriguing creativity.

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I am not a picky reader, I suck at English, so I am not really gonna comment on the grammar mistakes. Overall, this book has great potential the plot is great and it avoids most cliches from what I've read the character development is also good, but there is little to no dialog the you can see the character development but we never really see the developments being put into action. I truly like this book, but it's hard to read when it sounds like a documentary. I am going to drop this for now, but I'll pick this back up and hopefully see some changes in future chapters.

i really liked it and while it could have been better in some ways no novel is perfect and i really enjoyed reading it thank you for your hard work and i hope you make other novels that are as good as this or hopefully even better

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