Droped because the language makes it impossible for me to enjoy this book.
Except of the language the progression is all right, the world is ok the characters seem a little weak, and the book is already finished.
While the story is good, the inconsistency is impossible to over look. Even seeing two different names fir the same realm in the same paragraph isnt that uncommon. I also feel like the story is progressing a bit too quickly and it can get confusing.
the plot of the book is actually good, its just the story is full of errors. I don't know why it has yet to be edited when it is clear that it should be. personally think this should be wrote to make sense and to fix the many errors
The story has some really good bones to it. Sadly the writing quality and grammar are horrendous. If this gets an editor even a subpar editor this can be easily trending. Great bones but very bad grammar.
this book is not a 4 in my eyes it is at most a 2 everything else was greater but whoever translated or made this book did not do any grammar checks or any editing on the book to make it make more sense
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This novel has good premise, good plot progression. But like always there's a catch. The novel is almost illegible , I have read MTL with better quality.
My suggestion to author, use Grammerly. it's free and can help you clean portions that make no sense whatsoever.
I realize that this novel is complete, but if you don't edit this novel. Readers will try to avoid your works despite your intriguing creativity.
It seems like a good story but the writing is absolutely horrendous in my opinion. Its worse than even MTL in my opinion. I had to reread sentences 5 times because I couldn’t understand what it was supposed to say. It could’ve been a very good story, but the writing made me lose 2 brain cells.
I am not a picky reader, I suck at English, so I am not really gonna comment on the grammar mistakes. Overall, this book has great potential the plot is great and it avoids most cliches from what I've read the character development is also good, but there is little to no dialog the you can see the character development but we never really see the developments being put into action. I truly like this book, but it's hard to read when it sounds like a documentary. I am going to drop this for now, but I'll pick this back up and hopefully see some changes in future chapters.
i really liked it and while it could have been better in some ways no novel is perfect and i really enjoyed reading it thank you for your hard work and i hope you make other novels that are as good as this or hopefully even better
Reading the synopsis nearly gave me an aneurysm. The novel has a very interesting premise, but after trudging through the first few chapters I decided it wasn't worth it. Writing quality can really make or break a novel.
Every MC is OP ,but that doesn't mean everyone wants to read an OP MC story. But OP doesn't mean MC should be OP from the start, if you're not writing a parody Fanfiction.
I Know I'm being unreasonable here but I still want the content to improve far more. It has potential don't waste it.👍
Eu amo está história.
E fácil de ler ,sem muita enrolação apesar de concordar que deveria um pouquinho de desenvolvimento.
A data de atualização é soberbo, não me queixo se houver mais capítulos por dia.
Only if the translator have some what knowledge in english he would have not made so many grammatical mistakes and neither English sentence are translated. Please reverse time and change the translator so that not to kill good novel.
Good work. 3.5/5.
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