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3.99

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Richard_Vandal
[img=coins][img=coins]This story is full of the thrill of a cultivation genius from the low till peak, with all troubles and fortune [img=coins][img=coins]
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potato_man
grammar is worse than mtl its the thing that made me stop reading this. \ decent potential but you need an editor and proof-reader / / / / /
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TeraSv
Droped because the language makes it impossible for me to enjoy this book. Except of the language the progression is all right, the world is ok the characters seem a little weak, and the book is already finished.
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Jh_Jj
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Jh_Jj

Very fun and good novel if you like allies or a girl you eat a piece you are welcome And I eat bread in a cheese sandwich sandwich a cheese sandwich salad and bread sandwich and bread salad
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DaoistOG8ke1
Some sentences were incomprehensible because of some grammatical errors here and there. Some spelling errors of names and other words due to hasty typing.
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CrabbyWither
While the story is good, the inconsistency is impossible to over look. Even seeing two different names fir the same realm in the same paragraph isnt that uncommon. I also feel like the story is progressing a bit too quickly and it can get confusing.
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Michael_Crew
the plot of the book is actually good, its just the story is full of errors. I don't know why it has yet to be edited when it is clear that it should be. personally think this should be wrote to make sense and to fix the many errors
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jonatham
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Robrob_Bang
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Satoyo
I just started the story but am Enjoying it so far. just please get an editor. this book has so much potential, but quality drops because it is not edited properly.
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Primal_Warrior
The story has some really good bones to it. Sadly the writing quality and grammar are horrendous. If this gets an editor even a subpar editor this can be easily trending. Great bones but very bad grammar.
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lazy_daoist2
this book is not a 4 in my eyes it is at most a 2 everything else was greater but whoever translated or made this book did not do any grammar checks or any editing on the book to make it make more sense
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CyberDaoist
There are so many grammatical mistakes that i could not read this anymore. I'm sure it would be a great story once it has been properly edited
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Pksr
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Pksr

This novel has good premise, good plot progression. But like always there's a catch. The novel is almost illegible , I have read MTL with better quality. My suggestion to author, use Grammerly. it's free and can help you clean portions that make no sense whatsoever. I realize that this novel is complete, but if you don't edit this novel. Readers will try to avoid your works despite your intriguing creativity.
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TruthFalcon
It seems like a good story but the writing is absolutely horrendous in my opinion. Its worse than even MTL in my opinion. I had to reread sentences 5 times because I couldnโ€™t understand what it was supposed to say. It couldโ€™ve been a very good story, but the writing made me lose 2 brain cells.
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Daoist513202
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Daoist513202
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memeyork
I am not a picky reader, I suck at English, so I am not really gonna comment on the grammar mistakes. Overall, this book has great potential the plot is great and it avoids most cliches from what I've read the character development is also good, but there is little to no dialog the you can see the character development but we never really see the developments being put into action. I truly like this book, but it's hard to read when it sounds like a documentary. I am going to drop this for now, but I'll pick this back up and hopefully see some changes in future chapters.
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samialrehani
i really liked it and while it could have been better in some ways no novel is perfect and i really enjoyed reading it thank you for your hard work and i hope you make other novels that are as good as this or hopefully even better
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thefunkmonk
great plot and good story but terrible grammar ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
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SkyLine
Reading the synopsis nearly gave me an aneurysm. The novel has a very interesting premise, but after trudging through the first few chapters I decided it wasn't worth it. Writing quality can really make or break a novel.
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Inso_Wd
Every MC is OP ,but that doesn't mean everyone wants to read an OP MC story. But OP doesn't mean MC should be OP from the start, if you're not writing a parody Fanfiction. I Know I'm being unreasonable here but I still want the content to improve far more. It has potential don't waste it.๐Ÿ‘
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Sofia_Moreno_9891
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mexin007
Only if the translator have some what knowledge in english he would have not made so many grammatical mistakes and neither English sentence are translated. Please reverse time and change the translator so that not to kill good novel.
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Seyol
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Seyol

Good work. 3.5/5. ............................................ .................................................... .......................................................D O R I M E ......................................................
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mexin007
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GoldenFoxs
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Rukimedsu
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