Reviews of Divine Talent Born Mortal by goodlion - Webnovel

Reading the synopsis nearly gave me an aneurysm. The novel has a very interesting premise, but after trudging through the first few chapters I decided it wasn't worth it. Writing quality can really make or break a novel.

Every MC is OP ,but that doesn't mean everyone wants to read an OP MC story. But OP doesn't mean MC should be OP from the start, if you're not writing a parody Fanfiction. I Know I'm being unreasonable here but I still want the content to improve far more. It has potential don't waste it.👍

Eu amo está história. E fácil de ler ,sem muita enrolação apesar de concordar que deveria um pouquinho de desenvolvimento. A data de atualização é soberbo, não me queixo se houver mais capítulos por dia.

Only if the translator have some what knowledge in english he would have not made so many grammatical mistakes and neither English sentence are translated. Please reverse time and change the translator so that not to kill good novel.

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Just a qustenian for those who have read till the last chapter, will the writing/translation quality improve? The story seems promesing but I struggle some times to understand the meaning of one or two paragraphs.

A really good novel content wise, but it's to read the author seems in need of a good editor. I belive with a good editor this novel could get a good placing in the ranking list. Hopefully it'll improve.

This novel has a lot of potential. It REALLY needs an editor or proof reader to help grammar and sentence structure. Sometimes you don't even know what the author is saying because of the atrocious grammar. I give only 2 stars to writing quality because the story is good. The terrible grammar ruins lot. Which doesn't help the other categories either.

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I’m a simple boy... i was searching through my recommended novels for a novel that piqued my interest through its synopsis and had the romance tag. I finally found it so I’ll give a 5 ⭐️ review!

Characters : 10/10✅ Plot : 10/10☑ Overall♥️♥️♥️♥️ 100/100✅✅♥️♥️♥️♥️ 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 love it so far...keep it coming!!!!

Attractive summary..hmmmm...its got my attention😳😳 Maybe I am very very very much into reading this novel🤨 😈 HAH! Lol, j/k 4 sure i'll give this novel a good try I mean I have been looking for a good story. Hopefully it will be as good as it seems to be🤞🤞♥️🥺🥺🥺😇😍😍🥰heereeheeree

I love the story so far❗♥️ I am so hooked right from the start😝 it really is a fun and entertaining read all the way❗❗❗👍 thx for uploading the story here😇 please more soon😳

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In normal times, I not very sensible to the spelling and the grammar, I make with, but presently, the characters change sex with each line, for example. It's a shame and scary because the rest is awfully good.

Such a Good story. But very painful to read. It's worse than machine translation. This story has so much potential. MC is OP and quite intelligent. But I feel like my English has downgraded and I might fail my English test in my exam after reading this novel. no kidding. Its the truth.

Desperately needs an editor. The story is engaging enough of cliche, but the grammar is a tad better than terrible. The author also likes adding words to a sentence to make the sentence incomprehensible, or skip words to accomplish the same.

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decent!! this novel need a editor, if you read it as is then its like reading from google translate. Which so annoying and make your eyes suffer...

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While I appreciate the author's efforts, I've come to realise that this story is not for me. Its not bad, but it does not hold my interest for the most part. The grammar and structure of the story is not so great and I realise if I pursue this novel further, its going to be more expensive, which I'm not willing to pay if a story does not hold my interest. In addition, I get the impression that in future chapters there is likely to be a harem which I do not like. The story on a whole is okay, it was interesting for me reading the first 9 chapters and the ML did not once open his mouth. I also got to admire the 2 masters who decided to give him a new life. Wish the author good luck in their storytelling endeavors. But unfortunately this story will not stay in my library. Take care.

Agh my head hurts so much. I couldn't even get past chapter 10. I know people complain about novels bad grammar but this novel feels like it was google translated.heck lntml has better translation then this. How can anyone give 5 stars for badly written grammar is beyond me. I know some of you might disagree for whatever reason, but know when the grammar is so bad that making you read it feel more like a parent correcting your son or daughters essay paper then a good time to pass the hour is a big NO for me. The story is a typical Chinese novel, Doesn't take long to figure that out. Though the update is frequent enough to keep most people despite the badly written grammar but for me it is not. Now i am not sure how much it cost to get a grammar specialist to help rewrite your novel. But whatever it cost could surely be affordable now that webnovels pays you with a contract.

While I star rated this a 4 I think the quality of the story is at best 3.5. The story starts off with a mortal with immense cultivation potential living on a world where cultivation is almost impossible. A master from the Divine Plane comes down to his world and watches over him for 400 years and gives him a cultivation technique that can be used to refine his body by killing others. After 400 years the main character is almost dead a second master comes and the two master pity him being born on a low plane. The masters use their cultivation resources and together send him to a world where he can cultivate and use a forbidden technique to reverse his age to 12. The masters also impart numerous divine techniques and items that will allow him to easily cultivate to the Divine Plane and meet them again. Now on to my thoughts of the story. Overall, the story is interesting as you follow his path to get stronger while avoiding cliches. But, the story has many drawbacks that may disinterest you from reading further into the story. 1. Lack of dialogue: dialogue is scarce in the novel and on many occasions this has left the main character and the people he interacts with have no special characteristics or development. 2. Romance: This is a harem novel and up to chapter 151 so far he has 4 partners and a 5th one is hinted as one of his masters has a granddaughter we will meet in the future. Nothing wrong right? The problem lies in the authors complete avoidance of romantic development that makes you care about his wives . They are just thrown together without any explanation an old you are left to fill in the blanks. Also, as said previously, the lack of dialogue leaves all intamancy for you to make up on your own. (Notice: sex scenes are kept at 1-2 sentences so keep your pants on) 3: After the first few chapter with an introduction that left me thinking that the story would be a 1 in 100 novel I was met with disappointment. While unique in it's own right, the writing style is boring and without life. It follows the same pattern for every chapter. (This happened--->how it happened--->why it happened---->random long info dumo---->mc reaction) 4: fight scenes aren't well described and are anti-climactic 5:There is no perspective of the main character so we have no way to connect with him and have a deeper enjoyment. And the format is monotone and systematic. (It gets boring after a bit) Now that I have put that out, if you are still with me, I will say the highlights of the story. The thing that kept me with this and is keeping me here is the world building. I'd you make it through the explanations and other things, you'll find yourself with a well described system of cultivation and profound understanding of the worlds he visits and how The different planes, creatures, and factions interact. It is easy to understand his power level compared to others and what drives the factions and people he meets to do what they do. Whether this story will interest you is up to you to decide. I think that as long as you preserver through the first 30 or so chapters you will enjoy the story more and come to like it. Thank you for reading this review!!!!!🤪😁👍