Ending is rushed, stretched too long in unnecessary places, most of the readers skipped 200-300 chapters but world building is good. Romance was good, Mc isn't petty or too overpowered. overall good.
Not bad. Many innovated and non-canon events, the only problem is that the words "I love you" that come out of the protagonist's lips don't seem to have much weight.
idk if you know this. but This work can be found on faloo. if you do know, did you upload it there?if not, then well I can basically say that the one on faloo is literally a copy of this, translated in Chinese.
Isn't she the girl from Yosuga no Sora? I don't know what I think about the emojis in the text or the Japanese names in an English novel. But it was easy to read nonetheless. Sorry if you are actually Japanese though xD
Aku baca novel ini di web lain. Hehe maaf ya.Apakah Ini buatan kamu ?.
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It's a very good novel although it was a bit boring and long in the world of ero penguins and the holy grail, aside from those stories I enjoyed them very much
it's an decent read for me 😸 unlike some story's that didn't last long enough with an decent storyline at least with an good enough ending for me.it took me an really long time to even understand and finish the story even with the 2X audio speed almost non-stop.and it's actually pretty great story for me because I can just create and rewrite and add something to the story inside my head because my creativity is to much which made it really enjoyable image in my mind.
The fanfic start out pretty decent, The character mostly act according to what is expected from their anime.
However this story is a copy and paraphrasing of other very identical story from qidian.
The worse part is this writer add filler story in, and this make the story way worse.
this is because the writer keep adding more and more anime in, and change the MC personality so much that he become a topical Chinese trash mc that play around with women without considering their feeling.
from earlier chapter, when the MC go to other world, he is very considerate but later on, he keep seducing one women after another.
and the writer keep those women in their world so he can continue to copy the original fanfic without adding much stuff after he make the mc get more women.
They also change the mc backstory as well, messing up the story so much it become unbearable.
In the earlier chapter, despite getting women, mc said, he won't treat those girl as collectable, but he keep collecting more women anyway.
This is the worse kind of harem story with the logic that all female follow the strong even if they are interested in some else before, and more than willing to just be a play thing for the strong.
the writer don't even add some development for female character, just copy everything from the origin anime and replace their mc with his own. So when his mc travel to different world, he just replace their mc with himself, and go with the original plotline without any change.
and the chat group member become useless since the writer keep adding filler, so they too lazy to add chatgroup member in those filler making the MC so everything by himself, or just include the female member when they what to add them into mc harem.
In the end the writer make almost every women in this story part of the mc harem.
I won't even call them an author, because they only written down a plot from other anime with no creativity and little change to the original story themselves. They don't even include the anime name in the plot they written, and still make the mc "predict" the plot himself.
And even the concept, and being a sis-con in the title is a copy from other fanfic work of other.
Main character is a simp who gets laid, his filter of helping people is "women". He feels threatened by any other protagonist who has a harem and steals pretty much all their women. He will say " I love you" to anyone who is beautiful enough and then act like he has some bottom lines. Story gets a cringe at every proposal (there are a lot of them) and as realistic as wuxia novels when facing a harem protagonist. World background is good but when it comes to reward it's hard to figure out either he is lucky or not, i read upto 2000 chapter (skipped around 700-800 chapters) because that's how much I could handle this stupid M.C. Conclusion - it's an ok timepass.
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Bland character development, collect women and forget most of them. Pretty bad grammar. Basically like most Chinese novels, pump out fast, any potholes, developments and inconsistency are all over the place. As what most of the comments here says, typical akkikan story.
As of chapter 1800, it gets progressively worse, and the fact that the author says, hey, grammar sucks. THEN WHY HAVEN'T YOU IMPROVED ON IT AFTER 1800 CHAPTERS. At least those Chinese novels had little to no grammar issues in their native tongue, yours on the other hand, takes the cake. Bad story, bad grammar, just a wish fulfillment novel.
es una historia larga pero fácil de entender, si te gustan los fics de harem te lo recomiendo ya que tiene un buen desarrollo de los personajes y de la trama, un final muy bueno.
pdt: te amo Aki, sigue haciendo buenas historias.
Dao_leader