It could have been not too bad, but it is trash.
Not only the MC rapes his sister, she actually enjoys it? What is your problem, author?
The "story" (or what it is for the author) is so rushed that it makes little to no sense. It's really a shame.
Let's be honest you already know about tags. And yes leave your hope about plot, character logic and adecvate s*x (erotic) writing. But if need some good laugh and cringe there they're.
Awesome Story I love the incest and this is the best novel I have ever read so far
I want to see how the relationship between shido and her mom goes. Please make it awesome detailed refreshing
How will he encounter Ellen Zern
This **** is trash Mc wanna hide his personality when The previous Mc already forgot his memory everyone knows this whats the point in hiding it an then you got him hiding that he could do magic for no reason at all an then another turn off is wanting to make a portal to bring men to that world so dumb such a beta MC thats retarded so dumb most the time its just complaints about dumb stuff how to satisfy the world of woman like who cares you just woke up an now wanna take the frustrations of all woman pullin a naruto GARBAGE
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Author is often unassuming but which reader knew author's prowess in selecting and spinning magnetic words into fantastic chapters making up this oh-so-delicious tale as entitled. Thanks so much for such a delectable story. Expressions and mechanical accuracy have room for improvement to further enhance the vivid imagination of the tale.
Author is often unassuming but which reader knew author's prowess in selecting and spinning magnetic words into fantastic chapters making up this oh-so-delicious tale as entitled. Thanks so much for such a delectable story. Expressions and mechanical accuracy have room for improvement to further enhance the vivid imagination of the tale.
Author is often unassuming but which reader knew author's prowess in selecting and spinning magnetic words into fantastic chapters making up this oh-so-delicious tale as entitled. Thanks so much for such a delectable story. Expressions and mechanical accuracy have room for improvement to further enhance the vivid imagination of the tale.
Please stop the incessant rambling if inner thoughts. It greatly detracts from the flow of the story. Also, if you need help with your writing and details or just have general questions then please feel free to ask. I am more then happy to help
Author is often unassuming but which reader knew author's prowess in selecting and spinning magnetic words into fantastic chapters making up this oh-so-delicious tale as entitled. Thanks so much for such a delectable story. Expressions and mechanical accuracy have room for improvement to further enhance the vivid imagination of the tale.
I really like this novel, but friend, I ask you to upload it more often is like sometimes I get up in the morning wondering what will happen to Shiyuky? !!!! Your novel is very good, I mean how with one thing but I ask you a little more history, I mean like when you see high school dxd ....
Author is often unassuming but which reader knew author's prowess in selecting and spinning magnetic words into fantastic chapters making up this oh-so-delicious tale as entitled. Thanks so much for such a delectable story. Expressions and mechanical accuracy have room for improvement to further enhance the vivid imagination of the tale.
Great novel love everything about it ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
For those who enjoy the concept of "Incest"/forbidden love & fantasy desire then this is for you.
While Incest is this Story greatest factor it also possess Mystery & world building within.
Do remember that this type of story is purely fantasy & does not mean the author nor the readers accept or support incest in reality & Society. pls do not judge by such logic(don't be such a narrow minded moron)... This story is pure fictional story only & does not reflect IRL.
So all I can say is give it a try read atleast 10 chapter then you can decide.
And if you dislike such story them shut up & don't bother reviewing & giving comments of hate.
This novel ain't dropped yet right?
Good story and development ,.. I'm still waiting for update..
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Good work job well done.. I started reading it only just now but author is really have writing sense.. it's not complete nonsense... It does have some plotline.. I found it interesting
Good story good character's, world building is a bit fast paced and chapter could use a once over for spelling, all in all well done, keep up the good work.
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No more chapters?
an amazing job this novel is awesome it's such an enjoyment and great work from the author for releasing this i can't thank you enough hope that you keep going
Petrut