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Loeri
This has one of my favorite characters on webnovel. Ah Chun is such an interesting combination of adorable cuteness and murderous destruction. The plot twists are great, the world building is excellent, the character interactions walk a fine line between honoring the caricatures most cultivation novels have and realistic people.
To cover the two categories I couldn't in good faith give five stars... The writing quality beats out a large majority of novels here, though a bit more editing would catch the three or four minor errors in each chapter. Not enough to detract from the reading, but often enough to lose a star. The other issue is the release rate, technically I should probably give a full five stars because Mr. Invayne does post the promised amount weekly, but there isn't a set schedule to it.
Also, Mr. Invayne is working on four novels actively and divides his time based on popularity, and my poor, sweet, adorable, loli just isn't as popular as his others. So read this novel and vote for it so I get more chapters a week!
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Blondtyg
Great flow canβ wait for next book in the series. [img=recommend][img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=faceslap] great job author. A++++++++++++++++++
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Zukigi
As all tales, there's some things to find flaws, but the story is worth the ride, it's a book that i recomend just as i do the rest of the author's books.
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AlphaFactor1
I love the novel and I feel it deserves a five out of five. I have only read up to 117 but so far itβs a great novel and I canβt wait to finish it!
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Love this book and imediatly got hooked. Is a must read!
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Sayuu_666
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boxessssss
yes it's just that f***ing good
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YuzuMien
Finally I found a cultivation novel that has a female main character, she is kinda lucky and her advancement is super OP. I suppose that's why the cover of this novel is a kid with blood because she is very strong as a kid all ready. I thank the author for satisfying me as a female reader that loves cultivation novels ang power up [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
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suggest_a_name
i suggest that you guys dont read it your going to get disappointed bc she gets a total personality change at chapter 90.
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Sayuu_666
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Eve_Roe
Was really exciting and looked forward to it first, however the author introduced a sh*tty ml and main love interest so dropped it, everything else was really well done though.
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Luna10
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Daoist188811
I am still reading chapter 85 and the plot is interesting.
How could you describe this novel? above average . FL is one of the best protagonists I have ever met on Webnovel. And I'm enjoying the relationship between FL and ML.
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Plame201
Ich muss ehrlich sagen das ich den Hut ziehen vor den drei Geschichten die in eine Geschichte fΓΌhrt. Ah Chun: Aufstieg in den Himmel, Full Dive: Ewige Phantasie und Phantasia: Der Prinzessin Knight sind als Einzel Geschichten schon sau gut doch wenn man den waren Welt Hintergrund sieht man was fΓΌr eine Arbeit dahinter steckt. Ich hoffe auf weitere Kapital um zu sehen wie es weiter geht. Danke an den Autor fΓΌr die Geschichten.
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Chris_Ughanze
I really love this book but all of a sudden, you stopped updating. I really like it and I wish it will be updated. The characters are superb. But there's a confusion at the end. In the new dimension, she never met Mei liling so how did Mei liling recognize her. Does it mean that she was transported to that dimension. Then does that mean that immortal Xiao did not deceive her. Overall , I love the book. See ya!
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dakencia_sejour
I love this story a lot. it's now my number one favorite book but I wanted to download it and I'm kinda new and wanted to ask after you download the story what do you do next
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IReadThings
I enjoy reading this, good development and I love characters that donβt care about killing. Very few typos and grammar mistakes. Spend a while binging it and had fun.
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BattleTracs
Great read. character development is fantastic and I love the power scaling! Humor is on point which makes me love the book that much more. Highly recommended!
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kumvs
sincerely request is update regularly...
other than that everything is 5* rating no doubt in that ... keep going dear author[img=update]
good day...
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Luna10
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AuralieAltham
I droves this novel until the author decided to male her straight. They were obviously going for a yuri novel but didnβt. All in all I was really disappointed. The turn around on who she likes was really fast too. That just wouldnβt happen in real life.
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Mark_Anthony_1
This is such a great story! It is fun to read and very interesting. However, there is a major flaw (in my opinion). When the mc gets to the first sect, she meets another little girl who falls in love with her. The mc reciprocates the feelings a little, and her mother gives her okay if things develop between them. Very soon after this the ml is introduced and decides he is going to marry the mc. I did not read past chapter 70, so I am not sure how the story ends, but, by that point in the story, the mc had decided to pursue the ml. Introducing a yuri love interest that was super cute and enjoyable only to throw it in the trash immediately afterward and replace it with a traditional overbearing and arrogant ml love interest was too much for me. It is such a shame because, other than that, this story was right up my alley...
As I said before, I did not finish this story, so things may have corrected themselves. I did skim some of the later chapters, and it seems like she either loses both of them or sticks with the ml. Either scenario is enough to make me leave this story.
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BlackStarMage
This story started out pretty good, however, the mc is basically switched for a different one at the 99 lives samsara thing, and even worse once ah chun goes back to help the immortal that gives her the dreamscape ability, she basically restarts from nothing with a different body. And with none of the bloodlines or understandings she had in her 'past life'. Honestly, you might as well just start reading from that point on as it will save you the frustration of literally everything Ah Chun has worked for disappearing. And I can understand her cultivation disappearing, but for her bloodline, her Dao's (which are supposed to just be understanding, and she didn't lose any memory's) and both her cultivation and her cultivation technique, and her spiritual roots. It might as well be an entirely different novel from that point on, with mc's that have the same name and personality. Though the story up to that point is great.
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