Very cute and meaningful book. Not only are the chapters worded nicely, the words also make you think of yourself in reality and inspires you - just like BTS has with their songs.
It's a cute story..first you will think it's a school or college story but after sometime it is just too cute π₯°π₯° so give it a try .u won't regret
No hard fellings man, this kind of stuff should have its own category or go back to wattpad. I dont want webnovel fanfic category being plagued with this. Not any of you guys fault tho, the way webnovel is organized is pisspoor. :(
Whenever I see the chapter names I just got excited and
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LOVELY STORY!! Very nicely written and like the plot, thanks for sharing your wonderful words with us πππππ keep up he good work, looking forward to finishing it!
Looking forward to it. Amazing story. Creative writing. Keep up the good work. Can I post a review in another language other than English? π love it π
Everything related to BTS attracts me π A simple ARMY. I see BTS and I click π the story is so well written that at times it may seem real though it is not and that's why I really want to applause this writer. It's really a good one. I hope you also write fiction on our BTS' other members
Good story. Nice plot. Love the characters. Keep up the good work. And keep making new stories. Awesome job. Excited to more of your works. Fighting!! β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
My namjoon
Mr President
Love you so much...
Your smile
Your dimple.. πππππππππππππππππππππππππππbest leader
Love u
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I just loved your story ..namjoon is indeed a great leader and also a best lover..i loved ur description and namjoon character design ..keep it uo. Ur a gud writer ..thanks for ur amazing story ARMY !!!
I'm not a fan of fanfics, neither of BTS but this got me hooked. I suddenly find myself anxious and anticipating. The writing is Lucid and at the same time elegant.
This seems to be a pretty interesting interpretation of the Love Yourself concept! The writing is great as is the character development. What is commendable is that the writer has tried to stay as true to the actual personalities of Bangtan as possible ππ
This story is extremely well-written! I've been voting for you since day 1 π Hope more and more people read it and vote for you since this truly adheres to the message of 'Love Yourself'! π
This is so cute!!! Namjoon is a literal muffin in this story! He honestly would make the best boyfriend, smart, caring, polite, and sensitive. I donβt understand how he could even have an ex girlfriend! Girl were you blind when you split up?! XβD But seeing their interactions now is funny.
What can I say other then this is beautiful?
Your words flow wonderfully. The emotions, the characters; they all feel so real. Kudos to you for that.
Little to no grammatical mistakes, and the dialogue is well thought out of. Good usage of Korean tags for names(personally, I'm not too fond on using romanized Korean for certain things. it ends up being distracting. You don't see other novels with random pinyin scattered throughout, no?).
Each character has their own quirks and behavior. They come to life. Namjoonie is as amazing as ever(the only president we need), and I feel like you portrayed him very well.
Foreshadowing is there, and character motives and possible goals have been stated/shown.
One thing I recommend is using more descriptions. Although, I can't say much myself. I feel like I use too much ;-;
But descriptions aren't always of places. Describe what your character's senses are sensing. The rush of adrenaline, the pounding of feet on pavement.
The silent(sometimes, not so silent)******* of two individuals who have a complicated history.
I'm glad a novel like yours is here on Webnovel. Good luck, and continue writing!
recommend can see why this make it to top 10 for competition
Really interesting in my opinion
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Iβm a girl too n my heart skips when ever I see n hear BTS itβs a good event helping us getting one step closer to them. Keep going author. All the best.
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It's cute and funny. I read this curled up in bed. I shared with my cousin and she thought it was great. I've read it one hundred times and still wonder what's coming next. You nice keep going!
It's well written and I like the development of the characters, it's a well though out fanfiction. It's not an 'out there' theme or concept but it fits well with the audience. It's something that many can read and enjoy. Overall, I'd recommend for others to read it even if they're not a bts fan.
It's nice to see a story based on The hyung line.Most of the stories are on The maknaeMaknaeππππππππ
All the best.
ARMY Hwaiting~~~~~
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