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CosmoLuz
this dropped???????````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Crook_Shank
Very bad grammer and spelling. Cannot understand most words. Its even worse than a machine translation sometimes. Brain hurts reading it after 5chapters.
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richy_ket
Cant stand bad grammar. I dont mind shit spelling but omg, this novel gets on my nerves. I will not reccommend this novel. Author cant tell between male and female, dialog is short and uneventfull. Would rather shave my toe-nails off then read another chapter.
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Lord_Beliall
На самом деле, прекрасное произведение. Достаточно много контента от автора и сами песонажи очень понравились. Хотя и видел 1 раз, но все еще вновинку видеть MC в роли дозорного, что добавляет интереса. А так всем советую, просто кайф
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Greedl
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Aluco_
Super intersant et original bonne utilisation du monde de base et une utilisée de même anga original dans l’histoire les personnages secondairest sont aussi super bien utilisés
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Donworry
If you find a new (better) translator and updated more it would be 5 stars.
(I mean seriously it's pretty hard to mess up English like this unless you're using Google translate)
(Of course these are just suggestions, no need to listen to me)
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Ifan_Widodo
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Snapdragon87
English is not your first language do I can't say anything about the bad crammed and crapy translation but it doesn't make it any less than a fantastic story. So keep it up. Your doing great!!!😉👏👍👌❤💗😊
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Rabin_Subedi
Fuck this the AUTHOR doesn't know where to use he,she,him,her. It's like reading gender blender. Imagine LEMON with this grammar. He put his dick inside him or her dick was too big to fit inside him. I dropped this after 16 chapter this is ****.
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AppleBiscuit
I really like this novel. The only little problem it has is the Grammer and the release for new chapters are slow. Please continue the story I really enjoy it 😁
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VastoHeaven
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Overall it's a good novel yep
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Ifan_Widodo
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RADRIPPER
The story is almost unreadable.Hard to keep up with whats going on due to grammar but thats fine since you should expect that in most of these fanfic...The real issue is that there is no plot and nothing in the story seems to matter. All the mc does is study and train(like almost every chapter is dedicated to the grind) but the bad part is that the grind doesnt matter!! The author both wants and doesnt want an op character at the same time and it shows...the mc is super talented and trains all the time but makes 0 actual progress(at one point he is getting far along in his haki training but then a few chapters later is JUST starting to learn haki...huh?)..had hopes that at least the harem will be good but nope he's the cliched dense protagonist that cant tell a girl likes him and has to act baffled...example the protagonist was obsessed with one piece and watched the episodes, so when he meets hancock(who was randomly taking a bathe in the marine base without caution) procedes to do what Luffy did and said to her to get her to fall for him but then he's completely baffled when she does...and the relationships dont go anywhere its just "mc meets girl, they develop a crush on each other....somehow take a bathe together...then separates)
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Alarcon_Byron
Verry good novel 👏📖👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👍👍👍👌👏👏👌👏👏👍👌👏👏👌👏👍👌👏👏👌
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Medalha
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Captain_Deadpool
The story is all wrong. But since its a fan-fic its ok....exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp.exp
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Prachathip_PaLam
I'm waiting for your update 😁
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Rouge_Prince1738
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1day
You must read thise 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍⭐👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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jacknumb
Story is really good to have mc as a marine im looking forward to the development of mc when conflict between pirates and marines arise what will he chooses but it have a lot of grama mistakes that need an improvement that is how the writer use He She Him Her in wrong position
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Roarrrrr
Congratulations 🎊 for coming back..... 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎
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DankPotato
I like it thus far, despite the plethora of spelling errors and the GIANT paragraphs it's not terrible.
The grammatical errors within make it hard to read..
But, the promise of another fresh fanfic allows me to ignore it. Others advance with caution.
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eLPe_X
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EpsilonCarmesi
Come on old man, this is a fanfic. If you are only going to copy and paste the original story, I better see one piece from the beginning, since no matter how much you try, this would only be a copy, and you would not compare to the original
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Rainlink
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AaronTaichou
Has potential but the writting quality is too bad to read-!!!!+!!!!!!!!!!!!
Has potential but the writting quality is too bad to read-!!!!+!!!!!!!!!!!!
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DarkDaoist
author is a weeb who doesn't know jack **** about human biology and wanted an overpowered MC with cookie cutter background.
first of all this was written in some foreign language and translated to google and grammar checked with some software, there are random words all over the story and incorrect sentence formations.
he thinks babies don't need milk and have him eat some random things.
a new born who can understand people is not creepy in this novel.
author thinks a two year old baby can talk, behave themselves and also read at the same time and walk too.
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