Good read, would definitely recommend. Isnt too many chapters atm, but So far its enjoyable ! πππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Very erotic if you are the type of people who are usually viewed to be rigid and have no s.e.x life but would suddenly feel randy about a song which has no direct depiction about s.e.x in lyrics. I am, unfortunately. I get wet when I listen to Arctic Monkeys' Knee Socks. Fxxk. :(
relaxing and intriguing read. snippets of thoughts that make you wonder. i thought I'd read the first one then read the rest some other time but I couldn't stop. keep it up
A sound. The noise it makes proves not of the treble, but the potential music creation. The twisting and jumping notes on each page, continuously dance to its rythm, as if the whole world was a symphony.
I dare not say of what I would become, without such a sweet noice. Encompassed and yearning for more, I'm aware that the music must stop.
Anyway. I like poetry, and I'm happy that someone actually published some of it here. Especially here... There were a few mistakes, but I enjoyed it nevertheless. In this case I'm making an exception, and will not give you lower points due to releases. You deserve such score, even if you release 1ch a week.
So this is a compilation of poems, am I correct? So far the poems written in the book is good. Every poem that is written per chapter tells a story in detail. It is unique since most stories are written by prose or maybe I have not encountered such work of literature.
My opinions about the work is it is unique and mysterious. You have to analyze the meaning of the poem to get the gist of the story. It's a good read all in all.
I enjoy reading this novel.
It is:
β A compilation of poems about elements.
β Unique
β Deep
β Vivid
β Poetic
β Short but the meaning was conveyed.
Keep it up Author!
Wow! Just wow! You made poems for your novel, how enviable... I wish I could do the same, but I am not good with poetry...
Great novel, I have added this to my library!
The opening is well planned but shortly stated which could confuse a beginner reader but as it slowly developed the pace, the prose quality unfold to a next level. Haha..usually I am thick skinned about poetry but this author is really doing well to bring it alive, really, a new level of romance.βΊβΊβΊ
This is a really cool poem. It took me a long time to understand what each line meant because I'm not very familiar with this style.
My favourite line from the poems is this one:
"I was disused and fell in despair to the ground. Clattering in dejection. Unawares in grief, I slid into your embrace."
I like how there is a mix of short sentences and long sentences and even just single words. Poems can be really different from stories as you can be a lot more expressive and be creative with sentence structure.
I would like to say very good poems, please continue the good work.
Next chapter !!! Next chapter !!! Next chapter !!! Next chapter !!! Next chapter !!! Next chapter !!! Next chapter !!! Next chapter !!! Next chapter !!! Next chapter !!! Next chapter !!! Next chapter !!! Next chapter !!! Next chapter !!!
Wowπ
I love it!
Read up to chapter 4, and yeah it's cool.
It is an inspiring poem, I gues I could keep on writting song lyrics, if I keep going into itπππ
Keep up the good workπͺ
It will do well, am sureπ
Well poems!!!
I really like creative ones!! And your seems to fit in my mind. I would like to say a hob well done. Although the update stability is not good, I xam understand as you are writing poems!!
Really feels great how you depict the elements and their bonding. Keep up the work! I'll add this one in my library for a wonderful collection of proses.
At first, I thought it was romance, after reading through the first chapter I was like.. Damn!! Poems... It's my first time reading poems in a web novel... I don't usually read poems because I don't understand them π but I really do adore poets. I feel like they have some kind of magic power for them to write poems.
Good work, poetπ
Truly creative and keep up with the good work!ππ
I'm not someone who reads poems, but I appreciate people who can write them! Incredible English too!
POEMS? i like poems. they are very good for the mind. its rare to find poems here as everyone wants to write a story. i think you should update much more frequently. with time lots of people will notice this book.i am even considering bringing my poems to web novel. i hope that it ill go well. please keep writing who knows how many will get inspirations from here.
A gorgeous set of poetry that I really enjoyed reading. Despite the lack of planned updates I'm really looking forward to more and highly recommend it to other readers looking for something a little different.
This story does not have an update schedule. Mostly short chapters of focused words. Fantasy Romance. Elementals. Love in Variety. Please Read. Please Vote. Please Share.
The poet certainly has a way with words to write such beautiful prose.
It is definitely a pleasant surprise to read prose on this site.
I would recommend this work to the only friend I have that writes poetry as well as prose.
It was rare to find poems here in webnovel. So when i saw how the title of work was made of, thought it was some fantasy novel, however it was not. I'm not someone capable of judging this sort of genra so i'm just gonna leave a high rated review here, assuming that it will help attract people who can appreciate this piece art.
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