Reviews of Harry Potter: Library Of Heavens Magic Path(Closed)) by Chroniclemale - Webnovel

man this is a good fast paced book you could have done more or add more to the book it would be a great book well anyway nice going good job author 👍👍👍👍

pretty much perfect, only downside is the fast pace at the end, but i understand why it is nessecery.

absolutely condensed read but a fun no brainer read too.

suuper interesring, is a regret finish so fast all things ^^~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~ sssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssss

La verdad es una inspiración si voy a hacer un fanfic la verdad es que me gustó por la imaginación del autor espero que alguien tomé lo que hiciste de este fanfic y lo mejore o algo par leer 😎😁

Has a good storyline but found to be a little choppy. The grammar needs a little work but over all easy to follow. Seemed a little rushed near the end but still open ended for a continuation.

Library of Heaven's path is such a cool power. Unfortunately, before you enjoy it, you'll have to read through three unbearable chapters of Harry getting his inheritance at Gringotts. It was terrible. I can't even get past the third chapter. Just nonstop Lordship ex Machina.

,прикольно надеюсь автор не умер история крутая но конец плохой слишком быстрый Бббббббббббббббббббббббддддддддддддллллллллллллллллбдддддддддддддддддддддддддд

bloody briliant. wish someone can do such positive reformation for our world also.,...........................................................

I loved this story.I hope that the author has survived depression and stayed alive because of it would be a real waste of a very talented human being to Death too soon.

at first it seems like it's going to be a great story. we have the protagonist, he wakes up and we follow what he's doing. later on in the story it becomes akin to that of an itemized list. informative, yes. fun to read, not realy. over all if these 12 chapters were expanded to 50 chapters with the same plot points and more descriptive narration, then it would be a decent start.

This "author" is able to write in the style of "I went there and did it". This is where the abilities of the "author" end. This is not fan fiction or a FAIRY TALE - this is a banal draft. I was sorry to waste time on this, so catch 1 *

Love it

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Muy buena historia . Me hubiera gustado que durará más Podrías rehacerla haciendo los capítulos más largos O como un spion_off contando su vida en el colegio y en la universidad mágica .para después viajar por el mundo

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I am a fan of an OP Harry Potter so this was an easy and a fast read. Yes, the story is very fast paced as well since Harry took over the magical world by storm. Imagine, dragging the magical world to the 21st century by incorporating technology. This is a Harry that created several companies that covers pretty much several areas (e.g. medicine, news, architecture, computers, etc.) and has become a business tycoon. Don't expect anything about romance, because its non-existent.

This Story has me interested after i read the Titel. I find Library of Heavens Path LoHP absolute OP and was interested was the Author was making of this. The first and secon chapter was interesting but after it is gooing down really fast. The writing Quality is average 3 Stars Stability of Updates 3 Stars: Not enough chapters to really give a good answer normaly i would only give 1-2max. Down to fast. Story Development: 1Star then you have no Story, more of a rectical from his Achivment and what he was making. It was to fast and it was not logical Character: 1 Star What Design? World background: 2 Star For minimal Try The LoHP is OP but what you have writen is not posible. The Ability from LoHP is. 1: Scan Books 2. Find Flaws in all Books and what you scan 3. Absorbtion from knowlege with Golden Page 4. Make a better Version or/and flawless Technic, knowlege. But it can't make new knowlege that was never introduced. You have no knowlege what was posible with Technology to the Time from 1985-1990. That is the Timeframe from your story i was really hopefull but this sorry The LoHP is not Omniscient it know only so much how you

Tech-based story, mainly about advancement. Mc >>> high IQ Relationships>>> harem ( not explored just brief description) He is reallllllly rich in both money and knowledge!!! Enjoyed it very much ~

If just naming inventions without actual story is a good story... Then this one has to be the best there is. There is no real storytelling happening tough. People are psyched because on the surface of things this is a Harry Potter who gets **** done and is God level at everything before even hogwarts... The whole thing can be summerised as: merged soul with Harry absorbs all knowledge in the world and within a few months time lifts the entire world to a new golden age without social interaction besides moving in with the longbottoms and them freeing sirius... Ps. Dumbledore was evil but irrelevant to the lumb sum of inventions my omnipotent self put into the world to become filthy rich beyond the wealth I already had.

Up until the last chapter (12 - with the work begin marked as "complete,"), it was fast paced, but interesting. However, the last chapter was super rushed, made little logical sense at the end and contained a final "author's note" that intimated the writer was planning on ending their life (if they hadn't already). If you are sensitive to the mention of suicide, skip the AN ~and~ the final comments section! I hope for the author's sake that they didn't go through with anything detrimental and they come back to properly finish their story.

Harry Potter, 6-years old is accidentally killed by his uncle due to abuse. Now to fulfill Harry Potter's destiny, Harold Evans is chosen to fuse with Harry's remnant soul. The Library of Heavens Magic Path chooses the newly fused Harold James Potter as its host. Watch as he uses it to turn the world upside down. I love Harry and libraray and this story of both I advice everone but Unfortunatly it is droped! ):

The mc remakes the world pretty much. This writing is a waiste of time. There is no story just about changes mc does to the world. Very minor interaction with potter world people besides goblins. He pretty much takes all his future knowledge of muggle companies and buys them then upgrades tech then does the same in the magical world.

I would like to know, if and when this novel is going to be updated? I really like this novel so please answer me, i would even pay to read this... Hope to hear from you.

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I think this novel is great it might be a little fast for some people like how some Harry Potter novels make it longer like that one Harry Potter story which has like 84 or 85 chapters but hes still in his first year but after reading it for a while you will see how amazing of a novel it I'd and will it does go fast it does some character building and the author has a clear plan and he explains all his plans. I also think you should read and vote for te story.