Reviews of The Fallen Consort by ElleJaye - Webnovel

Its not a bad story nor is it a great one either. Overall I like reading it, though got to admit where I am reading have me a bit confused so I will read more chapters to understand it better. The story does have the standard trope where the FL is beyond beautiful, has her cheats, cultivation, extra powerful ML/s etc which sort of explains my rating because I have read this in several other stories no offense to the writer. I have yet to find out what makes this story special. My general opinion is that the story is okay and will be in my library for now but I'm not addicted to it. Wishing ElleJaye (author) all the best and keep it up.

Is this novel just an ML, love triangle or reverse harem? ..........................................................................................................

Personally, I love both the plot and the characters so far. The only thing I have an issue with is the grammar. There are multiple sentence fragments and issues with verb tense agreement. Most of the time, sentences are started the same way and have similar structures, so I find it a bit difficult to read and somewhat repetitive. It is most definitely not the worst I have seen, but it could be better. However, I am still pretty early in the story. Maybe it will improve?

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Part of review swap. The story start of dark, getting one hooked Into it. I'm curious as to what causes her nightmare, and it's nice that there's sky there for her. Story is going nice, I haven't read much but the premise seem one of a kind. Grammar is good too. Good luck author

At first I quite bored to read this...but after I dig more chapter it give me more mysteries story for me to explore..congratulations you trap me in this interesting world novel of your and thank you for let me in.

Helloo, this is a good story, keep doing the good work 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

WAH.this is so good. you did well author and there's lots of potential in this book. i already got inspiration too.please keep writing. i need to follow up and be entertained by you. i do hope you have an outline for the story that way you won't have a writer's block. but believe me for my own novel i've changed my outline 12 times because new ideas keep coming. overall well done author. some times one should pause for a little while get moreinspiration and then write.keep going.

BOY,i haven't read it yet but i see from the synopsis that this story is worth my read. i already added it to my library for later. please keep writing.this novel deserve much exposure

I had read only a few chapters, but I must say it is a well written story and the flow is good, it binds you and it is one of the stories in which you will spend much more time than you thought, the concept of cursed child is also good.keep up the good work.

I had to stop myself from reading to make this review or else I might get carried away~ The first chapter and synopsis definitely succeeded in hooking the reader’s interest into the story’s plot and characters. The stability of updates is frequent so 5 stars for this one! The flow of the story seems very promising as the scenes aren’t too fast nor too slow. Kudos to the author for the great book and hard work!

Omgoodness!!!! Loving this novel!!!!!! It’s one of my favorite right now. The character are funny and loveable, and the storyline is one of the best as far as I’ve read!!!!!!

Unlike other cultivation novel, this one is much lighter that I, this noob in cultivation world, could actually understand and enjoyed the plot. I have read until the auction house. FL is smart and very very beautiful. I'm not sure who the ML is. I have a guess at 2 males at this time, 1 older and 1 younger, but my guess is that both are the same person? I really like to storyline, as I said, very light yet at the same time, very detailed that you can quickly picture the it in your head. How she dress, or how she looks like, where they are, etc. I really want a pet bear too! Anyway, I will keep reading it, thanks for introducing me to this beautiful work!

Why wasn't I born with that curse? I'm ugly like a door, aff. My only criticism is about the many skip teams that you did well in the beginning, I understand that you wanted time to pass, but there were many, and there are some things between each one that you could have explored more. Other than that I loved it, the grammar is almost perfect and the story goes well, at least as far as I read.

I reading your book and add in my library, so i will readu so many novel and create a best writting skill, i ready your novel as for our writting skill😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀

Found this by coincidence while author recommended reading my story. Excellent, just excellent! Very interesting story for a woman who had been through a lot. Looking forward to the life of Yi Ling. I've just read few chapters of it and will keep it to my library. Recommended novel as the dialogues won't bore you out reading it. Characters are well portrayed that it makes the story very entertaining. Great flow of the story, creativity wise, no grammar lapses and great choice of words.

The story is unique. It instantly captured my attention from Chapter 1. How the lead was introduced, allows one to feel the pain with her. I also like the pacing. I don't like dragging novels so hope it remains the same. Though it's still early, I can tell this novel will go a long way. Keep up the good work, author.

As an author of fantasy fiction and a hungry reader as well, I got to read the first eight chapters, and I can confidently say this novel has a promising storyline. World background is good, maybe just a little more details. The FL is charming. She reminds me of snow-white since her beautiful face seems like the one giving her trouble. Author narration and writing is clean and easy to understand. Little grammatical errors (even I have those) overall, it’s a worthy novel to try. I’ll keep this in my library and read further. The only thing I felt that need improvement is the emotions of the characters as it didn’t reach me that much. Nevertheless, I like it. Keep it up author ellejaye! I had enjoyed reading it.

I actually really enjoyed reading this story. It's a bit dark in some parts, but some other parts are quite humorous. The character's main attributes are clarified right in the beginning, but I would say the only issue with that is a potential lack of development leading to rather static characters. All in all, thanks for sharing this story!

Interesting story with enough mystery revealed at the beginning. It makes you curious and want to read more to find out! Will definitely be reading more 🤣

Team King Jin here. ISTG he is way too interesting to ignore. I'm still reading it and I must say it is really good. Those looking for history and romance type novels, THIS IS A TREASURE TROVE. Don't ignore this gem

Read 26 chapters.. I can say that novel is pretty good till now. Story line is very interesting.. The characters development and the background is also good...it keeps you engrossed. I am going to continue reading it. Author..plz continue with the updates.. and do not leave the book in between.

A story truly capable of capturing one. The synopsis, although not very much detailed, is capable of interesting others, and the grammar used is decent too.

Okey I am on my 4th chapter and loving it so far. It’s different from the novel I’ve been reading like Arrogant CEOs, Billionaires, nice cars and big mansions. I just hope that chapters keep coming everyday and not keep us waiting. Please Author? Okey I’m going back to read. Have a nice day, yeah?

The grammar is all good. The characters development and the background is also good. Story development this far I like it. I am gonna give it a read.

Good novel so far, Plot is interesting and refreshing. Keep updating author! One of your readers here! Can't wait for updates! Give this novel a try! Kekeke. 💕💕💕🙌🙌🙌

Not bad for starters. So far, it does have a good plot. Keeps me on my toes, not your regular female lead. Team KING JIN ftw! 😍😍😍 Can I have Mu Xin instead? 😂