Chapter comments on the chapter Why Are You Smiling? of the book illicit relationship

Why does it feels like the quality of the novel rose from 80%+ to 200%+ when it's in the Ecchi scene?

Soon he will do the shake-shake-ah-ah thing with her

"SHAKE SHAKE Ah Ah" thing epicness at 100%

I like the progress The flow feels good Circumstances as they are, the progress is fun yet realistic. Move too quickly and the story becomes too śexually saturated and plot runs thin. Timing is everything.

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Its good to have a little tease

more ... please

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hahaha it's really awesome

Thanks for the chapter

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thx for the chap

Obrigado pelo capítulo 😁😍👌

Thanks

Thanks for the chapter

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Got me Sweating a bit 🥵

Thanks for the amazing chapters!

I agree i find this comment very hilarious!