Good book. It’s a true shame the webnovel devs have blocked this artful piece.
The only reasons this isn’t a 5/5 is because the writing has occasional small spelling mistakes. (Grammar and sentence structure flow could also be improved here too.) Also, some arcs lose their sense of self while others are rushed a bit. Don’t get me wrong, though. There are plenty of great arcs here too. Just nitpicking a little.
this is EPIC ART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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THIS IS EPIC ART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Una pregunta con respecto al comentario del señor autor en el capitulo 749
¿Entonces esto significa que el proximo mundo es DC?
Porque me encantaria un trio de JINX and RAVEN. O SUPERGIL,POWER GIL y STARFIRE
this is art!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Such a great novel really like the system and how it's build. He has problems and not everything goes like planned. I think this novel has great character development and I like the flow of the stroy. Keep up the daily uploads, love it👍
Mind blowing , smut with some good character development is the best .... keep it up..........................,........... ................................... ..........
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can you send me a list of the worlds that he visted.......................................,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,., ,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,., , , ,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.
Señor autor
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