Reviews of Gacha Sovereign by Fixten - Webnovel

Transported to Another World? Cultivation World? A Modern World? How about mixing all of them? From countless planet in the Universe, Each planet has its own technology, culture, and civilization. There are many plot twists mixed inside where the usual 'Another World' actually holds more mystery. (Writing Quality): I'm not a native English speaker, and revision is under progress. There should be some mistakes left, but it shouldn't be that much. And there should be some cliches that presented in a bad way. It is also under revision. Although I can't completely erase that part cause it might affect the later story. I am rewriting it, so it can at least be presented in a better way. Unfortunately, the revision speed is rather slow since I need to make the new chapter as well. (Stability of Updates): 1 ch/day. But it could be 2 ch/day at weekends or holidays depending on how much time I have on that day. (Story Development): 'This is subjective'. I'm doing my best to present a good story, but it depends on your own preference too. One might say good, and one might say bad. Please don't force your ideal/preferences on this story, if you want the MC this way or the MC that way, you can try to write your own story. All in all, suggestions for a better story would be appreciated. (Character Design): MC has a deep-seated inferiority complex that built up for several years. It will be hard to get rid of all of that, logically. It wasn't something that you can say 'I want to change', and you will change 180 degrees. It will be a slow development of Characters and Personalities. (World Background): The story takes place in multiple world; most of the settings are fictional. If the world background is lacking some details, please do tell me 'which one' and 'what it is' so I can add a little tweaking in that part to make a better world. (Additional Comments): Many good scenes filled my mind that I can't help to write and share it with you all. Although, I know myself wasn't a great writer. I need all possible feedback to learn and improve. For you and me. Disclaimer: I will no longer respond to mean comments and reviews. All opinions are subjective. But, please, be gentle with any strong opinions. It's easy to say something behind a screen, but it can stick with people. Thank you, and I hope you enjoy my novel.

for real it has 1200+ chapters? I mean I read it for thr 15min FP and that was arduous. maybe it's the first few chapters that lack of sense that makes it hard to read or that it's weak narrative, or broken logic that makes it hard. I just know that that mc killed 2 living beings for no reason(mc had never killed before by the by) and got 1 gacha ticket. then some generic attempt at oh I vomited, elevated blood rate & irratic heart rate but I need to focus on my status screen, never mind the blood and gore around as, again MC KILLED 2 BEINGS FOR NO REASON. psycho

The writing quality is mediocre, the character development is non existent, the whole plot/story is full of cliche. Overall a very boring novel

I'm not into isekai + cultivation.

An mc with a trauma? no thanks those repetitive cn is better

ha.... annoying,i am ok with slow development of mc character.But to much cliches are used.Its not my type of novel.So droping it.

only two things I need to know about sword god successor and Dean Marco

I'd recommend skipping to "God of Trickster" from the same author but so much better. This book is like an experimental one, leveling, skill set, fighting style keep changing from RPG to eastern fighting to etc. as author testing new idea. Characters are very bland and simple mind. Gacha system is too overpowered s that the thrill is very low.

Waiting on the next storyline. One of my favorite books. Writing this after my third read through.

I'm going to keep it short, naive mc who have nearly no self respect or dignity, and common sense is no where to be seen, I get that the author is saying "slow pace" common sense and self respect should not need 100 chapters to develop, I know that he is a stupid loser and all, you literally have a mc who readers hate most.

this book is awesome, it is not like where clivhes are normal but mc just trat those clivhes as accidents, i mean this novel is best and story is truely fantastic, i gotta say to author "YOU sir did the job well done" I TRULY LOVED READING THIS BOOK

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If you want a sexist world, an indecisive and bipolar main character, and useless leaches for main female characters, this is the story for you. It comes with poor grammar, contradicting information, and poor character building. 🤩👍🏻

This novel could've been so much better. The characters all had unique personalities and frankly, I enjoyed the first 500 chapters. The mc started out terribly but there was a reason for this, And eventually he managed to break out of his shell and grow as a person. BUT. #1). Why is the mc trying so hard to differentiate between the current him and him from his previous life? I mean, it's fine if he wants to do that, but EVERYTHING he has is literally from his previous life. He accepted his women from his previous life. He accepted the help of the 'system' which is also a woman from his previous life. He accepts and uses the inheritance that he left for himself from his previous life. Yet everytime his previous life is mentioned, or he thinks about it he goes back to acting like the same indecisive wuss he was at the start of the novel. He keeps saying "I am me, and he is him" he never thinks about it that both are him. Frankly I hate this part of the mc. If he doesn't want to accept that he's someone reincarnated, then why accept the boons that come with it? He literally achieved nothing on his own, everything he achieved throughout the novel was handed to him by the 'system'. He kept getting the benefits of his previous life and accepting them, but trying hard to not accept anything about his previous life. What makes it worse is that he wasn't actually a bad person in his previous life, so acknowledging the fact that he was reincarnated wouldn't harm him. It's not like he's going to tell the whole world that he's reincarnated. 2). At about chapter 500 it became boring and repetitive. It went like this(reach a high level for his current area, move to an area with stronger people, create a secret base, send the others to go kill monsters to level up, he cultivates, reaches a high enough level, somehow has some issue that he needs to handle, so they scheme till it's time to handle it, they handle it then go back to hiding). Just rinse and repeat. 3). Even with all his character development, the mc was still not very enjoyable to read, even excluding my first reason up above. Watching the mc work hard and all that, yeah it wasn't bad. The problem though was the author tried too hard to make the mc seem like someone gentle and loving. To the point where the dynamic between 'ruthless and loving mc' was destroyed. With the mc, when he's showing his gentle side, he literally acted like a wuss, always crying over something. The author overdid that part IMO. The ruthless part was alright though. That was perfect.

You can tell this story is dog water just by seeing the insane amount of reviews calling it trash. Kinda embarrassing to be the author of this since it sucks so bad everyone says so. Truly pitiful

why do you keep repeating the same events over and over again........it foes like this ,someone challenges the mc ,mc wins by a landslide and so on

haven't read much but from what I read of the description It would have been more interesting if he got a system in the original world he came from and made them all regret what they did to him

Yeah, this is hot garbage. Maybe instead of telling us how the MC is weak at the start in your description of the novel, tell us what a p*$$y he is.

well-done. I really enjoyed the novel to be honest this is the strongest mc in all the novels I hv read ..... wonderful experience for me. keep up the good work I'm rooting for you🤞❤️

pretty ok, only read to 98. the english is a bit rough but not drop worthy. the characters have some decent moments but are pretty flat it might get better as there is like 1200 chapters. a bit sad that i cant seem to use coins on individial chapters. im not gonna spend 150-250 dollars to buy this whole book in one go. i dont spend that on hard copies of big name authors.

The story has a LOT of inconsistencies that would make me doubt if the author has object permanence to begin with.[img=faceslap] It would only be bearable if you shut down half of your brain or undergo a lobotomy.

MC has no character. there are useless conversations. He doesn't understand that he is throwing himself in pot of fire. sudden info dump. Basically not so good

I'm deep into this novel. About the Writing Quality, I'm English but I can read it pretty easy. Simple words, easy to understand I'm deep into this novel. About the Writing Quality, I'm English but I can read it pretty easy. Simple words, easy to understand

Improve your English writing skills. I can't really best describe this feeling but i will still say it. The story gets boring the more i read and it becomes a chore once i pass chapter 30. Please improve your overall story.

4 stars. A much higher review than i thought i would give. So, i read up to a part in sound Magician and find this. And it turns out, they have similar concepts but i like this better? Why? I dont know. Dont ask me. Writing quality. 4 stars Updating stability. 5 stars (as if can actually give something else for a completed novel) Story development. 3 stars. My comments explain enough Character design. 3 stars. Too sexist for my liking World background. 5 stars. Even if i dont like most of the people here, the world and its concept is nice.

Wow....this Mc is depressing asf, I really think I might suffer from depression just reading this! He has all the right tools, but not the right attitude

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