Please dont tell me you dropped!!! I wanna read moreeeeeeeeeeeeeee. I wanna see the interactions between the brother and sister after they find out the truth. Plsssssssssssssssssssssssss
why the novel stopped , I think it's a great novel . I hope the author won't drop the novel and return ππππππππππππππππππππππππ
I really enjoyed reading the novel, it was worthwhile looking forward to see more of it, I couldn't skip any of the chapters it was really amazing, keep up the good work
This book keeps getting better and better I canβt stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so Iβll be able to read it thank youππ
I realise I take a leap by being as brutally honest as I have been while writing my review of your story. I reckon, however, that every good writer is able to accept constructive criticism, and I deem you not to be the person to be dissuaded or even discouraged by the critique listed below. I would, after all, feel horrible were it not the case. Hence, without further ado:
The story has the potential to be immersive but it fails to completely grasp my attention as the rhythm is rather lacking and the characters appear to be flat, oversimplified and without dept. As a reader, I cannot relate with them and I fail to feel sympathetic or even bring myself to care for them or what happens to them.
Your grammar holds slight, dismissible mistakes and I cannot say they really affect the overall quality. Everybody makes these mistakes. Itβs human. I am certainly no exception and I find your grammar to have greatly improved in the most recent chapters.
I do appreciate the general enthusiasm and passion with which you tell your story. It shows in your work and in the keen way you write. It was one of the reasons that encouraged me to be entirely honest instead of being careful, for I know it takes more than some criticism to deter a passionate writer who loves what they do.
The writing quality is excellent, constant updates and great story telling. The author has great humor and you can certainly get a good laugh from this novel. I highly recommend to give this novel a try.
This was really fun to read, action packed and fast paced. The characters have great depth, and the dialogue is hilarious at the best of times.
Writing wise I was pleasantly surprised to see the author's mastery of grammar improve. In the beginning there were a few grammar issues but nothing major, and towards the end I honestly couldn't find any.
(I never look at punctuation since mine sucks... ^_^' )
Overall I enjoyed reading this due to the comedy and the plot :)
If I could only increase the maximum stars in rating this story, I could have had done it. HAHAHHAAHA. I'm not really into these types of stories but heck, the story got me hooked and I'll be here reading it continuously and silently.
As for the writing style, some lines are rather wordy that makes me gasp for breath the moment a period shows up, but that can be fixed in no time. In the author's will that is. By the way, thank you for recommending Grammarly HAHAHAHHAHHA
Damn it author, you're really good. This story got me hooked up. Please continue the good work author. I also wish I can meet you personally, teheeππ
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Shameless author here!! Going to give myself a 5 star 10th review to finally get the ratings up!!
Anyways, if you fellas are interested in a story of a boy crossdressing himself in order to perform his designated job as a protector of the daughter of the headmaster inside an All-Girls School, then give it a read hehehe.
That's not all, it also tackles the forces outside the MC's school life, where every main character and girl is relevant and has a freaking purpose and not just some normal 2-D character who comes in and go.
So that's about it. Give it a try and I'm pretty sure you may like it... hehehe.
First review hehehe kind of new here at Webnovel. Anyways...
Great job author. Love the work and I sincerely hope that you won't be quitting this anytime soon.
hentai? what the hell hahahahaha!!!
Can't wait to see how this story shall unfold. Gender-bender for the win!!!
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Cool story. The characters seemed interesting and the interactions are hilarious. Keep up the good work!!
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The characters and the plot itself is really very interesting...can't put it down after I started reading...waiting eagerly for the next updates....Just awesome.
Love u author ... U r amazing
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