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4.44

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lMonarchl
Don't let go of the romance please .......... .... .................................... ............................ ....... ....... ......... .. ...... ..
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Djabilong
This is equivalent of listening either to a politician or a winner of a beauty pageant - brain starts melting from the amount of conflicting information and constant breaking of the rules imposed by author, by author himself. First major problem is the protagonist who, I swear, must be a corpse possessed by several different people. Constantly switches between a normal weeb, a xianxia arrogant young master who magically enslaves and rapes women for fun, a shy japanese protag who blushes from a kiss to the cheek, a bastard plotting to cuck (and possibly kill) his own father, a hypocritical whiteknight who unironically condemns others for things that he himself done with glee (again, not even a deliberate play on his part - he seriously believes it in the heat of the moment), <...>. Majority of characters feel completely undeveloped, with such unimportant things like character development and world building thrown out the window in favor of breakneck speed of unexplained...things?...happening, with everything feeling like a really short one-sentense summary of three big books. "Hello, I'm a New Unexplained Character A from the original series. I'm instantly in love with you. Because reasons. I will be forgotten and never appear again after 2~3 chapters." There's no rhyme, reason or logic to be had. Economy is weird; apparently there's cultivation shoved in there somewhere that is never really addressed; somehow there's eight different types of dragon species (with another twenty elemental, unique, and titled subspecies) that kill millions even though this is modern day world and nobody ever seen a single dragon and doesn't suspect that supernatural world exists; apparently nobody gives a damn that a borderline skyscraper just *appears* overnight in the middle of a city suburb that only has 1~2 story tall buildings; <a thousand other things>. There's also a couple *alleged* things that I haven't encountered personally, but might as well give them a mention: author may or may not delete "bad" reviews (and from my knowledge of DT, he's not a person to randomly lie about such things happening). And while I admit to not reading up to that part, apparently there was world-hopping added unannounced for no reason somewhere down the line, making a big tonal shift to the narrative. Overall it feels like author is making up the story as it goes, which isn't a bad thing in itself, but only when you don't start breaking the rules you yourself made and pulling things out of thin air. *** Still, there's plenty of chapters to go by, and spelling/punctuation/grammar are readable (heck, I'd even call them stellar if compared to usual wn trash that hurts you physically just by reading it), so there's that.
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Everton_Mason
I didn't understand why the rating of this book is high. It basically looks like a superficial summary of something that could be good. The author is not concerned with adding depth, longer and more developed dialogues, personal thoughts of each character and his own traits that form his personality, there is no immersion in the story. In depth of text, it is no different from reading a medicine leaflet.
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Poseidon_God
Eu sou o exp de minha Revisão das Sagradas Escrituras. Webnovel é meu corpo, exp é meu sangue. Eu criei mais de mil críticas inúteis. Desconhecido para dormir, nem conhecido da realidade. Resisti a Cliff-Kun para criar muitas críticas. No entanto, essas mãos nunca terão nada. Então, enquanto eu oro ... Exp ilimitado funciona!
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jeanpierregerardo
more chapters. ....................................................................................................................................................................................
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TintedvCeo
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Poseidon_God
Eu sou o exp de minha Revisão das Sagradas Escrituras. Webnovel é meu corpo, exp é meu sangue. Eu criei mais de mil críticas inúteis. Desconhecido para dormir, nem conhecido da realidade. Resisti a Cliff-Kun para criar muitas críticas. No entanto, essas mãos nunca terão nada. Então, enquanto eu oro ... Exp ilimitado funciona!
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Nyxarias
Wow nice spam bots you got there Rudra_Roy and others nice. ohh and it apears that the Author deletes your Reviews. Then again it was a nice Fan-Fic till you destroyt it with his past and ****. Ps **** you all Spam bots.┌∩┐(ಠ_ಠ)┌∩┐
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Eom
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Eom

You made him random void god the you lose me and there is so much personalty issues and you take random NPC(don't know the names) in harem they don't even know each other first day school they come and said they love him and he accept WTF I mean if you have them then take the village girls that he raped too.beacuse if they f*ck other guys then that be NTR(well you understand)
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jeanpierregerardo
good. ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................
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BeautyfullGuy
stupid main hero character stupid author and stupid fan-fiction world all you write is stupid veryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryvery very stupid
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DaoistukNrUc
This story is amazing even though it is only a fanfic but the development of the characters and the theme is not predictable making this story more interesting.GOOD JOB
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Yuri_is_Ntr
Oh, wow. Deleting reviews? Huh. No there is only copy pasting. And ratings of 4,8 for this story? Are you serious?! .........................
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Omar_Yusuf
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Pokemaster5632
Don’t read this story it’s total crap. In the first chapters MC is a brute who rapes girls. And in the later chapters author just copied the entire plot idea of Endless Path: Infinite Cosmos. The author has of EPIC works really hard on his story and provides the readers with quality content so it’s hurtful to see someone just copy all his hard work. So in my opinion this novel is just copyright crap.
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Said_King
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as1804
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Author where are u???? Pls ypdate more more more more more more mkre more mkre more mkre more more more mkre more more mkre more more more m
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SioMino
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YutaKim
Interesting idea, testament fanfic is rare after all. There too much descriptions, thinking, musing style of writing (i dont care if you dont understand me). So this makes the story a little bland. Big harem types of story, like how big? The girls felt more like a pokemon rather than a human, a girl, and a woman. So this is the conclusion. This is a kinda want-to-be-serious-type-fanfic. But ended up as an wish fulfilment fanfic.
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PUJIT_FADTE_9415
HOPE THE AUTHOR WON'T DROP THIS NOVEL NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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GomuNShuritai
mooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee its best write longer chapters more details about surrounding and characters
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asciente_17
It's Cool I Guess .
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KuroganeOfBaothien
Does anyone know why there isn't two chapters a day anymore? There wasn't any chapter at all yesterday, what happened? I am a vivid reader, I don't mean to sound negative, I just can't wait to read more.
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KuroganeOfBaothien
I enjoy this book series, I can't wait for new chapters to be published.
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Raju_7690
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