Reviews of The Gadgetist by Scott_Crosswhite - Webnovel

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Author! Your story feels like it's an anime! The conversation is great-- it's interesting and it has a very good back-and-forth dynamic. The action and sheer ridiculousness and badassery is welcome and fun. The book is very, very fast-paced. With the action involved, the 6 chapters I read could easily be 10 or 12. Several concepts hammer at the reader in a single page: names, character actions, powers, conflicts. There are many cramped explanations-- not that it's bad, but the way presented can sometimes make it feel forced. The MC explains the extent of his abilities aloud as if he were responding to a curious reporter. The monotony of explanations sometimes cut into the action. There are many, many spelling and grammar errors: there vs they're, flour vs on the floor, preceded vs proceeded afterward, dour vs door you can open. The Author is also very bad at comma placement, as there are a plethora of many missing commas! Author, please review your chapters with a proofreader! Everything will be MUCH MORE polished once you do so! MC's thoughts are very interesting, very informative, and very honest-- but his thoughts are jumbled and full of double-takes, hesitation, and 'i guess'es. Overdoing the MC's confusion only confuses me, as the reader. I wish he were more confident! Closing, the book is an excellent, action-packed read, and a fun romp of informative violence and fantastical powers! Great job, Author!

Interesting story, clean writing and easy to understand. Their powers are intriguing... The fight scene is good too. So far so good keep it up author...👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

The updates may be slow but the quality of output however makes up for it. Clear language and easy to read descriptions which is good. Let me dissect what I have observed in the story so far. The main issue is that the story is too slow on updates. I can tell otherwise that the author is focusing more on quality than quantity which is good. In fact I have enjoyed the recent chapters the author made so far. Progress is good despite the update speed. Writing quality is good, not too flowery but it is clear. You can picture out easily the action scenes and everything the narrator wishes to describe. Story Development is also good, not to fast or slow. Character design is good but not perfect. World background is good as well... although the school thingy is just too overused. I will follow your story, it has potential and I guess I will be patient in waiting for more chapters.

As a writer myself, I can tell you that you are doing a good job. Your writing quality is of high standard, your characters fitted their roles, your storyline is developing nicely and your worldbuilding is on solid foundation. Though, not much chapters released as of me writing this review, it's developing to be a good book. 👍

I don't usually read novels with a modern background; however, I found it too interesting. The writing quality is great. The words and phrases don't get repeated so much, and thus it motivates you to keep up reading. Although there aren't so many chapters yet, I can still feel the characters and have a connection with them. I only gave stability of updates 4/5 since the number of chapters isn't much. A suggestion, the length of the chapters is a bit large. Why not split each chapter to more chapters with less length? Every 2k chapter can get 2 chapters with 1k. This way, readers won't get too bored reading a chapter, and there will also be more chapters for the novel. Incidentally, it's a good read, better than many other novels out here in WN. So I highly recommend it.

Lot's of good stuff here. The author feels like he has a really solid understanding of science and space in the way he describes how the magic system works and the fight scenes. The MC is both a badass and a bastard, and it would be super satisfying to see him slowly become a more socially acceptable person. Nonetheless, its fun watching him go around beating people up, speaking his mind and otherwise doing what I feel a lot of people want to but can't. Definitely give this a read if you want something that has a gritty real-world feeling to it.

When I started writing this it was just for the writing contest but I actually fell in love with the story I made and I think it tuned out really well.

I enjoyed the plot idea of this story. The character's abilities were interesting, and I'm left wondering how this story will play out due to the foreshadowing.