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Dretno
Could have been a great novel if not for the excessive explaining. The content per chapter is minute as majority is just the author explaining how the mc speaks, breathes, does stuff etc.
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Hagel_Hydra
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IAmACow
I'm only a few chapters in but I can already tell that I will enjoy this webnovel. Please continue updating and keep up the good work. :DDDDD
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Wanderingforworks
Initially i was enhoying the direction that this book was going in. Althos was constatnly developing powers and the multiverse of the story was interesting and diverse. I think the story truly fell for me when Althos kept doing good acts and shying away from violence and making his undead timid and weak. Then came Althosβs hypocrisy as a character as he quickly villainozed Morehammer as a tyrant when not many chapters ago he forced farmers into his worship with punjshments. For the scale of the multiverse and the abilities he has, he seems to want to keep from expanding from the solar system and expanding his swarm which is honestly frustrating. On top of that, it seems that he gets followers that worship him in an instant way too quickly like the demons. This is a broken story that I hope the author fixes by giving Althos a clear Alignmrnts, clear goals, expansion outisde his solar system, taking away his hypocrisy, not giving side characters one dimensional personalities and making them instantyl worship althos through one action, utilizing Althosβs pwers more and his various legions, and creating stronger enemies that actaully matter and making battles planets wide with many falling. I hope thag this sotry gets fixed as the befgining was quite interesting.
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Red_baron
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ImBadAtThis
All I can really say is... thing good brain nice feeling. me need moar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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CriticalReader
This is less a novel and more of a textbook, it's not impressive how much knowledge you convey when you can't do it in an interesting way
There is no plot, characters feel like robots and not people, world building is erratic.
**: I don't have patience to wait 20 to 30 chapters for something to happen
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cbquest
I want to start by saying kudos to the author. it seems you have many fans. With a lot of positive feedback from what I can tell.
so I don't really know how I feel about this one. I only made it to ch22 so far. I feel things are over detailed. Half of the chapters are just the "system" telling the mc his new abilities over domains/subdomains, spells, etc. It's just a flood of information, which makes it feel less like a story and more of a wikia page. but that could all be chalked up to my own personal taste in writing. Another issue I've felt iffy on was his alignment. honestly the first 20 or so chapters he doesn't feel like chaotic good. If anything he's along the lines of neutral good, maybe chaotic good. I've played years of pathfinder, and dnd 3.5/5e. With dm's who are pretty strict on alignment, and action correlation. but I thought hey start of the story maybe its building up. so I went through the comments, to see others view points on it. Seems like it does a total 180, The mc turns predominantly evil(based on the comments i read). then sugar coats it with some good actions.
so to summarize up my questions are:
1. As the chapters progress from 22 onward. does it focus more on the story. or will it continue with the annoying banter with the "system" and the high amount of explaining each and every level up, new skill etc.
2.does the mc actually align with chaotic neutral. an individualist, who is all about freedom, doesn't abide by laws etc. or does he flip back and forth of evil and good.
if I have some stuff wrong, or if things change please comment. I'm curious to see if its worth investing more time and votes.
quality of writing is good 4/5
story progresses at a snails pace in the beginning 1/5
character design is interesting, but I find the intelegent system aspect takes away from the story.(my own bias, I find it annoying) 3/5
your updates seem quite regular from looking at the times. 4/5
world background i found intriguing and what almost makes me want to stay 4/5
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Bored_Reader_
Fantastic story with thorough world making and realistic character design. The MC has depth to his character and actual motivation behind his actions. The overall plot development is slow but painstakingly extensive and detailed so there are little to no plotholes. The MC actually embodies what he is and is shown from his own perspective which really puts into perspective how different he is from humans and that he does not perceive things like humans Overall a great read.
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Kenringdomstorys
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ken_ringdomstory
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Sithis1987
Change the title to "The god of manipulation, lies and necromancy tries to appear good by healing people(sometimes) " and then this novel makes perfect sense. That's like 70% of the novel anyway. Oh yeah also add the tags planet destroyer, apocalypse bringer, ruler of undead and zerg the swarm - how empires of insects rule the world.
P.S the alignment of the mc is absurdly not balanced the story tries to make him appear neutral but he is definitely evil, at least that's how he appears to the readers. 70% of the story is spent on describing his evil deeds in detail from destroying planets, to manipulating, blackmailing, threatening others or indulging or promoting sin and corruption. but its cool cause "he now healed all living things in this world, so all the mayhem we red in detail the past 150 chapters is off set by that one line so we are back to balance baby." doesn't actually make the cut in keeping balance to the readers mind. Also the scene where children are run down by undead while fleeing on their lives on a planet that he obliterated all living things and turns everything into undead should not be presented to the readers and is not off set by him healing a goblins arm.
P.S.2 i like the world building and the system that has been presented but it seems the author wanted to make the mc kinda dark and edgy, a little bit more dark than a dark hero which is fine in general but not when you want to create an illusion of balance. The writing is really good and the presentation is really good as well, the grammar is excellent.
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Roi04
This book is finominal i just cant get enough of itππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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Slug2448
Hi everyone I started to read this yesterday not up to date but of the 50 some ch I have read I can in all confidence say that it is by far one of the best God-Mc storyβs out there now this story is not for every one but you should give it a try.
Some thing I would like though is that the Mc be more evil but that is personal preference more than anything
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PsyLoRD
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superuser
Synopsis: This is one of the better stories on this site. Althos is a God, which is the single most powerful entity in the Universe. (S)He/It starts out knowing the absolute basics (like how to speak), but not much more. That doesn't mean (s)he/it'll ever be able just snap a finger to achieve whatever goals (s)he/it sets for himself; he actively has to get things done and expand his/her/its power.
Writing Quality: Awesome. This is one of these rare works were you don't stumble upon mistakes of any kind very often. That includes spelling, grammar and inconsistencies.
Stability of Updates: About one longish chapter daily, but there is no fixed schedule or word count. There may be a day with two chapters, there may rarely be none for a day, and there is definitively no set time as of now. Also, there was an unannounced break of around a week recently due to Author having a life.
Story Development: It develops. At the beginning, Althos knows about nothing about the World, which obviously would not be fun for very long, so (s)he/it slowly discovers the world around in a (mostly) first-person narrative. Also, he'll get new powers every few chapters, making reaching his goals easier.
Character Design: Don't ask me about Character Design :'(. It's probably very good, but I'm not a judge here.
World Background: The world existed before Althos arrived. There is even a plot hinted at for the past of the world, and bits of the history are revealed in some bits and pieces.
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Zatara
I have been looking for novels like this from time to time, because I like the protagonist as god himself.
And although I read a lot of them, I can say for sure that this is a hidden gem amongst themπ
Short spoiler is that the protagonist is seemingly 'newborn', and although he speaks without problem, he can't quite understand the 'meaning' of it all. It's like a child asking to many questions π€£
So I can definitely recommend it in the short term, I hope to say the same in the long term π
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Re_start
Author! I have yet to read your story but I can already tell I will enjoy it! Make sure to add the God Protagonist tag to your story for more traction!
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Tennolord123
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chaosdreamfire
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ICARUS
Alright, first of all...this is high quality. Looking for interesting development? Check! Well-invented characters? Check! Slow-paced but action-packed? Check! How about the author's writing style? ONE BIG CHECK TO THAT!
I would highly recommend this novel! That's for sure!
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Daoisst_Alex
This book is a jewel and recommand it :) .....
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redmitte2x
This story is pretty amazing IMO. Or maybe that's just me being a video game fanatic myself hahaha.
Anyways, the story and the world are well-explained and I'm pleasantly surprise that there is little to no grammar error being found in this read.
The story may be slow but is definitely worth a read as it explores everything in a meticulous manner. From the MC's fleshed out perspective, the rules of the world, to the complex world building.
A highly recommend read, I beseech you all to give this book a chance.
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valiantxvillainous
First thingβs first, I just want to say this story is very well written. Not only does it have good grammar and spelling and whatnot but actual good characterization, realistic dialogue, and engaging prose. Kudos to that! I donβt know how many stories Iβve dropped because subpar writing and poor grammar were messing with my head too much.
Personally, Iβm not usually a big fan of first-person narration, as itβs more difficult in my opinion to capture the depth of a character, as it doesnβt leave the reader with much room to imagine for themselves. But the MC of this story is well fleshed out and has a depth about him the moment we begin reading the first few paragraphs. The system as well, is quirky and mysterious and captures our attention as well.
Details in this novel are painstakingly drawn out, everything is explained. The fundamentals of the worldβs laws are presented in a nice, organized manner. If youβre interested in complex world-building and meticulous details as well as logic, then I would highly recommend this title to you.
The plot does take a while to really take off. Youβre not jumping into a whirlwind of action right away and instead must discover the rules and boundaries along with the MC one little step at a time. It might take a bit of patience but the story is worthwhile.
All in all a great read, and if youβre already interested in this genre then I would say taking a look at this title is a must!
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_Neith_
Honestly I am completely baffled. The fact that this story hasn't taken off and made it to the top of the charts confuses me to no end. It's been a few weeks now that I've dedicated my time to reading this wonderful piece of literature. The past week of which I have given every single one of my power stones to thrust it up myself. And still it hovers at the bottom of the rankings despite it's perfection.
So now I'm obligated by my moral compass to try to rectify that in what little way I can. Making a dreaded review. You know the thing most try not to do because it takes too much time or that some just bs their way through. But getting to the story now I can truly say it is an overall great piece of work. Never have I truly been able to say with all my heart that a story is so deserving of 5 stars on on 5 categories.
With each passing chapter I find myself drawn in more and more to the MC's world and with rapt fascination I watch as he/it grows to understand himself/itself as both a young God coming into it's powers. As well as the choices these powers subtly have over him influencing these choices.
The character is fleshed out. The background is fleshed out. I've yet to spot a grammar error let alone a spell check. The complete originality is so far beyond my scope of understanding how the author could even be releasing this not unpolished diamond in the rough. But already glistening and cut jewel of immeasurable worth on a daily basis. And sometimes multiple chapters.
That it makes me truly wonder if everyone else is completely blinded by mainly crud stories that are going no where. Whose only saving grace is the boredom of the readers and their casual reluctance to even spot check the author for all of their inconsistencies. That we all have just grown numb to it. So used to sub par literature that when truly great works come our way we back out and squander our time entertaining these butchered tales.
Well this sort of turned into a rant and for that I do apologise. But I sincerely hope that you give this story a chance despite what I've gone off topic about. I've done my best without spoiling anything. Just I give it a chance and maybe who knows you find as much pleasure in reading it as I have.
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