Reviews of The Tyrant Gentle Husband by Hana_Frederica - Webnovel

To whomever who reads this, from what you can gather from all the reviews, two things stand out. Writing quality and plot. Writing Quality: 4* Well, can't deny it. The writing quality leaves a lot to be desired. The grammar needs a lot of work, the way the POV changes from one to another abruptly leaves a lot to be desired, and the chunks of text in a paragraph are just a few things wrong with it. So why the 4* you may ask? Because you can SEE the improvement. English can't be the Author's main language and the amount of effort Author has put in to pour her heart out is admirable. Author soldiers on, has improved and I am sure, will continue to improve. For that perseverance in the face of adversity, Author gets the stars. Stability of Updates (5*): Constant, steady and Author tells if will be late. Story Development (4*): It can be abrupt at times and plot twists are dropped here and there which makes your head spin sometimes. The smooth transition isn't there but it's not too bad so not lower than 4*. Reading pleasure is disrupted a bit. Character Design (5*): Okay, so some of the things the ML does is a bit weird like suddenly being hopelessly in love with the FL after being in a coma while in the original, he was hopelessly in love with the moonlight. It would have been easier to accept if it was also shown how the ML gets disillusioned by the moonlight during his coma and not just have it one-sided "I now see how good my wife is" because let's face it. Just because another person is good doesn't mean you stop loving the one you have been loving for years. Then, worse, just because the moonlight wasn't a virgin, he disdains her? Was his 'love' so shallow? Urgh. And the FL. Don't get me started on this Saint. Despite how she was brought up, she could raise her twin brothers at the tender age of 8? Be aware at 3 that her parents don't love her but instead of being depressed, she grows more mature? And still be hopelessly in love with her husband who was cold and neglected her for 3 years? The thing is, no matter how much I disdain these characters, the fact that I can dislike them means Author has done a good job in creating them. So, 5*. World Background: by default, 5* because there's nothing really wrong with it. It's based on the current world so can't put low stars because of it now, can I? So at the end of the day, if you can switch off your mind from the language and get used to the weird, mixing way without smooth transition of one arc to another, you'll enjoy this novel. The idea of the story itself is good. All the best, Author.

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I need explaination. is this miona a witch, controller of the world? after rereading this chapter, for me, ml sounds like brainwashed guy who is monotonously living his life according to his given character. and so many transmigration, novel world, otome game, rebirth, reincarnation,....how many weird supernatural things are going over here. I once read a book about some characters getting trapped in a horror game and only few variable key characters like murderer, knew that he have to kill them to win the game and get out of the game...then characters after finding keywords finally find out how the game is working....is this something like that? are these characters part of different world who are trapped here? they are living according to their characters but after some point of their life, like near life and death experience they finally gain their real consciousness. there are layers and layers of false memories and information about each characters. if that's the case then you should have started working on its base structure from the start and give us some clues just after you wrote the first chapter. like how in the killer game book a key character is getting killed in different ways for many times, like she is having a nightmare, then she realises that same thing is happening again and again. so she finally got some key to solve teh mystery, then big revelation of horror game and finding murderer among their group to save themselves from getting trapped in the book. I wished we didn't got so much contrasting facts that readers get confused.

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