Reviews of My Unconventional Delivery System! by Charlottes - Webnovel

it was an amazing book for a fanfic. Although it got discontinued, i would recommend people read this even with the risk of feeling unsatisfied with the discontinued part

The mc is a whimpy coward with no backbone and is probably gay with daddy issues. He also keeps calling children beautiful so he’s probably a pedo as well. The story itself is slow and boring with no real story or plot and is overall just a mush mash of half assed ideals and thoughts

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Please Charlotte if you can continue this story, this story is very interesting and also unique to me, because when else will there be a story that makes a system with the function of delivering something to another world, to be honest I really like this (especially because of the lemon). so please update

It’s ok. I don’t recall almost any issues with grammar or anything like that, definitely good when it comes to writing quality. Hasn’t been updated in 30 days as of now (ch 221 I think).I read 45ch, and the story was pretty ok, I didn’t have any issues with it, but the problem is that the story doesn’t follow the title at all, and what you’d expect isn’t what you get. In the 200+ chapters, the MC only makes 10 deliveries to other worlds, which makes no sense given the title. All the girls are falling for the MC for absolutely no reason (which I don’t mind at all, but matters for review) and mc is annoying. Dude literally has Tohru fall in love with him but doesn’t accept her feelings cuz he’s ”not worthy” so dumb. Dude goes on a date with her then they start acting all lovey dovey apparently, but they don’t just become a couple which is just dumb. MC is obv interested in Torhu but for some reason has trouble just telling another girl and skirts around the question and it slips out, like dude, just tell her straight up you aren’t interested if you aren’t and tell her you like someone else, quit being dumb.

Bueno desearía que hubiera durado más y re llenar algunos vacíos de la trama bueno fue uno de lo mejores fanfiction que eh leído le agradezco al autor o autora

La trama es un completo 20/10 es bastante buena la trama. Es un tipico anime de vida diaria, pero con temas sobrenaturales con un mundo Mesclado.el Autor lo hizo también que no se siente muy forzado la trama. Bastante decente. Supera por muchos novelas normlaes y largas. No es tan exagerado para decir que es la mejor pero si un top mundial. Aunque quiero que el autor siga actualizando rápidamente. Si sigue con la misma calidad actual supongo que durara como unos 750 capitulos sin sentirse forzado la trama Actualmente me encuentro entre los capítulos 217 mas o menos.

love the story even though its kinda all over the place its a generic harem slice of life story but its good enough to cure boredom 👍

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This is type of fanfic that I was looking for and it was the best👍👍👍.Man you are great ,I enjoyed it very much.I hope to see it's update more.Keep it up❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Wryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy do u drop this masterpiece t v lol

WARNING - Pretty long review becoz i have a suggestion at the end lol. Definitely just my idea of a new work so author-san don't need to follow it. Pretty good start, but it went downhill for me the moment the harem included his family. WQ - Petty good grammar, there's some error but still manageable, basically it can be ignored SD - Pretty average actually, what makes it fun is the system's ability CD - I'd say it's better than the average MC's of most fanfic I've read, not a fan him constantly saying cringe/cringy though. US - I read this a year ago, it has about 100 chapters back then. i re-read it again this day and still only have 200+ chapters, so pretty average i guess? but still making it 4 star since author-san did not drop it WB - Pretty interesting world background, but never heard of some anime's mention in his original world like the one in his school. it's much interesting actually if you combine movies and anime. example, MCU in the USA while anime in Japan, MC would mostly stay in Japan, while the plot of MCU is ongoing and won't interfere in some plots like iron man's plot. MC basically will only interfere because he was scouted by a certain hero (like iron man, because he has Jarvis he discover MC's strangeness) during calamities that will affect the whole planet like the battle of new york. you'll have trouble on the power scaling tho😂

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Saya suka fanfic ini dan saya harap ceritanya akan semakin menarik untuk kedepannya.. Dan saya harap semakin cepat updated ya author sama.. Saya tetap memberi dukungan kepada anda😁👍

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Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!

This is a pretty average wish fulfillment type of fanfic. Like most harem fiction, it has a lot of illogical romance and forced drama. But it's pretty entertaining, though cringe.

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This was the story that got me into reading manga and lightnovels. This was the story that also got me into reading fanfiction. This storyline wouldn't be for everyone, however I believe there is a group that would very much enjoy reading it.

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