Reviews of Playing One Piece by absurdmorbidity - Webnovel

It's bad. My reasoning is the same as others. Just want to add 1 more star to this garbage.

as soon as I see 2 mc it is a big no for me but I'll try

عذرا لكن اريد ان اسئل انا اضع فصول في روايتي لكنها لا تضهر او بالاحرى لا ترتفع المشاهدات لذا اذا كان احدكم يعرف السبب او الحل فل يكتب لي Sorry, but I want to ask. I put chapters in my novel, but they do not appear, or rather, the views do not increase, so if anyone knows the reason or the solution, please write to me.

The only bad thing I can see in this fanfic is that the MC is scum for what he did to Nami and that the story got droped

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What I like the most of the story is that there is little to no grammar mistakes. And overall there's almost nothing I hate about the story. P.S I really dislike some of the reviews people gave , like seriously guys , reviews are meant to be helping the author , and some of you just wrote about how bad the story is, that ain't helpin'.

I think the author died or something since it's been almost 2 year's since thier last update/post .........................................

it's get boring after chapter 88 I dropped. the story is okay in the beginning but it gets boring as the story flows. 1/10. just a typical one Piece system fanfic story. Author is not really crative in terms of giving the story a "punch" or "thrill". the more I read the more I get bored and I'm sorry but I can't help myself to compare this to other one piece system fanfic story i've read before.

Con lo poco que e leído me a gustado mucho la historia pero es triste que dejen de seguir escribiendo esta historia pero igual voy a seguir con los cap que quedan[img=recommend]

Annoyed you hate ussop cause he’s one of my fav characters so I’m giving you a low rate.

honestly 10/10 it’s just sad that the story has been dropped I really enjoyed this story and hope the author can come back one day Ratio Approved

Very good. It's a shame it was dropped right when mc created his new crew, right before his ship was created and right before his first fight with his crew. He is basically a honko at this point, but still - no new world...

cerita FF yang sangat buruk, anda cuma membuat MC berenkarnasi agar mempermudah Luffy mendapatkan semua crew? hahaha, sungguh lucu sekali novel mu penulis,. novelmu bahkan tidak lebih dari salinan cerita Manga+anime One Piecenya hahaha, ditambah anda membuat karakter Mc bernama (D) tapi bukan untuk berpetualang sendiri dan membuat sejarah sendiri tetapi anda penulis malah menceritakan tentang seorang bermarga (D) yang membantu orang lain untuk mendapatkan Crewnya lebih mudah? hahaha sampah FF yang sangat lucu sekali penulis,.. yah, sayang sekali MC FF ini tidak lebih dari karakter sampingan atau karakter Mafia yang melindungi Luffy dan Crew dari bayangan ha-ha-ha,.. dan juga anda penulis berpikir bahwa mempermudah perjalanan luffy and crew akan menarik? tapi anda salah besar, yang ada itu hanya menghambat pertumbuhan mereka, ditambah sahabat baik Luffy si Shanks saja tidak pernah membantu dia dalam perjalanan, sedangkan MC FF anda penulis? selalu membantu Luffy dan crew hahaha, lucu sekali, alangkah baiknya novel FF ini dihapus saja, karna saya paling benci dengan novel Salinan yang cuma diedit beberapa bab saja ahahahaha

Novel is decent not the beat but its alright for a fan fic. just need a little consistency in the story telling. Still a good read dont mind those 1 stat reviews

Just read first two chapters then go and read the original one piece manga. No difference can be seen except the name Marcus is added. This fanfiction doesn't even deserve one star. Don't get fooled by the rankings.

Amazing story though incomplete and at pause or abandoned at the time of review. Still I would recommend this fanfic a read as it is quite good. At the start it may seem like just following canon along with the MC but it starts changing after the skypiea arc. The system is a bit on the op side but it doesn't matter to me much so that is just my opinion.

Woaahhh.. it's a really great story.. i know it's hard to make one piece story which mc not join strawhats crew (i actually like when mc join them, because one piece is about luffy adventure xD), so don't listen to other people who don't like, they can just read other story, just keep doing what you can do author.. can't wait to next chapter 😁😁👍

Isnt really original pretty much followed the story to a tea wich i wouldnt mind anyways, the only difference is the mc is a fight stealer and takes all of luffys fights. In the summary it said no harem yet reading the comments it seems like it turned into one. Really disappointed that i wasted my time.

The mc is just following without changing anything, I think it would be ok to change everything while still going on the same islands but the author doesn't know how to change the story I guess. It has a system and like any system it's trash, nothing to say here, it's lazy to use a system and that qualify the whole fanfic, it's lazy. Rather than to have a character that work on getting stronger on his own, the system gives him everything in exchange of quests, it's just lazy. Same for the plot, it is just one piece and yet, it's not really one piece since the mc knows the future, it is not really an adventure and since he let bad things happen you can tell he doesn't respect his crewmates or rather the author is too lazy to change the original plot... I like the idea of following the strawhats, I prefer that over most other stories that follow a bunch of no names OCs without personnality, but it is quite hard to follow the author in is quest to copy one piece without touching anything. What's the point of that ? Then there is the mc himself, because of all the above he comes off as a bad guy that profits of his future knowledge to laze around and spectate his crewmate as if that was acceptable behaviour in a pirate crew, because he "doesn't want to take their fights from them" and a lot of nonsense like that, because again the author can't have the mc change the route and timeline so the mc end up trying to change as little as possible. So as you can see the plot of this fanfic makes no sense at all and it actually pretend to be something it is not, it should be called "reincarnated as an OP spectating mob among the strawhats", because the mc isn't really part off anything meaningful and the author also tried to play with the idea of leaving the strawhats but it won't fix the author's main problem wich is that he would have to invent an original plot and world in one piece and that's actual hard work.

Gostei é espero que o autor volte a lançar capítulos🙏🏻 ........................................................... ...........................................................

glad that I read this ff at first like some of the readers review where they say it keeps following the plot at first I also thought it would keep following the plot not that I care and as it stated in the description that mc at the start will mostly follow the canon until he gets the goro fruit but no right from the start it also has it's on route to follow like on arlong which he almost cause usopp's death, and also for the reason that he won't interfere too much on the canon I mostly agree to that for the straw hat to grow and I kinda like the idea of him making his own crew then joining luffy's fleet. I like the idea where mc starts collecting df for his potential crew members And if u ever continue this story which I think not I kinda approved of NAMI being the love interest, some might think NAMI is overused in ff but it mostly happens in harem ones rarely being OTL which a certain ff did a goodjob, but after the crew recruiting I vote on jewelry bonney for the love interest.

The story while interesting seems kinda bland with the way it is written. The story feels more like a basic outline of the general story rather a new retelling with a new character in the mix. There are barely any conversations and those that happen feel useless. This is stand chapter 16.

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Good fanfic too bad it haven't been updated in a while. The mc is pretty cool and has cool power the system his well made. I would have liked to see the meeting with the migiwara after the time spike too bad it has stoped for now

. does it have romance ? . . .