Reviews of Astral Pet Store by Ancient Xi - Webnovel

This story started off well enough. There were rules and, although the system was aggressive and oppressive, it would help him get stronger AND educate/guide him. However, after about 200 chapters the store, skill explanations, skills, battle pets, pet food, his moms injury, and basically everything else about the store plot is shifted to an eastern cultivation fantasy. Many faces are slapped. the MC is the most arrogant, selfish, and insane person. The MC isn’t the problem, though. the problem is the complete lack of mentioning the store, the MC cultivation only gets to the 7th rank, but can kill people in Fate Rank with a pet skill, and the laws or rules the author states in the beginning get constantly broken by the later chapters. Such as, Joanna being SHOCKED that someone can manipulate time and space, but then the purple dragons can use it easily. Then it becomes any star rank can reserve time and manipulate space. I’m at chapter 538 and the author still hasn’t mentioned what happened to a lot of the pills, items, and things the MC ordered to heal his mom and took out of the space cracks….. I think this was two stories the author was working on and the stories were close enough in concept that the editor told the author just to smash them together at chapter 200ish and no one will know. It’s like a different book once the elite tourney starts.

the story was shaky in the beginning but the build was awesome i was stuck to the book I loved the story and only have minor complaints great book overall

It was good, however too long so I wasn't able to reach the end, Yet, it is good and is recommended to [img=proud][img=Unalived][img=Unalived]

I read the description of the book and honestly I wont read it!! Scenes the MC cant have pets and he cant gain an affinity to pets then its not worth it to read a book about beast taming/pets!

The novel is finished not dropped. The story is good. Worth a read

I heard this story was good, but honestly I was so bored that I couldn’t even make it 10 chapters. Out of all the novels I have read, this was the 1st I dropped so early.

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Good story, good pace, and absolutely addictive.

An enjoyable, well told and heartfelt story as the characters developed. Su Ping was always focused on getting stronger and learning side by side with his pets. They were more than just pets to him. They were a family which built a strong bond making them all closer and stronger. If you want a good read, then I suggest you give this story a try

Trash, absolutely trah novel. MC Bootlicks someone else's Electric mouse whole time while ignoring his own pers. He is way too addicted to trying found fault in bigshots. MC doesn't have brain and is a total idiot. No plot, Everything is random. System is useless. I am a tolerant person to most novels, but this one is absolutely garbage. I can't believe it has Comic adaption.

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Good solid story, kept me reading till the end. Only epilogue is not that finalizing, bit of a cliff.

it's very interesting and I like the story line

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The concept is very interesting, but sucks that the MC only cares about himself and doesn't develop friends and romance, even with his family is cold. I hate this kind of personalities, no one can survive by himself , he as person doesn't grow, I don't see the point to read about a character that doesn't care about anything, even his pets or the store, he doesn't have any ambition or goal.

I'll say the book is actually good, tho it can't be on same rank as super gene and others, the world background came out quite good, mc character (a bit messy)

Great story. Please check out my book of the same genre "Cursed Ages: The Beast Realm". It will help me a lot.

I originally started reading this novel about a year ago now and I can now finally say, I've finished the final chapter. All 1574 or whatever the final number is. And it is by far the best novel I have read. There are certain sections where you can tell that the translators either got incredibly tired while working on translating, or forgot to proofread a page or 2. This is I think around 10 pages in total. Out of 1500. So it is definitely not a common occurrence. This is all the say the quality is up to snuff. Now onto the story. In my opinion this story is split up into several acts. Around 5 or 6. Starting with su ping being isekai'd into a world with "magical astral beasts". The world is just like ours except now people can make contracts with these beasts to make them pets, and then they can fight alongside eachother for protection from other dangerous magical beasts. Now the entire story is set up in a leveling system, as you read up through the chapters you learn more about this world, and universe, and. Galaxy until eventually you know basically everything. And throughout this... "Ancestral land of chaos" there are always levels. If you however do not wish to spend a LARGE PORTION OF YOUR TIME reading about how everything exists in this world, you can always read the first act and see how you like it from there. The first act follows su ping as he grows in level from normal humans, unable to even contract an astral beasts into a pet, into a "legendary battle pet warrior" this is split up into a 10 level system to start out with. They're just called the numbers. "Tier 1 battle pet warrior" I think. It was a while ago. Up until we get to the legendary stage at the very end. Cmon now, this is a story about getting stronger and getting more pets, and MOST importantly the friends along the way. Literally. The most important. There have been numerous times in reading this that I have been bawling my eyes out, because the character writing is that good. I could genuinely feel emotions for these people and pets and their friendships. As for the world building... There's a lot. But due to the sheer scale of "learning everything about everything so there's a satisfying ending" in the first chapter there's not as much world building as you'd expect in a traditional novel. This doesn't really matter though, since the entire idea is just "our world and then pokè- "non copyrighted battle pets". Oh and also there's this thing called the galactic federation that exists and sort of like controls the entire galaxy, but that's act 2-4. Now onto the bad. There's not much in my opinion but I do have to say, it can get gory. Its like if the Pokémon peta game where it's just animal fighting, except they are entirely justified in their fighting. It has got some gory moments though. Like halfway through act 1 where the main character essentially uses telekinesis to physically explode a person. Because they were trying to kill his sister, and didn't know he was strong. To be honest it may not be seen as THAT gory as there's no real description, but it CERTAINLY painted a picture in my head. I could literally talk about this novel for upwards of 12 hours straight so I'm going to stop right here. But if you like action, Or overpowered main characters (but not too overpowered to get no tension), or if you're just looking for a thing to read for the next year, averaging about 50 chapters a month. Then start reading. Get to a part that feels satisfying for you, either after he saves the day the first time. Or whenever you want to stop. It's literally helped cure my depression.

I cant stop reading. Its so good. The world is so vast and the mc is powerful.

This is one of the best novel i ever read . The story development is too good. But there is one problem mc do not get any girl.

Spoiler free review Another good novel. It's a story of our MC "Su Ping" who gets reincarnated into a scifi Cultivation World but luckily receives an OP System. While it might not be a literary masterpiece or a must-read but it's definitely unique and fun novel. Worldbuilding, A very expansive world. The scale of the world is massive. Also MC keeps traveling to many different worlds, so you will keep seeing new places all the time. MC and Side Characters, Amazingly done. MC is a joy to read, he is outspoken and very justice oriented which is the main reason he gets into a lot of fights. Other then MC, we have his friends / pets, each of which have a story of their own which are amazingly done. Even the ordinary side characters have a story of their own. Although many of these side character eventually get forgotten later, but during the time they were shown almost each of them gets some time to shine. Cultivation, A unique Cultivation system which focuses on Pets at the early level. The later level are all Dao related but I believe this novel has one of the best understanding of how Dao Cultivation will look like from Cultivation perspective. Even the "Star Lord" level cultivators, which is at the middle of the whole Cultivation tree are basically Omnipotent, they can do anything Create life, travel in space, even time, reverse death, create matter, anything. The higher level are somehow even more Omnipotent. About the Plot, The plot can be divided into two parts. The first half focuses on MC's growth in Cultivation and as a person, and it's where the story shines the most. The character development of MC is engaging, even if he occasionally behaves like a Young Master but he still is a very charming character. The second half delves into the mystery of the System, the truth of the world, and the final big bad enemy. Ending, Very weird ending. It was definitely rushed but it was also wierd that everyone in the last fight suddenly turned into a philosopher. Rather then ending with a fight, almost all the people in the ending few chapters are basically having a debate about of life and death. Although there is still a fight going on but it's not the main focus. I didn't dislike it but this was definitely the first time I am seeing something like this in a webnovel, this is more of an anime thing. Cons, As the story progresses, the author seems to become forgetful of what he has written previously, which results in inconsistency in his writing, lots of ordinary character being forgotten and lots of plot threads which never being fully resolved. In summary, Good novel. Sometimes it even made me feel very warm and fuzzy. Give it a try, especially if you like pet novels.

Amazing novel. A must read for people who love beast taming novels. Wondering if the author is going to create another work?

The ending is a bit bittersweet but the story is fun in total despite the mc’s young master murder hobo tendencies

So far it's been super awesomeI haven't even read so much yet

Very good book, Just The final lines should be changed!!

Good read If you enjoy pet related novels. weak to strong character.

alur cerita tidak monoton, perkembangan karakter masih bisa dimengerti. dan untuk MC tidak terlalu baik hati dan polos.