Decent book that is easy to follow and read. plot is pretty generic with a lot of the usual cultivation tropes. Overall, its a solid read that can help pass the time inbetween other books your wainting to update.
At first it's good but when you read further the plot just keep repeating itself
Offend a person
Fight then win
Person that he defeated have a backer
Backer fight mc
Mc prepare then get more powerful
Thats the plot in this novel on the second thought all chinese novel are like this so if you are a beginner reader just read a whole book of a chinese novel then you dont have to read other chines novel anymore because they are all the same just different name well what do you expect made in china right they will just copy a product then change it's name
So, after a few dozen chapters, herr is my review: The writing qualitiy is very good. The story development is good but slow. The character sometimes is smart, but it is annoying that he only wants money and is often stupid and a retard. Update stability ia good. World backround, as far there is none, we only know that it is futuristic and a cultivation world.
If you want a smart and clever mc than this isn't your book.
(example): Somebody is aksing him for help, he at first is too scared because he could die(boring mc, but understandable), then the system gives a quest, he accept to help them, but they have to buy something first, thats just stupid and don't like it.
He often isn't friendly as a shopkeeper should be. Without the sytsem he would be in every aspect trash
Well i gotta say im overall impressed they’ve made su ping’s character work so well it does A great job to describe the killing Intent, locations in the story, character descriptions and power rankings.
This Novel Was Amazing Until...It Shifted From What this Novel Was About...Because In The Later chapters It Doesn’t even Focus On The Shop It Just Focus On The MC Fighting Which Is super Boring And It Kinda Turns Into One of those Cliche asf Cultivation Novel or Anything Thats Gotta Braindead MC
This is my personal favorite #1 novel on webnovel. The story has me on a hook that makes me scream take my money and let me read! I look forward to the two chapters everyday and are the highlights of my day. I love Su Ping with his personality and the strength that he has. I can't wait to see what's to come in the future. Its selfish to say i wish the latest chapters were longer. But thats just the hunger for more lol. No matter if if you have a legendary bloodline or famous family or even a legendary pet Warrior shall bow and show respect to the King of death!
I like the way it was started, he is stoic and goofy with thick mind to relationships.
......but to train a captive, or someone he has decided is not worthy to work at his shop, there was no logic to that story development. He trained his sister's pet so that she could advertising for his shop, he did the same for the first girl, but this has no reason at all.
...I understand that the characters have to develop, but please make it in line with the current character development line. He is more accepting of people and accepts them when it coincidences with his business.
.....otherwise great story keep at it.
After a long time I found a light novel which isn't bad. The chapters quality and updates are frequent. The story development and character development are good.
I read many novels in same genre and most are good at start but then content gets repeated on and on till it kind of feels lagged and most forget that they are doing business and get too involved into killing and harem building.
Here there is no intense romance and Just good business with some emotional and funny scenes( Till chapter 543).
Lots of reviews about this novel are misleading... They say the MC is trigger happy but thats not true the MC is practical and ruthless... If there is a fight over treasure he might leave you alive as long as there is no killing intent directed at him or his family... Why leave potential future threats when you have the power to nip them in the bud at the immediate time...
Some reviewers say he is not a good businessman... But they are wrong its not like he sells his stuff at a low price... The system puts the appropriate price for the appropriate service or goods...
Some say its too much of an adventure novel and the MC is all about power-ups... He has to go on adventures to gain power and to get pets and monster food to sell after all he is running a store... He needs to be strong to defend the store, himself and his family... After all in a world where power is law who would let a weak person without strong backing do whatever they want and get rich without wanting a piece of the pie...
So the MC is decisive he knows how to separate his friends and customers from his foes... He knows when it is the right time to kill his foes... MCs' who forgive people who tried to kill them or their family or ruin the family's only source of income are unrealistic... As I have been reading the novel so far this MC has never killed an innocent person...
the story is Astral pet store but the pet sale in the store only common didn't even have water type pet or any kind of kind of pet the MC only train other pet the author should title this Astral training pet store this novel story without related or resemblance to the title i already ready more 200 chapter but the MC still not sale any pet but only train others pet
Everything is great. Mc’s personality is somewhat inconsistent at times, which makes me feel kinda weird. Story doesn’t seem to have much direction other than getting stronger, though that’s a basic trend with cultivation novels. World background is great, but I don’t seem to remember much of it. Overall a good novel, but sometimes things go a little downhill, just trudge through, and it’ll all be alright.
So I've read up to ch.150ish this novel is basically about astral pets and MC faceslapping everyone every other chapter
I personally think its not bad of a read.
The thing that turn me off is that the MC character/personality is hateful (please tell me there's some sort of character development)
Its kinda repetitive but I thinks its still acceptable.
I liked the MC until he turned into a selfish killer, what monsters attacking the train and killing people not my problem, let the guards handle it, trying to belittle me, no talking, I will kill you to teach people a lesson, 2 thousand people came to attack my store slaughter them without saying anything, he is a MC drunk on power or does not value human life and a narcissist,I am a nice guy I don’t kill those who don’t annoy me, example people make fun of him he will slaughter them, Then when guards come to their defense he will slaughter one or two then he will pick one not to kill to show he is not a total crazy killer, I already killed 3 of you for making fun of me, I am not unreasonable, survive one punch from me and you can live.
what pet store story? more like a combination of cultivation and pokemon story. pet store only as a side stories. heck. i reach chapter 326 and never see the owner sell any pet. fighting fighting cultivation fighting, training pet, fighting competion. wtf
There is no plot, the mc is ridiculously op, sits in his shop getting more op, and occasionally kills arrogant young masters, their entire clans, their neighbours, the dogs, cats and even goldfish.
there is no worldbuilding or character development, and the story goes nowhere. the supporting cast are cardboard cutouts. I wouldnt bother wasting time. I read the raws up to about c400
Alright bois, I've read until chapter 524 and this novel is shit
Story development is garbage
Character development is garbage
I can summarize every arc in a few words
MC goes to a particular place because of the plot, people underestimate him, he killed a few, people still underestimate him, powerful people from that place came, he killed them, then they regret
rinse and repeat
it's like no matter how powerful the mobs are, the monkeys are much more intelligent than them
waste of time
The use of the name "otherworld" on the Heavenly King monster in chapter 508 I don't think fits the description of the body shape and the cultivation of the original novel Monter 彼岸 (Bǐ'àn).
where Bǐ'àn in articulation has many meanings, one of which is true, namely the "other shore or the other world" but for the naming I think it does not fit the body shape and and the description of the monster is in Novel
as on the wiki https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Higan
and in the wiki, I found that in the image and content status along with the description of Bǐ'àn it is more suitable to use the name: red spider lily / red magic lily / or equinox flower as in the description on this wiki https: //en.m.wikipedia. org / wiki / Lycoris_radiata
*actually I didn't really focus on English but I immediately read the Chinese version, but when I read the English version the translation was really messy, there were many more that made me confused about the translation of this novel and my own understanding of Chinese.
here I do criticize but this is also useful for the translator to be more careful with the translation, even though sometimes chasing the release time is good but at least careful too so that the reader can feel satisfied,
maybe my sentence is a little stiff or confusing but I think the translator will understand this.