I have made the writing as easy to understand and error-free as possible, but if there are any errors, you can let me know and I will fix it.
I will publish at least 3 chapters every week. I can publish more if I have more free time from work. I am a student + worker but I will do the best I can :)
The story development will be fast in the first volume since it is more focused on building the plot for the future story. But there will be steady development focusing on the world and the characters from the second volume. I know some people like a long descriptive start... But really, I think it would be too boring if the story without making much progress at the start.
The harem: Yes, the pieces are coming together.
The character background: No, even in a fantasy world everyone doesn't have a dark past, and 'I will create a revolution and change the country' like goal... Some may have such background though :P
Isekai: You may find it like every other isekai if you only read the first few chapters... There are twists in the later chapters.
I am a The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy fan so some reference may be used from there. (eg. the world is a program).... :D But there aren't many sci-fi elements here and No gaming elements.
I hope you enjoy the book. Even if you don't, thanks for giving it a try... You guys are awesome :)
So long and thanks for all the fish!!!
This story if ever dropped I will harass you(author) until there is another chapter. That is how good this book is, from the battles to the author's sense of humor just makes this book better. that is all
Great read loved it thank you keep going think you have a great story and plenty possibilities to explore like the Harem vibe that you are creating would be nice to see some that our MC opens his eyes onto all the subtle clues that they drop
Its a bit great at first but as the story moves it gets more, how should i put this? Bland? It contained many illogical psychological reactions made by people. Basically it was a bit robotic on the reactions where emotional reactions, powers, and other stuff were basically just the standard. It lacked comedy that would have elevated the story and of course the harem thing where he avoids them is another strange thing for me. I mean why on earth would you avoid such things when you can always limit them. This is a fantasy world we're talking about and such worlds can tolerate those certain moves to those types of harem.
This is nothing more than an isekai fan-fiction, author doesn't bother to add anything unique.
No creativity, no depth and lackluster
In the synopsis its stated that it is a fun novel, apparently this is an excuse to masquerade a fan-fiction as an original novel
Dear aspiring authors, if you want to write an innocent MC, don't write about how curvy a girl's body is.
BTW, the characters have no depth and the writing itself isn't very good. Grammar is tolerable. A revision on the first 50 chapters is in order.
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I wish would update tho
What's so special about this story? Conversation between characters felt empty, devoid of any emotion, just like a typical isekai story I read many times.
at first this story is the same old another world story indesingstable from the rest but something happened in the labrith arc it actually got good story wise but my real problem is the MC. he has no personality to speak of sure he gets a little better but still kinda bland. and I don't mind hames but the girls exept 1 have no reason to like him and the one girl only states that (paraphrasing here)"yeah he's cute and has a lot of potential id **** him" but I do like the slower pace and get to know the side characters but I do like the world and the of course I have to mention my favorite character Zagan which I always enjoy him when he is on the page. anyways I got to take a nap
This novel is very interesting.
The main character is great.
He had some nice and funny personality.
The plot is great and interesting.
Hope that the storyline will be more interesting and exciting.
i like the plot but i hate the whole story, "the whole concept is too childish and all the characters are like typical japanese isekai anime, everything is just too naive its make evertone think that everyrhing is good like its a children story that everyone hesitates too kill.
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bra this is harem all the girls like him but he is to dense to even realise it but still dense has the earth itself it harem bra and you don't realize it
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I like what I have read till now but this genre is not new so I won't say anything about it but if you can do something more interesting then it will really great.
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This is as great as it should be and u are great too! Authornim I respect youπ very good! Keep writing and work hard...dont let urself distracted and be calm and drop lots of awesome chapters with interesting plots! I hope this book of ur always gets loved and reach the peak so that all know how awesome u are! fighting ββ I will always support u and love yaπ
Is this a huge harem?
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Is this a huge harem?
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I don't know if it's the authors doing but if it's not someone stole this thing a rereleased it on Amazon called alive in another world the author might want to look into that
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this book is in my top ten favorites for sure its got the sppedy development in the beginning to drag you in and then leaves you suspensfull when you get in the later chapters
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