Reviews of Death system by RandomGuy - Webnovel

Whelp, I've read up to the newest chapter now... (CH.31) and I have a second review for you Mister Author... Writing Quality - 4/5: The Author has improved MASSIVELY from his previous works in therms of grammar and the structuring of sentences, at this rate he should be able to write with no mistakes sooner or later, right now there are still mistakes in his grammar but definitely not enough to warrant a bad rating considering how good everything else is. Stability of Updates - 4/5: The author makes sure to update whenever he can, even though he's busy with his school and what not, despite the fact he's been having many important things to do with that he still updates quality chapters for us readers to read! Respect! Story Development - 5/5: Now here, you see... We have what is known as a Gem hidden in the rough... The storyline follows a cultivator who has died in battle, now basically forcefully hired as a "Missionary" his job is to go to different worlds with different themes and complete missions given to him by the "Death System". It's really interesting because you get to see what is essentially a Cultivator in different settings such a Sci-fi and normal fantasy! I love it! Character Design - 5/5: So far I'm loving the characters and especially the MC, his struggle with his past is evident and the fact he's stranded in this "Death System" thing's rules and regulations means he can't return and finish his original mission of revenge and what not, it's quite sad and a good way to add some flavor to the MC in my opinion. The other characters are also rather quirky and interesting, with their own unique designs and sometimes ways of speaking so that's all well and good, no need to worry about any bland characters that we've seen a thousand times before here! World Background - 5/5: Like I said before, the so called "Death System" is EXTREMELY interesting! it's basically a whole organisation that works with undead and people who have died on their worlds, reviving them and using them to complete missions of mass genocide! Why that's needed? I dunno, there's a mystery in that which is also great! Is it fun either way? Heck yeah! The fact that we get to explore many different worlds with their own varying flavors and genres (Sci-fi and fantasy alike) is great! Overall this is a great novel with a whole lot of potential! I can't wait to see where the author takes it next as this could very well be one of the next big hit novels on the site as long as he keeps improving and raising the quality! Good luck Author!

Hmmm... This is my review in the review for the review of the novel. The plot of the novel is wonderful. In actually, I am just finish reading all the chapter. I don't know what to write in review. That's it.

EE…This isn't a bad story. Having said that, the first few chapters were exceptionally tedious to me. Some others were praising the story, so that might just be my idiosyncratic point of view. I almost gave up on the story about chapter 10 0r 15—don't remember. I hung in there and it got better eventually. The Protagonist Zuyuan dies and is offered an opportunity to stay alive by joining an enigmatic organization. Yeah, I'm pretty sure that he'd working for the Minions of EVIL. Not 100% certain—just 97.2% certain. I'll continue to read for awhile. Author, if you read this: IF you want to include gibberish to give a little of the flavor of foreign languages being spoken, well and good. It is a bit heavy-handed to write, "&&*%%$##y!" and then translate "Weiner Cleaner" EACH AND EVERY TIME! If you're going to translate, then omit the Lettish. Also, both your gibberish and your Tolkien-like Elfin runes bear too much resemblance to American Words or Letters. Once Again, I find this extraordinarily distracting.

I like how the story is very fast pace but with a lot of detail. I love the part about how there's a book about this novel in the story and how one can recognize that he's the MC