It’s a good book keep up the work also u should add a skill like the hawk eye from Kuroko no basket or maybe let him have the emperors eye. Also tell more about the music skill u just left it there and said nothing about it u should put as bass or beat dribble that depends on if he’s listening to a song with bass his dribbles become super heavy and intimidate the players or beat he has super fast dribble that are hard to see.
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Great Story :D
I'm recommend much the fanfic!
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Btw if you want some inspiration for the future matches on how to describe a game you could read some basketball novel here or « Rebirth in Kuroko Basket »
And please don’t make a stupid huge harem with tons of girls just ichika,his mom, momoi and maybe the coach of seirin. Having multiple gfs will just ruin the story 😅
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The biggest problem I have with this fanfic is its lack of basketball, and even when we finally do have matches its not very thrilling. Im not expecting you to write every action they do but you really need to make it more detailed for it to be enjoyable.
Next would be the romance and harem aspect of this fanfic.... Theres not much to say other than it feels forced and cliche, especially that lemon scene at the start it doesnt make much sense to me. Theres nothing wrong with making harems and lemon scenes but you have to realize that this is a fanfic about KnB and the main focus should obviously be about sports (to be specific basketball). You need to make a good balance between the two
Im not really picky about grammar so I thinks its readable but could use some improvement
The MC is normal i suppose I cant really see any glaring flaws but I also dont see anything that makes him unique or stand out from others
So if i was to give it a rating it would be something like this:
As a webnovel fanfic 3.5/5
As a sport fanfic 2/5
Мне нравится это, не понимаю что все так грубо реагируют, если вы так много видели такие Фанфики не нужно писать это и засирать комментарии. Мне очень нравится
Five stars for sport anime fanfic. Five stars for sport anime fanfic. Five stars for sport anime fanfic. Need for more chapters!!! How can you not love a good sport fanfic.
The story is good and but the harem part does not work for this story as it should focus more on the basket ball itself ✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘
For some reasons I really like this novel, with a good flow and not just straight fucking bull****, And this is the best Kuroko no basket fanfic novel I have ever read.
Retard English, Retard Plot, Retard MC, Retard Fanfic, Retard Author.
It just proves how many retards there are on this website with how many stones this retard thing has.
Bye, you should not read this if you have more than 20 IQ and 12 years old.
The grammar is better than most novels, but you have to realize that English is not the Author's first language so read it with that in mind. The author updates daily now which is nice. Though the chapters are very short. Probably 500-800 words give or take. The Mc is OP and good looking. There is Wincest and Polygamy in this story. You should give it a try at least.
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