Reviews of One punch man in MHA by doesnt_matter - Webnovel

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well you made this very different than the other stories of one punch man in my hero academia,because the mc actually has a quirk and the power of one punch man,so please keep it up I love this story please.

Super cool novel i really like but its a shame that there not more new chapter the release Is really really slow so please author post more Please

Decent story, but your not updating anymore even thoigh its a good idea. plz can you update agin and then i will give a five stat rating, because i love this novel

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It just isn’t good it goes to fast and just throws things in . The way the characters act aren’t natural . Some times it seems forced . The lemon scenes are just the bare bone with nothing to it even if it’s the author first time . The only good thing about it is the idea of one punch in my hero but that’s still very basic and has been done with other characters powers tons of times .

Saitama:I'm in another world mayb.... sees villian insta kills it Saitama:never mind Is how I amagine this crossover to go but seriously all for one is nothing on this man I wonder how the author is ganna pull this off

This one of my favorite my hero academya fan fictions the main character is good that he does not care about the main story and please do more original things like the gangs arc please do more of that and please please I beg you don’t do a harem I really like his relationship with momo that’s everything I have to say please don’t drop

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To be your first novel you are doing very well, I do not want you to think badly of me but I recommend that you read or take some references from Madara Uchija in MHA, romance is very good especially since it is not an OP to easily do everything. = == It is your novel and I like it, I just give you a suggestion. ==== And it is very interesting One Punch Man, I have never seen a fanfiction of the bald man with a cape in MHA. To all this thanks for reading so far, you are a genius 😆😆😆👍👍👍

Pretty good so far though some more complicated writing would be good................................................................................................................................

As my first-ever fanfiction... I am giving myself 5 stars shamelessly to motivate myself, Give it a try and leave your honest opinion in the review... . . . Over and out!!

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