This novel lacks a profound review so here am I, to present you with a detailed one. Our Mc is reincarnated into DxD with a non-sentinel system and a chat-group in his phone through which he can contact other anime characters.
Mc's personality tends towards rationality, he isn't polite to others and usually acts indifferent towards them. He cares about his mother, sister and father. He is friends with Saji who isn't a devil yet. An enemy is an enemy for our Mc, doesn't matter if the enemy is a woman or man.
As the title suggests, Mc possesses Longinus 'Annihilate Maker' who gives the user the ability to create monsters of any kind using imagination, information and energy as a base for creation. Currently, other than creating a spider who can hide him from the supernatural, a blue butterfly which creates illusions, he is in the process of creating a monster who can manipulate senjutsu.
He wants to avoid interacting with other supernaturals until he gains enough strength as he will be dragged into the plot no matter what. Currently, his direct combat capabilities are unknown also he doesn't like Red Dragon Boob emperor.
This is the summary of what is going on in the novel. Now what does this story has to offer are as follows.
1. Updates:- One per day
2. Background:-Good but there isn't much in-depth details or visuals though Mc is described as of how he looks.
3. Character design:-8/10 A bit naive, he needs to mature a bit as his opponents are going to use whatever they can against him. Basically, he needs to be creative and hide his steps from others. Cover up his tracks and try not to use his powers within the school building where he is basically within potential enemy territory. You can't just put a teacher under illusion within the enemy territory where other supernaturals can actually be monitoring you.
4. Imagination and writing quality:-8/10 Extremely creative author as he is able to come up with some truly interesting ideas for the ability. Also, the writing quality is good, nothing out of ordinary but makes the story enjoyable.
My personal thoughts on the novel:- Very good DXD fanfic as there is basically no good DXD fanfictions out there. I would like the novel more if Mc can act more secretly, especially when his friend is going to be a part of a potential danger to him (Sona).
Plz do not engage with Rias and be creative......
Overall this fanfic is truly worth reading, I hope it isn't dropped.....
Stay safe and stay inside......
Good afternoon dear author:
I am writing you to say goodbye because for external reasons, it is very likely that I can no longer read your story. This is why I want you to know that I liked it a lot and I want to give you my support and thanks for having made an effort to create it, and although I am no longer there to give you my gratitude comment, I want to say "Thank you very much for the chapter" for all future chapters you decide to do.
And although I don't have much time, I want to express to you that I laughed a lot and enjoyed the content that you dedicated to writing since it is not easy to find good stories like yours.
Thank you very much for everything, I hope you have a happy life and that I hope you can continue writing incredible stories like this.
dropped at chapter 2. doesn't matter if the story or premise is good. you'd be a fucking retard if you keep reading a story with an mc that annoys you every time. also mc is an asshole. There's a difference between being indifferent and being an asshole.
Tbh this is one of the best Fanfics I've ever read, my only complaits are, the MC is a little boring, and the Fate arc is taking forever. **: I've never seen a fanfic with so much anime/manga/game memes, funny af.
this novel is good but it does not focus on DxD much other than start it's used as a sort of like jump world(writing this review on chapter 129)
0.those who have no knowledge of fate series will be in for a pain in the as* if u don't know the story its not advisable to read of u can see both fate and konosuba then read this fic
1.from these 129 chapters first 50 chapters are very good
2.then for me personally it went down the drain cuz i don't know abt fate series which is so long stretched plot of around 70(?) chapters
3.konosuba, i only saw this anime but it's still boring the author brought in other reincarnators/infiltrators in to top it off there is no mc in this arc of konosuba which i don't know till when this will continue if it goes like fate it'll take 70 more chapters and will not know the power of mc in next arc if its again an anime/manga/novel I've not read I'll give up on this one
so basically my whole experience of 70-80 chapters is ruined that's why i gave this rating
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One of my favorite novels on the site and is one of the reasons I keep coming back to Webnovel.
It's a solid read and while the MC has gotten OP, he still has room to grow and is likable. I just wish my fellow commenters wouldn't be sending you so many mixed signals.
Focus on what you want to write and it's fine if you want to ignore us when we want the story to go a certain direction. It's your story and I look forward to seeing how far your fic will go.
You are very close to dragging Sis-con with a Dimensional Chat group down to #6 in the weekly power rankings so keep it up! I believe in you!
Don't get me wrong, this story is great. The author has put a lot of effort into research and constructed a wonderful multiverse system that is not cringe in the slightest. However, with all of this going into the story, the grammar and the writing have dropped since it started. The characters have begun to dip into the dark side of being one-dimensional. I hope that the author will read this and try to fix it. Doing these will hopefully greatly improve the story as a whole.
This is novel is gold in webnovel , i hope the author keeps going on. Thank you author for delivering such a treasure to us. The story development is so intricately made that it blows your mind with how deep the author thought and until now its being a very fun read
The author tried to make the mc powerful and ended up making him a hack instead, there's quite a lot of chunni in it and a huge focus on the other worlds compared to the main dxd world.
Akane ga Kill
Fate (Type Moon)
- Konosuba (Everyone except MC)
It has good comedy and character interaction, but tends to be quite random with no definitive storyline, going as the author pleases making it a good read if you want to pass the time but not really worth investing much into it.
Background characters aren't defined properly and the author expects you to know the different novels/worlds to a certain depth to fully understand this novel.
The Type Moon Arc has more chapters compared to the DxD Arc, same for the Akame Arc making it a multiverse fanfic rather than a DxD fanfic.
The author also dislikes Issei and has 'removed' him from the novel while the MC also having a few screws loose and adding in a dark undertone to the novel and characters.
In the end, the story is unique on its own with the annihilation maker element but has skewed too far from the existing power balance from the DxD world making this novels future looking quite bleak.
This is my honest criticism of the novel and I don't intend to devalue the novel itself.