Obligatory author review. I try to be not too cliche, but Iβm gonna inevitably have some. As for why I picked Xie Xie as the main character: I honestly like him as a character later on, and I think his friendship with Wulin was cool. I thought it would be nice for them to have a kinda Gon and Killua dynamic. I also like Yuanen Yehui as a love interest. Obviously, it wonβt go the same as canon because I liked their relationship but not how they got into the relationship. And finally, while I did like Xie Xieβs character as a whole, there are some aspects to him I didnβt like, and I think he had way more potential than what was shown in the story. Imo they did him dirty just because he wasnβt the main character.
From this point on: slight spoilers for like chapter 1
As for Xie Xieβs cheat, itβs basically a library with some anime martial arts and weapon styles. I donβt think itβs honestly that op, mostly because pure skill and technique really canβt help you when some dude one shots you because he has a dragon arm. If heβs fighting someone whoβs just honestly way more powerful than him, heβll just straight up lose. Another reason why itβs not too broken is because of his body canβt use it, then it wonβt work. As an example: if he gets the Eight Gates technique, hows he gonna use it cause he has no chakra neither the Eight Gates in his body. The only foreign power system Iβm introducing is Haki because 1: itβs not too broken and 2: I just love it. On top of that, I actually have an explanation on why he can use it.
Also, this story will be a bit Slice-of-Lifey because I want to develop my characters more and help emphasize how theyβre different from canon. On top of that, the MC wonβt have any foreknowledge on Soul Land at all, so he wonβt try to keep canon the same.
Anyways, what Iβm trying to say is that if you want a harem and op-mc who never loses, you should probably leave.
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