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Asmur
The way the NPC at bar interacting seems familiar to me. It's kind remind me a game that i used to play rofl. . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . .
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nanda_prima
Halo kak! Aku yang dari group fb webnovel indonesia. Ceritanya sih keliatannya sih menjanjikan ya, walaupun sih kekurangannya cuman di grammarnya.
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Cathooo
If you're not minding the grammar mistakes then overall this novel is okay. The world background is quite confusing at first but as the chapter goes it doesn't anymore.
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Debauchery_Scholar
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Avrilean_
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Billy_Castellanos
Thank you for those who read my work. Please be expected that there will be alot of grammar mistakes because i'm not english native speaker. English can be considered as my 3rd language.But don't worry, I'm working hard to improve as the chapter goes ^U^
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skywalk3r
The idea of the story is quite good. but many grammatical errors like a man becomes her and many others. Word per chap needs more juice especially novels like this that mention status and item description so work hard thor.
I think you should focus on one story then write multiple ones if you think this story is progressing well.
Don't worry, I'll be back when more chapters are available.
Keep the good work and happy writing. :)
Thanks
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Tee_hee
perfect world top player hahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahaha lmao never expected to see this i love that game and still play it...
i am the top sb/ea
Jlairu