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For the exp i write that
For my Author sama i post that
For my soul i gie that a 5/5
For you who read that
accept this review.
Oops! I slipped on a banana peel and accidentally gave myself 5 stars!!! How can I recover from such embarrassment? ;-; Oh, I Know! Stone me to death - that's right, stone me.
Ini fanfic yang bagus dan sangat menarik.. saya suka alur cerita dan pengembangan karakternya..
Saya harap ceritanya akan semakin menarik dan cepat updated ya author
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I Loved this Fanfiction
a wish fulfilment fic that is extremely frustrating to read. first when mc need something he will gain it using the gacha, second he have many skil but don't ever try to use them to gain money for his poor family and third and worst of all author started giving harem to other guy, I dont care of he give pc character for these other guy but he give amazing waifus to simple side characters
okay honest review here.
i won't tell anyone to not read such fanfic its there choice
but i will warn you, your brain cell will rot.
and there is no unique concept here nor a great idea author wants to express.
just wish fulfilment of si mp who has to bend the world to fullfill his fantasy instead of trying to achieve something on his own.
so your choice.
if i offend someone, soory ,but consider what i wrote carefully.
It's my first time reading a fan-fic because I got bored on Japanese light novels and webnovels, and what would I say but, this is is so good. I'm on chapter 60+ and the story so far is so wholesome. I would like to see(read) the quintuplets soon as well as Marika!! I hope the mc would give Marika a senzu bean so that she could enjoy her childhood!! Every story needs a comic relief and Marika is the most suitable for that role!!! I also want to see(read) Futaba from Bunny Girl Senpai!
I definitely have to save a lot of chapters, at least 120ch? Idk...to read freely and enjoy it....I love slice of life fanfics...pxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxq
This is the best Slice of life fanfic I've ever read! please don't drop it like me and continue writing this master pieceβ€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€
pls dont drop here have a few cookies author u deserve it πͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺπͺ
from what i see it not super op while mc is op which is what i like and do u think u can add komi san ? PLS i like her eye whenever they show them her big eye IT SO FREAKING CUTE omg
Nice story i like how the characters in the story interact and developed also i like how the story progress and i like that the story and pacing is not rushed when i read the first chapter i immediately become fond and interesting in the story because of good comedy(ehemm harem ehemm) of course so I'm totally recommend it i hope the chapter will approach the numbers to 1000-2000 ko like the Sis-con dimensional group chat (ehemmm totally my favorite fanfic of all ehemm shamelessly promoting others work eheem)
Good story.
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the story is good and I quite enjoy it. I don't mind if the side character is having a harem, but who? I'm just curious. teeheeπ€ and the only problem is that the updates... I hope Author-san can atleast update 1 chapter a week to have a stability in updates. and if you can 3 chapters, do it!π so I hope you can spare atleast 30mins or when you have free time to write.π₯Ί
Itβs one of the best fanfics i have read
Please dont drop ittt
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Its a relaxing fanfic though I wish the author would show us more interaction of the MC with his family.. By the way the romance is also balanced not too much and not too little.. Overall it's fun to read and Thanks for the chapter ππππππ I hope you don't drop this and keep updating it even if you just update weekly..
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