Reviews of Transferred to the Monster World (HIATUS) by Sanyam_Raj - Webnovel

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Vidit_Verma
Simply a masterpiece of literature and I am sure that one day this Novel will be achieving new records . Your writing skills are mind-blowing and your potential is unmatched.
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hartpeler
apologizes, i just realized that i havent put my review. I'm taking liking of this novel since i was firstly read it. like, you know. his story is insanely expandable and he has a nicely readable words, so its on you now author!. you can always expand everything they thought that its a plothole !
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Respro
Saw someone posted a second review, I was like it has been over a month while reading this so why not, Well, my previous complaint is no more because the author kept his word and the harem tag was not for show. The action scene could be more detailed but it is certainly better than the early chapter, the action in Volume 4 and 5 was much better than volume 1 if you are thinking of dropping the book as the initial chapter was crappy stop and read till the latest chapters believe me you will see the improvement and well author keep doing what are you doing.
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MITCHIEWilliams
This is a really good read with a great plot and well developed characters.The synopsis is well written. I highly recommend this book, the plot is really refreshing.
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demonessNikita
All the characters are well defined. The story is different and unique in its own way. It interests you with various plots. The characters Sam and Clara are lovable,.
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Divine17
The writing is a bit messy. There is to many side characters and side stories that it seems like the mc is unimportant. Its like reading Naruto, but we are too focus on Sasuke 75% of the time. It got a little better around chapter 60s, but just please focus on the mc...
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Ancient_Egyptian
This is a review of the first arc, I will say that it is a good beginning but it has so much haste and a very good concept but your characters' emotion is just a mess of illogical response to different situations, you can not let them accept everything like it is normal to accept this kind of thing. you make them transport to a completely different world and the only reaction they have is that of surprise, no fear, no caution, no depression, no worry, no distrust, no anxiety, no loss, no panic, just some mild surprise and more than that you make them kill each other on the spot even though you add the parents of all students to the mix and the reaction of our group of friends is to run and hide and act normally until somehow you choose the MC girlfriend to betray them and kill them then when they wake up as a monster you make them again accept everything easily with just some worry about their status as if there previous life as humans don't mean to much for them then again you make them help an unknown monster like them even though she tried to kill them before like their sensibilities are not even existed and on top of that you make them forgive her easily again after they defeated her and again accept her reasons like some 5 years old kids, on top of that you make the princess'reaction to everything Exaggerated, even if there is Love at first sight, there is no reason for a Runaway princess to trust them let alone love him. in the end, you make such a good storyline but a very bad foundation.
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aonly9470
This is a great novel. the setup is bland but you get interested in the execution of the premise very quickly. the beginning is very rough because the creator is more dedicated to creating new chapters for his fans than making the starting chapters beginner-friendly. but don't let that dissuade you from reading this book
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Lianerocks
I am writing my second review on this book the first one had become pretty old and I have come from 4th chapter to 52nd chapter. Well it was not a smooth journey but the author is surely improving and after reading this far,I want to read the end of the story so author keep up the good work and do your best.
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Jason_Coleman_1982
I don't know why someone would call this good the writing is horrible. I can't get through more than a handful of chapters so yeah but it does update ever day it seems.
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meixiaolian
Reading the first chapter, I'm already relate to a character and that is Lester. He is an otakuuu. Btw, I like the cover of this book and keep writing. It was detailed.
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Tanish_Kaur
This is my first ever fantasy novel and i really liked it. It is very intresting and i love their friendship and co-ordination. Indeed a very great narration and author have good command over language. Thank you author for sharing a wonderful story. I am wondering if they are going to set up their empire or will they find a way to return. 😊✌️👍
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MoeJam90
Action-packed and fast-paced. It gives you that RPG nostalgia but at the same time a different flavor to it. I like the pacing and character development on this series and I will definitely recommend this to my peers! Big thumbs up to the author!
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01_Sinner
A friend of mine has suggested me to read this novel . This novel is pretty interesting but at some places it's like a maze . But I enjoyed it and I wish that this novel will evolve .
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Player_12
It was sad when they parted but the overall story was never boring and the action never faded in the background . Some of the lines lacked the punch but the story has potential
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jordiMaverick_bW
There are a little hiccups there and there in the grammar and spelling. Your dialogues could be written better. But apart from those technical error this book is enjoyable and I would recommend to everyone. I personally say that it has the makings of a hit story
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Delemo
What can I say about this novel except that it is freaking awesome!!!! Never have I ever been in love with the story of a novel like this. I love it.
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Sankalp_Verma
Awesome brother loved to read your book. My friend recommended me to read this novel. You have a great writing potential and keep up your great work.
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Sanyam_Raj
This is just for the promotion of my book . this story is about a boy name Valor who got transferred to the monster world with his whole school where he was killed by his own girlfriend and is later reborn as a monster
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R2D2_T1T2
I found the story to be pretty interesting as the the story has a mystery vibe to it I like the mc and the heroine and the story has a pretty wide range of characters
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Lord_Meph1sto
A unique novel with a comicial undertone even in face of death.Its hilarious and I was laughing my ass of at some scenes!! Best wishes and nail it like always as you go
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Lakshya_singh
The story is pretty interesting, I was fascinated authors ideas of mc as monsters the plot of the story is pretty interesting and unpredictable unlike other novels of this gener
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Respro
Listen author just one word Your story and pacing and plot all are pretty good I have no problem with that but You have the tag but not got the girls .BRING OUT the girls man,but I have to say I do enjoy the story so you can continue with the build up just don't forget my req. 😇😇😇
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Just_Justina
I liked the use of Britain as the origin country as it is always the US and Japan.The title define the story and It also show women's Pov than just the mc which leads to th better development of the world and I liked the fight scenes.🤗🤗
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Lianerocks
I really liked the story so far. I have read till ch 4 and really liked to see the Pov of clara as it have shone further light on the school life and the understanding of the nature of Clara .My fav Character is Sam as it is the most comic one.
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DaoistOqVxq9
I only read the prolouge but this particular story has great potential,I was confused at first who the main character was but my confusion got cleared in the middle of the prolouge,I really liked the main character Valor and support characters Sam and Alex,I Hope the author continues the story and the pacing was really good especially when they got transferred to the monster world
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