Reviews of Diamond Kingdoms Space Mage ( Completed ) by Asce - Webnovel

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Bruh this guy has no originality, he copys characters and moves from others and crams them into his fanfic, not well written in either, he just ignores the logic of the world with his unoriginality

love it . lllllllll00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000

Interesting, thanks for your work. It turned out to be a fun and complete story.)[img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=fp][img=coins][img=recommend]

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Not good, character gets super strong really quickly and makes up bull**** skills that shouldn’t work. He also just stops getting strong at the level of captain which is cap since he was able to get to that level really quick. The writing is also kinda meh for me, it just feels wrong in this book.

it would have been pretty good but the story has no sense of progression and u can't really get a feel for the mc character because u do many time skips when jump right in to the training and during the training the Chakra control kinda made sense but then u just started adding a bunch of abilities that doesn't even line up with being a space mage and the and I haven't even read it yet but people are saying that the mc becomes as strong as a captain before he gets his grimace and when he gets it he progresses only a little bit when he does get it. That makes no sense what so ever y don't i just give the mc a system with skill creation with level ups cause it would have honestly are more sense when giving him abilities 😑

Eu gostei bastante disso, a historia é boa, e o MC é super legal. 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

it was good, though the story was confusing at first it was slowly getting better, I NEED MORE LIKE THIS.................................... I'm going to read another of authors fanfics

to strong to quick then i heard he stays the same streangh for too long n.. ........................ .......... . . . .. ........

you know over all story was good but you just made oc like nothing see like what will happen when elden reaveals asta pasts shocking everyone and like telling everyone about their magic I know it sounds childish but it's good make our mc op and you were rushing story too much ypu could have taken it atleast 200+ if u were reading manga and if u were thinking that mc does not know about manga just change like he hald already readed black clover at end though I like u did not make har which is good and dis not make him beta mc anyways that was my points after reading it , hope ur next novel will be better ( sorry for grammar mistakes)

Just finished reading the full fanfic. It's great! I loved how you handled the story! Hope to read some of your other books! .................................................

The best fanfic of Black Clover.. Great ending, simple and great. While his journey across multiverse would have been nice, this ending suits this story better... Looking forward to your next work .

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It's a very well written fanfiction and probably the best black clover one out there.,........................................................

Worst power progression I’ve ever seen, mc becomes a captain by the age of 15 WITHOUT his grimoire and then after 7 years is still the same strength, the other captains and his own students are as strong as him. Makes a captain kneel by only using mana but can barely defeat any of them in a battle. Some random spy is stronger than him in a lot of instances even though she uses sound magic against his space magic, which is like mud magic against Julius Novachronos time magic, completely impossible to win. Grammar is terrible, readable but mistakes literally every sentence, not to mention the author adds the most random things in sentences out of nowhere. The only good thing about this book is the steady chapters coming out, it’s not surprising to me that his other book only has a 3.8 rating. How this has a 4.8 rating baffles me.

Good black clover fanfiction! One of the best! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]