Reviews of I Don’t Want This Bad Ending by MyCatPaws - Webnovel

The story line is clear cut. Like even when reading the chapter, you don't have to pause for a bit to get the whole plot. A smooth writing. I really love how Eve is independent and gathers her own men. She doesn't trust anyone easily and also it is quite realistic that she is still wary of her family and the other male characters, except for Gab. I love how she takes a stance in the most poised manner and has unique "nicknames" for the other male leads....(lol) Overall, it is a good read with a strong female lead. Given the fact that there is reincarnation, I love how there was no truck-san here, rather a deep story of betrayal and insecurity which can is a trait of Eve. Also there is a deep story of the side characters, starting with the demise of her mother, her brother's behavior, her father's negligence, even outsiders' stares and ridicule. However, she is growing and every struggle is shown here.... Will be waiting for the updates!!!!!

This novel was on my limited time read for the day and it started off very interesting and different which keep me wanting to know more. The story was developing great and a bit different from other since the FL reincarnated into a novel. Evelyn determination definitely have you rooting for her and the people around her. However; it seem like the story was rush to finish. and it turn into so many character was actually reincarnated which got a bit too much 1.where is the development/turning point evyelyn start liking cabel? 2. who is the spirit king that duchess monica made a contract with? and what was the deal with her and eric? 3. how was Caesar always reincarnated into someone else? if evelyn keep reliving this event then why is that happen? wouldn't caesar and Elise win each time? 4. what happen to her contract spirt afterwards? overall the story is good just needed more elaboration before it ended.

Overall it is a good read, there was some parts that I did not like at all. One thing that I did not like was the time skip in there. I did not even realize it was a time skip till the middle of the chapter. Also, a lot of things were left out. For example, Eve and Clabel's relationship. It mentioned that he had found out she knew about him. When and how did he find out. Also, when did she commission him about Cassandra. Things like that bothered me. However, what bothered me the most was the ending. To me it seemed rushed, and did not tie up loose ends. It actually left more questions. For example, what happened to her spirits. It said at the end that they just disappeared, and then we hear no more about them. Even in the extras that were many years later. Author, you did a good job, just some parts could have been better written to make things more clear.

I love this story too but i didn't kinda like the ending, it disheartened me in the part when her contracted spirit had gone missing or so has vanished when Eve was unconscious, they didn't get the chance to see the result of their hardships that they experienced, they stand as a real family when Eve's real family abandoned her (though she abandoned them too). And about Prince Adley too, he just vanished like that, without knowing his whereabouts. I would like it more if the author give him a chance to change and make up for his wrong doings. As for the contracted spirits, it would be more pleasant if they witnessed their master having children. But although i'm kind of not satisfied, it's still the novel that i fell in love with (funny but yes, i fell in love with the novel lol.)