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EvilSovereignty
Anyone here so is this a net o rare novel? I mean does he get cu ck ed even after he gets in the game just like the protagonist? ——————-________________________________________________
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Master8734
Great novel! The beginning may be discouraging but it gets better with the next chapters.
I hope all is well with the author and more new chapters are forthcoming!
I recommend to anyone who likes interesting characters and well shown relationships between them.
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Trollface
all the characters in this fan fiction are just garbage. every woman is just a sh***. the only normal character is mc's father.
all the characters in this fan fiction are just garbage. every woman is just a sh***. the only normal character is mc's father.
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Daoist_DogHead
Great story whose name doesn't give it justice because not exactly accurate (you could expect lot of ntr but there is actually none). I really like all the characters evolution till now (especially the relationship between Violetta and Erlig) and the world building is good. Give it a try, in the earlier chapter Mc might be annoying sometimes but it's normal for the story and it quickly goes away.
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Marvin_Lynn
It is a great story. The author is not a pro, but does a great job trying to get things right. Story development is only slow because of the posting rate. World background could use a little work, but it is understandable and clear enough to give you a feeling it is there. Character development is slow but thats do to yhe chaotic nature of the character. i enjoy this book and hope it continues.
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jes1e1
note- I am a big amateur when it comes to writing reviews.
but I will still give it a try.
1. My Favorite part of this novel was the writing quality. I think that the author put a fair amount of work pleasing the readers with his writing capabilities which he absolutely did.
2. As you all may know, the story revolves around a protagonist who got transmigrated into a game that he used to play. and the bad news is that he got put into the body of a person who got NTRed which explains the title. The story revolves a lot about fighting and a lot of cuckolding (not the mc whos doing the cuckolding because he is actually the one getting cucked but ofc its part of the development of the story).
one of the key factors on why the novel got such a bad rating is because of how inconsistent the updates and development were. I can clearly understand that some people are just getting mad because of how slow the story is, and that is where the inconsistency comes into role.
imo, if you are going to try writing a slow-paced story, I would recommend uploading more chapters per week. 1 chapter per week is not really ideal if you want your story to be highly rated and so on. It may be because the author has some work to do irl and because it is only a hobby but it may have been a bit better to upload a bit more than once per week. (for example villain cultivator, endless path infinite cosmos etc)
I actually got a bit confused about the choices of the protagonist considering that he has played the game before and why he did not make use of his knowledge. I mean, if he did not even have knowledge about the game why would we readers even need the 'useless' information? I mean should he not have a bit of an advantage so that he does not start from "scratch"?
I wont really pick on the protagonists development because I actually considered the amount of chapters it has unlike those people complaining about why the protagonist is such a wuss and so on.
overall it is decent and it couldve had a better, overall "look" to it if it was less slow paced but thumbsup for the author.
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Game_Boy
I don't really write reviews(since I don't really know how to write one )but since I like this story and I wanna let the author know that there are people who always check if there is a chapter update(i'm one of them) I'mma just write it anyways.
First thing I wanna say is about the title, which majority of the people question about, which in my opinion there's really nothing you have to worry about.
Ok going into the story, I think the author did a great job, for instance I really like the character development of the mc and how he writes the fight scenes(very well written in my opinion),the training and the interaction between the mc and other characters.
For the chapters that I've read so far, it was good.But now I just wanna binge read the chapters where the mc takes revenge(I would really love it if the author could bring out more chapters on a daily basis but than again I don't wanna rush him for quantity over quality).
So what I want to say is give this story a chance/try and you might find yourself staying till the end,(which is probably not ending anytime soon) like me. I came for the cover of the book but stayed because of the story which the author clearly had put effort into.
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maat515
Well, where to begin... It certainly won't be a novel for everyone. Both the title and the beginning may discourage many people, but I think it's worth giving the author a chance because the last chapters are really great and give hope that the novel will be really good.
Personally, I like how the author presents the relationships between the characters. The relationship between MC and Violetta (definitely the best female character of the series) deserves special praise. I hope that in future chapters we will have the opportunity to see her more often.
From the comments of other people I can conclude that the author presents the fight scenes very well. Personally, I usually skip half of the description, so in this matter I can only rely on the opinion of others, and they are very positive.
As far as the quality of writing goes, I have no major complaints. Reading other noveles on the site, this one is certainly well above average.
To sum it all up, objectively the novel deserves4 - 4.5 stars (with a lot of potential). However, I give 5 because of Violetta.
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Somebeegdeem
Feels like the Novel has no direction that's the best way to describe it I also dunno why the title is reincarnated as an ntrd protagonist if it doesn't play any role for the character itself also hate the jet guy and makes me wanna punch the mc too
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RuBimba
First and foremost i want to tell you that i binge read this up to 50chaps
And trust I was frustrated beyond reasoning
Why?
*Spoilers*
I don't like Mc - He always lead by his nose, Author tried to make him too realistic that he forget when he passed the border of reasoning
No romance or so even upto 50
Even after interacting with 6 or 7 potential harem girls (or so the author portrayed them) his relationship with them doesn't increase a SINGLE BIT!
He cut his ties with his two friends girls who are indicated to be in love with him in early chaps probably after getting frustrated or so the first girl loves him deeply but she cucked him and the second girl probably likes him but she does with his best friend jet and acted like nothing wrong,
His fav Ms.teach already has a lover and he starts ignoring her,
The strict Student councler is a slut in a real sense so he after an event he starts using her as a stress relief that's it,
The girl who helped him from suicide starts showing some signs of "trouble"(that's what most probably author tried to show or I misunderstood which I highly not) before she starts distancing from mc,
His step mom which also shows sign of getting 'flustered look' when he comes home early which shows she is also in 'trouble' but she didn't tell,
Finally Mara the delinquent who falls for his previous self or something like this but then she starts leads him by nose in every way possible even though she loves him she still shows signs of 'trouble' and I don't know what author trying to do in ch42 that irked me SO MUCH she gets drunk and her two friends girls starts taking advantage of her body and records it before sending the mc (that vibes the disturbing ntr) after that the mc like always gets frustrated and cut ties with her because of that video late at night on phone call
Overall this novel overly uses the raope and unwilling se.x trope and most of all it all happens with the every female character that interacts and makes a some bond with the mc
And also he doesn't do anything to jet who spies on his pc and phone and betrayed him giving those access to the strict councilor who uses those access and erased the evidence that can result him to be expelled from the college which is a great deal to him and he acts like nothing when he meets him like SERIOUSLY
Author if you want to make your novel more realistic you have failed really well and even after reading 50chaps the mc doesn't gives a damn to those who related to him and I'm... disappointed in him
He knows everything thing but still..
If author wanted to give an excuse that these all girls are "just potential harem girls" and not official then please let us know why wasted Up to 50chap this doesn't explain anything at all
... just a disappointed reader
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Vastoking
First let me say this,
I HATE NTR WITH MY LIFE!!!
THIS STORY IS GOOOOOD
MC OBVIOUSLY ISNT NORMAL IN THE HEAD
AND ONCE AGAIN I HATE NTR WITH MY LIFE!!!!!!
But still 5 stars
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Snortsneer
Starting this review, I have to say that the premise of the story is very interesting and fairly original so kudos to you!
Overall Rating 3⭐:Good read. You may want to wait until there are more chapters.
Rating:
World background 3⭐: What you expect is what you get. The world the MC transmigrates to is a hentai-dating-sim whith heavy emphasis on Martial Arts, where if you if you are not perfect to a girl...well NTR is in the title.
Character design3⭐: Not much to be said really, most characters in genuine dating sims come off as stale and one-dimensional so expectations are kinda low. As for the MC...The concept is not necessarily bad. Reading about a weak-willed individual finding his way and tackling his problems in such an absurd scenario could be enthralling, but due to how the story is written in first person the MC comes across like a dumb crybaby, especially in the latest "Do you have a dream?" arc. Seriously it's like he can't think for himself at all.
Story development 4⭐: The story is captivating with mysteries,twists and heavy emotions thrown into the mix. It may be a bit of a mess at the beginning with moral and logical inconsistencies but I find it mirrors the MC's **yche so it's okay. What is not okay though is the lack of interaction between the MC and the netorare girl. Chapter 47 is my favourite so far mainly due to how the phonecall plays out, so you can understand how lackluster I find the interactions with the previous girl.
Writing 4 ⭐: The story can be read properly despite being written here, full marks....that is what I would have said, but I have to say that the story would be better with permanent 3rd person pov.
Updating stability 1⭐: Not much to say really. Look at the chapter content dates and judge yourself.
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AmIEvil
Writing quality 4
Story development 3
Character design 2
Updating stability- I guess it depends but I give a 3 stars.
World backround 4.
I'm not really an expert in terms of reviewing works but I'm still going to give my opinion?I guess.
Writing Quality is decent and readable, although there's some grammatical errors It was still fine. I like the writing style based 1st person perspective so I give 4 stars.
The story development for me is pretty off that's why I just gave 3 stars in this aspect. The story is very slow paced and It makes the reader feel bored. Me personally like slow pace to catch up the details and some stuffs. But slowing the progress too match will leave the bad taste to those people reading it. I highly suggest to learn how to control the pacing, Fast , Slow and etc to assure the reader is still in the story.
Character development is really not good for my opinion. At first I thought he was just a chill guy wanting peace and sort of playing video games with his friend. But after some events it was highly showed the he is the most loser , beta mc that I've ever read in my whole life. His personality is really sucks like in a bad way that it affects the readers mind. His decision is hilarious to the point I want to beat him up. I think It's okay to make him like a average person....but too much and making him like a sore loser just holding the potential of the story. At first he was bullied so he will decide to change into a new different person but still after all the things happened he just become more and more trash. He was aware the fact his friend is having *** behind his back making fool of him. I like the idea that the mc didn't care but what did he do?He played with them like a fool and it really look like stupid in my opinion. I don't want to offend the author of this story but It's been a while since I became frustated at the stupidity of a person.He can just avoid talking with that so called friends of him especially Jet, this kid is not a friend at all. He was just acting and making fun of the mc behind the back and thinking how superior he is by doing malicious things with the girls that close to him.
Ps: I'm not starting argument I'm just stating what I feel about the story so far so please go easy on me and don't take it as an personal insult. Everyone has the right to do what they want to do , right what they want and I really respect the efforts of the authors sharing their thoughts and imagination
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harkam18
(Sorry for my English, but it's not my native language)
In general it is a good novel, but there are several things that I do not like. I know it has a slow development, but it is too much. In other novels the MC would have already accepted that he is no longer in his world and that now he needs to learn a new common sense, instead of meddling in annoying matters. For this there would be a small event that would encourage him to improve, but in this novel he just takes it back, making the story heavier because it can feel repetitive. I mean, there were already several things that would have made a normal person seriously rethink whether with a normal mentality they could survive, but in this case the MC prefers to stay the same thinking that everything is going to change without him doing something. I can bear that at first he is a fearful crybaby, but that at this point he has not gotten angry one bit with the cause of everything is an idiot, honestly. I understand that he represses himself, but unless it is Gandhi, I do not understand why he does not have a bit of violent reactions to several important things and only worries about small things. These are all the complaints that I have managed to find so far, if I have more I will leave them in the comments.
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acedragon4
I like your story though at first i didn't like it based on reviews. it is decent story. though i feel sometimes i feel you are trying to make things too complicated at times. another problem in my opinion is your slow pace and due to which it can't be enjoyed in this webnovel chapter format. Yours is i think something to be read in bulk like after 5 or 10 chapter. Overall i like it. I think it is right balance somewhere between extremes of all wish fullfilment stuff where everyone worships mc and the other extreme where anything and everything goes wrong for mc. Yours characters also feel like people though mostly shitty though that is mostly real life things i guess. Everyone isn't a shounen character. though sometimes it goes too grimdark, i guess. Like everyone has something dark about them them. Also you should gauge your story every now and then between realistic stuff and entertainment for which most people come to read a novel. Too much wish fulment type novel get stale pretty soon but too realistic also have problem of not always being entertaining. Though best of luck.
I will follow your writing.
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SpectralApparition
If you guys are looking for the netori, harem and r18 stuff might have to wait till this reach 100 chaps.
mc character growth is just too strange for someone that was essentially an otaku. Too much self identity crisis and mc is still stuck in thinking in the norm when he is pretty much in a ntr game. The moral thing is just getting annoying at this point, contradicting thoughts that just annoys me or most readers.
This is slow paced but don't central this around just the mc since it got boring reading it. Like adding about world building and how that world works from his research in his PC would probably help the mc make solid decisions.
Cause from all the chapters so far, he gets pissed most of the time like as if a stick got stuck in his ass when given some info from his "friends". The big events so far that should have boost his character growth a lot, always have a reason to revert him back to normalcy thinking. It was already annoying at the beginning but now it's 45 chapters and little changed other than his physical attributes.
Especially the revenge part where he thought this plan and how he was really gonna ruin this girl and even brags about how he will do it right from those shitty "revenge" stories he read in his previous world. Instead we get something that missed that claim..... it would be better if the author never added those sentences/reference cause it just made the mc even more unbearable.
it may make sense realistic wise but God dam is it an annoying/bad story telling. Nothing is really note worthy that would hook the reader because of the "slow pace" and the 2 chapters or so of r18 text are probably what 90% of the reader cared about.
The slow pace is just hard to pull off and may need to really amp his character. Cause at this point, you can just skip/skim chapters and probably won't miss anything important.
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Kyubikn
I have not read the story so I'll just rate it 5.
I'm an open minded guy and I can take ntr stuff pretty well but seeing how everyone is calling him beta and stuff is off putting for me.
Being ntr'ed is bad enough and mc being a wimp on top of that is big No.
Secondly, I see comment about some girls (a potential harem candidate) being black mailed and forced to sleep with the guy who bullies mc and betrays her own feelings for him and lets him suffer...bruh that's fcked up.
I don't mean to be rude but from what I've read so far if u don't play your cards right this story will go down the drain real quick.
I'll give a proper review after I go through some chaps.
till then, good luck with your work. Cheers
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Agrizi_Can
I don't usually write reviews, but this story deserves some clarification. NTR carification: scroll to the bottom.
The writing quality is good. There are some things that could've been done differently, but overall it's decent enough for me to take it seriously.
Updating stability: 33 ish chapters in 2 and a half months. Worth the 5 stars.
Story developement: its developing, but it's getting mundane. It seems that it's on repeat with him going to the gym and back which prompted me to give it 3 stars. The lemons are good and is a reason I added another star.
Character design: diverse. I like that. A few are cowards while others are badasses. I wont go much into details but it's cool and got me liking Jenny A LOT (best girl).
World design: I really think this could do better. I get that it's a big city and all, but I feel like it could use more details.
Alright, the NTR. It's REALLY mild. This isn't even a cuckoos as the MC and childhood friend NEVER DATED. The NTR happened before the story sets in and MC doesn't even give a shit as he doesn't care for her. She does love him and is quite possessive, so she be crazy.
What I'm trying to clear is that you shouldn't feel discouraged on reading this because of the NTR tag. It's really mild and I get it if it's still painful for some, but try to read until you get to the chapter where Jenny comes in a second time. This stuff gets good after that. (Wont spoil too much)
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Saint_Summoner
like the content of the story but I want more chapters daily. I almost read all chapter in one go.and waiting for a new one.and the thing happen with his childhood friend I don't like it, hope she was also in his harem
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AliveReader
kinda slow update but it's an original so no blame on that and will need to wait for more update to get more information on the plot and character development and you will get a better review[img=coins]
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doggy_style69
Sorry for the long review but this my first ever review i have ever written.
I don't know about other people but when i read a web novel, i put my self in mc's shoes and think of myself as the protagonist of the story, that's why i mostly read wish fulfillment novels (where the mc gets a harem of virgin girls, dealing with enemies ruthlessly , having iron balls of courage and other general stuff that can never happen in real life).So when i saw the title of this webnovel i immediately refused to read it even when the story description interested me. But my curiosity got the better of me and i read it. And quite frankly it depressed me, i mean who wants to be cucked, humiliated, beaten up and be a wimp. so i wanted to stop reading it .
BUT
the plot was very interesting, so i went through the depressing parts just in hope that mc becomes a badass and quiet frankly i was impressed by the character development of the mc.Though he hasn't become a badass, he is on the path of becoming one. i recommend people to read this novel for it's interesting plot and character development.
NOTE TO AUTHOR:- i don't care even if joanne was forced or blackmailed into have *** with reid . i just don't want that bitch to become mc's woman , at present mc cut off friendship with her which left me satisfied but if i see any signs of her becoming mc's woman i will immediately drop the novel no Matter how interesting the plot is.
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Mc_Fly
Really different and refreshing novel, you can feel how the mc progress. it breaks many of the transmigration cliches. highly recommended.
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Anthorap
This novel man, I was anxious and had anxiety reading the first few chapters so good job on that I guess. After the first few chapter's it gets better MC grows makes good decisions I think, he still has challenges and it ain't easy but he's trying so yay I guess. The only gripe I have is his so called "friends" man, **** them why does he still hang around them and act like a friend for them, call them out on their shit, confront them, anything besides acting like their friends which they are not.
We don't even get confirmation if the childhood friend really cheated
on him just a video, some doubts on the MC and that's it. I really want the MC to confront her but noooooo gotta act like a friend to her whyyy???!
So yea good novel I guess anyone who wants to read go ahead and try it's cool seeing a weak minded MC make the decision to become strong and see him grow mentally and physically.
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ArchbishopOfSloth
Well, I can see the author's effort so I think I should give proper review. First of all, this novel is really risky novel and I my didn't have that much hope for this novel but wow, I surprised a lot. This novel is good development and characters are not forced. They really are written well. I have little problems with World Background because author didn't explain about that at all. Characters have some weakness but later characters are really great in my opinion expect from some a few characters like friends of MC.
I really recommend you guys. You guys don't need to worry about anything. As long as author didn't play risky I am planned to stick around.
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