Reviews of The Beasts of Men by A_lucid_Dreamer - Webnovel

Action-packed and riddled with pain, Elijah's story is heartfelt. The more you read, the deeper 'the Beasts of Men' dives into what makes humans human under the analogy of Beastmen. I do suggest the author go through their work again and see if they would do anything differently in terms of formatting and grammar. All the best!

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After over a year I’m going to finally do a Author's Review. Honestly after reading my opening chapters for this novel “SSHHEEEESSSHHH” talk about info dump😅. I say that to say, the Novel kinda begins at like Chapter 3. I plan to fix the problem at the beginning of this novel but that will take who knows how long. The longer you read the better my writing gets by leaps and bonds. I say give it about 10 chapters then you’ll know if your into this novel or not. Thanks for reading. I try to give this novel updates when I can but its hard juggling two novels frfr.

The story starts right at the point without any fake start. There's a bit of infodump in the first chapter, but it seemed to work on WN(I don't know actually). But as far as the story goes it's written in WN format and for a specific audience, if you solve the flow it would be more more promising. Good luck in your journey.

Not your typical cultivation Book. this one is unique. I was immersed with Eljhia story. A good writer make readers involve their emotion and this book does. what a splendid work. keep,up author. This one is beast!!!

The cover already caught my attention and fortunately, the story didn't disappoint me either. The author clearly knows what they're doing and I wouldn't be surprised if this book doesn't get more recognition. Definitely adding this one to my collection!

Very very well written. The vocabulary and grammar are spot on. The plot is epic but most of all, the character growth is really well done! Excellent novel!

The story is interesting. Great read, really enjoyed reading it so far. I recommend it to anyone.

Such an interesting story. The characters are alive and behaving realistically. Interesting concept. Nice worlbuilding. I just started but it seems pretty interesting. I will read more, so please don’t stop. Keep it up!

Wow!!!!!! Just Wow! Always have been fascinated by characters with depth and you got that down. Your world creation does not lag behind, beast kin, now that is something we don't see often. Keep it up!

The unique blending between the elements of the story are intriguing. The characters are well portrayed and the world building were beautifully incorporated. Kudos and keep it up to the author. Cheers.

A few grammatical errors here and there, a good concept of the mc, I loved it as there's a dash of Mmorpg in it, which am a big fan of since I was a kid, overall the world building is great aswell and I'm expecting more from this book... The main problem that I have is low stability on updates!! Author, put some elbow grease on it, and I shall thank you for your hard work... :)

Be loving the whole beastkin concept you got going on here. Gives a little refresher from the usual light novel. Also like how you thoroughly built the world and portrayed the emotions. Keep it going author!!

Something I really liked about this story was the world building and the emphasis it put on the characters background. Its something I don't see in a lot of books, and it felt really refreshing to dive into a fully fleshed out world, kudos to the author there. The main character was very nicely scripted, and there was a certain sense of mystery that surrounded the whole novel that I really enjoyed. A few grammatical errors here and there, but they can easily be overlooked. A lovely read, beautiful work

Very interesting setting and premise, a slight reminder of the Wereworld series. However, exposition is given mainly by the narrator and not incorporated into the story, while the writing style throws me off a bit. Will be adding it to my library though, it's got great potential! One can tell the author has a lot of passion for this work, with the character design drawings and all

It takes the standard xianxian formula and add little bit of mmorpg in it. I hope it doesn't go of the rails like certain other series and hopefully keep the current system. Other than that author keep up the good work.

I loved the book and I'm very picky about books, such books are always fun and the Author portrays the world building really well. I'd prefer you'd give the book a try yourself and I recommend that you do!

The story is one that calls out to a reader's sympathy and l hope the author goes on with this because it is amazing. Keep it up author!!!!!💜

Yeah, the novel is good at the start even in the latest chapters but I need more to identify what's the goal of the story. Overall, this is hot 🔥 like a fire.

Woah! you have an interesting plot here and I'm sure this would be a hit if you do it in the right way, which you are by the way. One piece of advice would be to proofread again. Like for thoughts, don't use brackets as it disrupts the flow. Either you could just add it as a description or use apostrophe. Good luck, Author!

the story and the plot was so amazing I've never heard about a beastman or something its interesting, the world and the characters are so fine there's just few punctuation errors but it is just in negligible amount so a good read

It's a great book with well-described synopsis and an amazing writing style. If you keep working on it, it's going to be turn out to be an amazing piece of work. Good job, author! Hope to see more of the good work!

A very interesting world and a very interesting concept, you will definitely hook with it. Slight writing improvement and it would be perfect. All the best author.

There is nothing wrong with the book, but, yesterday I was reading your book and I didn't even finish it because of how long the paragraohs were. You gotta make more paragraphs and shorter ones my dude

I can see that you started to work on the blocks of texts, so I won't say anymore on that situation. I didn't see any grammar or spelling mistakes while reading, and the story overall was amazingly interesting! Your book has an amazing amount of potential, and I can't wait to see it fully bloom.

This has a lot of detailed information that you'll need along the story! That means that the author cared enough to make the situation as realistic as ever while maintaining the fantasy storyline of the story! Kudos for the author!

Rapid Review. Your ideas for the entire book as a whole is great, there's possible interesting things going on. But each and every single chapter reads like a giant wall of text. Like, what's in the text is fine, but how you showed it needs more rework. Please give more spaces and paragraphs, keep a distance. My eyes felt like burning because of the sentences and words being mashed together in a giant paragraph, and on top of that this happens for a lot of chapters. And also, try to make Elijah even more significant, it was hard for me to know his character because of the mashed up paragraphs I mentioned.

Your story has a very intersting premise and the story looks like it's really going places, but there's a very glaring formatting issue at the moment: You need to make more paragraph. Each time a character starts speaking, put it on a new line and when another character replies to them, put the answer on another line. In a Webnovel, a paragraph is like a single a panel in a comicbook. Just this much change could turn your story around and make it incredibly more popular! I look forward to seeing this story grow!