Reviews of Overlord: The Origin by Evrabonzz - Webnovel

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You have written a excelent sotry , cant wait for more A few other overlord stories have done things sLightly similar to your own but one thing which i havent find i think is using the lore of the story to your advantage Why dont you write your characters lore and make yourself OP or give yourself more advantages when the story Starts

I start this novel not expecting much but look where it got me... Now I can’t even bare to wait for the slow update. It get very addictive. Author story telling skills are good.

the fan fic was good but its taking too long just get where the manga is that's the whole overlord in another world but you are just writing about his gaming days

Perfecto. . .

Truthful speaking this is one of the best and unique overlord fanfic I've ever read, please author ,do us the readers the honor of continuing your great work. Please and Thank you

Ita good

It is very good I enjoyed it a lot, it has great character development and great world building but the only problem I really have with it is the updates because for me it feels very slow. Than again I don't really have good patients because of how bored I get quickly.

Finished with the current chapter,,, please write more and keep up the good work.THANK YOU

this is the best overlord fanfic I've ever read it has good world background, has a smart mc and character development, unlike other fanfic mc who isn't even smart and has negative iq and doesn't have a character development, although the update time is a bit long, but it's still a great fanfic so keep up the good work.

The update time is irregular N n n

Everything except Updates is 5⭐. It's been 3 YEARS and we're not outside Yggdrasil and it's only about 60 chaps

The Overlord fanfic is one of the best I've seen in a while. the writing quality is good with an alright main character. The only thing that is missing is the pictures of the characters he promised!!!

I got hooked in the story but your update is slow,it kills my passion for it I hope for faster update without messing the quality .●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□●□

Not sure of this fanfic is plagerised or another fanfic plagerised this one. Everything is the same except the story is about different mc with different race/abilities... Also a minus for not being tts friendly.

Un fanfic del anime Overlord es una idea magnífica debido a su capacidad para expandir y profundizar en el mundo creado por Maruyama en el juego de Yggdrasil y en ese futuro distopico. Al permitir a los fanáticos explorar escenarios alternativos, personajes inexplorados y posibilidades no presentadas en la serie original, el fanfic se convierte en una vía para enriquecer la narrativa y el desarrollo del universo de Overlord. Al otorgar una nueva perspectiva a los eventos y relaciones, en particular con este fanfics pude estimular la imaginación en este magnífico mundo y enriquecer su experiencia en el mundo ficticio que tanto aprecian. Además, el fanfic puede ofrecer un espacio para profundizar en los aspectos de la trama y los personajes, brindando una apreciación más profunda del complejo y fascinante mundo de Overlord.

It ’s a great storyI I hope the author posts a bit faster but a great overall

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This is a great fanfic. One of the best i have ever seen. It is also my favorite overlord fic. I really like this. The only reason why all the catagories arn't at 5* is becouse I still don't know what the mc looks like and the wait for a new chapter after one is realesed is PAINFULL. There is only one chapter per month and the one for this month (as of the time im writing this) is late. I really love this fic, I just wish that I could get to know how the mc looks and be able to get chapters faster without patreon (i don't have leftover money to spend on a patreon).

The story's good but you go on way to many long explanations. They take up most of the chapter. u also explain things in a round about way and its very annoying. other than that everything's good.

It was an incredible book. At least the wind up was. The sorry leading up to the New World was great. Then as soon as the game shut off at around chapter 60, the book sharply decrease in quality. there were lots of story arcs and plots that never finished. The author also has huge time skips without explaining much, giving the character way too much power or way to little power to make sense for how long it was. Overall, it was a good read until the new world. It was built up on a solid foundation then the structure itself was built with sand rather than steel.

I believe that I speak for all readers, when I say that I am VERY unsatisfied with the chapter updates. Which is a shame, for I really do enjoy this novel. unlike most of the novels I read that average 2 chapters a day, this novel updates chapters that average in 1 chapter a WEEK! A WEEK! In conclusion, author-kun, keep up the good work, but please improve the chapters' updates.👍

It is the best overlord fic I ever read, but after the migration, hmm not bad actually but not as good as before. And the biggest problem since the start is updating stability, I feel the author would just dropped this fic anytime. Is it dropped for real now??

PLEASE KEEP IT UP DONT DROP IT PLEASE I hope you will keep writing soon

4/5 - writing 2/5 - update 3/5 - story 4/5 - characters 4/5 - world This is my rate for you fic. Annoying and best in same time. I didn't really like it when the new world arc just started

Honestly, please dont drop this since it's so good to read an actual fan-fic for overlord that isn't a harem nor it getting dropped. Please keep it up, and if possible, try to update more, but don't push yourself though.

There is not much to say except for that this is a great novel and a good fanfic,it expanded the overlord world in a way that it feel natural and you barely even notice that its a fanfic

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novel yang menarik walaupun sebenarnya tidak jauh berbeda dengan novel Overlord yang asli, tapi saya membaca ini menurut saya sendiri ini sangat menarik, ditambah dengan imajinasi Author yang masuk akal dan logis, dan saya harap author lebih fokus lagi untuk memperbarui novel ini dengan cepat agar para pembaca novel lebih leluasa untuk membaca dengan nyaman,... itu saja dari saya untuk secara keseluruhan novel ini bisa dikasi nilai 80 untuk keseluruhan..

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