Chapter comments on the chapter Skills Exam of the book The Great Demon System

A person that’s lived by themselves, working and living through bullying is not this stupid or naive? How come it seems he doesn’t have any common sense???

This is literally my vampire system. (I know it's not an exact copy, but it's really close.)

Welp, on the bright side, he's got nowhere to go but up.🙃

This book reminds me of "my vampire system" and "my dragon system"

I see some comments complaining about why the MC acts stupidly naive, remember that it had that abnormal change after getting the necklace, maybe in a few more chapters it will break

His stupidly high positiveness must be some side effect from the necklace.. like, It sucks the negative emotions and until it has enough to unlock the system, it won't stop..

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

Just wanted to say good on the author for actually listening to the audience and taking their advice

Pls can I get 5 likes for this... This story is very similar to My Vampire System but not necessarily the same....from what I have seen so far the main character in this story seems very gullible but still strong willed like Quinn Talen, he (Moby) seems to believe in people,not that there is a problem it that or what ever In all in all, the book has more potential to grow....i praise the writer dearly for this book and I personally ask that they write more.....I really look forward to more works by this person....... I've only stared reading, so do not be offended if my comments do not relate to you.......

hes best boi 😣

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Very similar start to My Vampire System

Is it only me or does the power scale a little to big?

This lookslike a good book so far. Although, like you said, “The first few chapters arn’t the best because that’s how I started writing.” Well something along those lines. I write for fun and there a few mistakes, but assuming on what you said I’ll bet that you improved a lot :)

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Boa p nois fml

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you know what? at this point i'm not even searching for a novel which is somehow good but one where the mc doesn't annoy me to no end........and it's not looking good tbh *sigh*

the power scale is to big, some guys on A++ power can kill our mc just from his fart alone lol

Ty for the chap