Reviews of The Great Demon System

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Drip
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Drip

IMPORTANT MESSAGE TO NEW READERS! PLEASE READ! My first few chapters' writing quality is very bad and lacklustre, as I was still a newbie at the time, but gets much better as the novel progresses! Also, the first 5 chaps can be frustrating (For a reason that is greatly hinted at) and are kinda similar to vamp system but the story and settings differentiate after that into their own thing past that point! I know my story isn't 100% perfect but there are at least some things to like about it! Hope you stick around! ❀️ No Harem too! I am part of anti-harem gang :D Harems add too much filler, something I absolutely don't want! I want substance in every chapter! Expect a little bit of romance but that will by no means be the main focus of the story. IF YOU ARE A VERY SENSITIVE PERSON THIS NOVEL IS NOT FOR YOU! The novel is also really gorry, the MC is a ruthless person who is not your generic protagonist and more of a gray anti-hero. He is really dumb at first but evolves into someone much smarter and more cunning! He is not world-breakingly OP and uses his brain to try to come out on top of any predicament he finds himself in. Sometimes the gore is harsh and other times it's funny so do expect that! I try to add comedy whenever I can in ways you may not expect or see coming! Thank you for reading this review! I hope you enjoy my novel! πŸ˜„
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1_0Rawkth1_0
ive read this novle to the most recent chapters,ive enjoyed all the chaps ive read and the comunity, this book has a good mixture of sci-fi and fantasy havijg a balance still leaning towards fantasy for now, also a note about the author, the author keeps up with his fans and has a discord that you can join to talk with othere fans and the author himself. There are some chaps that arent for the immature or people who are soft skinned and for anyone who thinks that it dives down the novle any no those chaps dont anything in the novle has always been to develop the story and it dosent hold back if you stop after a chap "goes to far" its your own fualt for not heeding the warnings this novle is for people with a darker side and are mature about it if you dont like a chap skip it and move on but dont complain about drip is there to listen to any critisizims and is doing his best to meet the demand of both us and webnovel, back to the reveiw there are some chaps with sexual and there was one minor enstance of rape but not a chap full of it, I skiped these ones becuase im disintressted in them but they do have some value to the storys develpment and i suggest you scroll down to the bottom of the chaps to find any thing important to the story, also if you do start reading the novle and are new to it, then i suggest that you read up to at least chapter 80 before decideing if you like the novle or not, well this reveiw is a bit long so sorry about the 1483 word reveiw
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GLIVGYFY
Not much to say. It was a fun read but not what I was expecting. But if you want a antihero mc with lots of plotholes then u are welcome to read it.
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Toxi_Kitty_Shin
The Novel is pretty great but I can't read it after chapter 115 not due to the extreme gore but due to the emotional heartwreck that author makes you go through. So be prepared to face emotional torture yourself.
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Aporia
This is my first review so bear with me. From other reviews you should know what's good about this novel so I tell you what's bad. First is that all of the main characters get continuously tortured and/or humiliated even after there grow stronger. There is always someone who is stronger and does awful things to the main characters. Like the main characters just can't win with a good strategy or pure strength, like someone has to get really hurt many time before they win. second problem is something I probably only have a problem with but the system in the mc head is a real person and is very annoying. She doesn't tell him things that can save him time and has a noblewoman personality. Example - the mc saw someone really strong and says wow he's really strong and the system says {I'm paraphrasing} "he's not even that strong", like bitch can I take him, like if I started to strike him right now unbeknownst to everyone would I be able to win. Third and this is also something I probably only agree with but the mc isn't really evil or good in my option. In the first few chapters they say that the mc will be the demon lord but idk what type of demon lord he'll be. Like he doesn't have goals/dreams it's just fight people who start fucking with the main characters and when I say fucking with I mean torturing till mostly death, and they would most likely died from the torturing if it weren't for something keeping them alive that if I told you would be spoiling. They do get there revenge always but I would rather not read that. All in all I got to drop this because I like all the characters in this novel and I can't keep seeing them get tortured and I know it's gonna happen again, you can just see it from a mile away.
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Harsha_3578
This novel is just bunch of horny and psychotic teenagers going around killing people as inhumanly as possible oh and btw there's nothing original about the whole fucking novel and the shameless author literally copied the vampire system and i don't have any problem with copying it's just that if you copy something atleast you need to do it a lil better dude like everything is so unoriginal and cringe worthy and the author said they the writing gets better but I'm telling you man it doesn't get any better Sorry for my english btw
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DesolateRipper
This suffers from what a lot of beginner novels suffer from, the writing style, plot, and though process, are too immature. Hopefully the Author sticks with writing and grows enough from this to write something great.
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Nauthiz
The quality of writing is as bad as it gets. It really shows how insanely rigged this website's rating system has become that this novel could ever reach 4.7/5.
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pj8888888888
really good first few chapters will probably make you angry but its fine after that you will see him get some revenge and progress farther into becoming more of a demon writing quality 5/5 the reason why is the author does make little grammar mistakes but its like was instead of when for example but nothing that will make it a 4/5 updates not sure due to only being at 70ish chapters but heard they are very good so why not just give a 5/5 development very good due to the beginning to middle how he gets revenge and goes to help get revenge for his household and himself so 5/5 design amazing it fleshes the fears and likes of practically everyone other than the back background characters world really good due to after thee first 10-20 chapters you can get a decent background
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Just_wait
The Plot and the backstory are essentially the same as my vampire system. All you did was change a couple names. If this was an english assignment you’d get a zero for plagiarism. Pretty disapointing
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Phanto_Tora
I decided to do a first review slightly early (On chapter 69) since I genuinley enjoy the novel so far, I've been binge reading it and I've enjoyed it a lot so far. 4 Star Writing Quality: I gave writing quality a 4 since the author seems to have been new to writing near the start of the story, having many repetative lines as well as some bad grammar every now and then, though I don't really mind that part. The author DOES get better after around 50 chapters, which is why I still have the rating so high. Stability of Updates: As implied, it's updated fairly often, and I like that. Story Development: 4 Stars because I feel like some parts of the story were pretty slow in development, but it's not too bad. Character Design: 4 Stars because some characters do seem a bit too similar to characters from prominent novels/anime, but the characters do have their own spin on them most of the time. World Background: I like the idea of how the world became the way it has become. Overall, I certainly recommend giving this a read if you're looking for a intruiging and twisted plot.
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JorgenThinn
So, it really hurts seeing that this novel isnt in the top 5 as it is one of the best novels i have ever read. the character design is soooo good, And the main character doesnt emmediatly get god like powers, but he actually have to work really f*cking hard to become steonger. Also, the first chapters are... decent, but later in the novel it just becomes waaaayy too good, im at chapter 150 something and i an honestly sddicted to reading this, it is just so good
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EverViolet
At first it was intersting but as I read more it gets boring to the point I just skip chapters that I see fit. I also don't like how lengthy the explanations are or their chattering. Its basically dragging useless talking for no reason. The swearing in this novel and SMUT is not my taste. So I think I'm gonna dropped this novel for a while.
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roman12308
I liked it at first but then the author was just streching out the Scenes and stuff the it got very boring like super super boring for example there was a fight where the mc was fighting this sound dude and it took like 10 or somthing chapters abd most of it was like talking ect
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Gasberg
You know at for when I was reading this I was like wtf is this but as I keep reading it turn out to be a good novel The start may be like a copy of vampire system but it's turn to have It's own way of turning
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sokk
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sokk

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CheckTheNeck
Overall one of my favourite reads in a while I've been reading this and lucifers descendants system and they have the same flow except this ones better by far thank you for the daily uploads aswell you take the time out of your day to publish a stable chapter everyday I applaud you for your hard work. ALSO can I get the discord link so I can see when the manhwa comes out and what they'll look like enjoy the rest of your day
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Zyjil
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Zyjil

Just a heads up for those wanting to read: The MC and his party are the embodiment of the villains in other novels. I understand that they are demons, but as a reader it just hurts my heart seeing something go against my line of "humane acts". This is just a heads-up and overall the writing is above average. It's just a matter of my own preferences that I am hurt seeing characters tortured and killed after being given good background. If author-san writes a morally-acceptable MC (another book), I'm all in to read it. AGAIN THIS IS JUST A HEADS UP FOR THOSE WOULD-BE READERS. Still good job for the writing quality.
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Kevin_Manzo
this story is completely unoriginal, its basically just a copy of my vampire system which is not that good of a story. But this just speeds past all the world building and mysteries because it just copies from mvs.
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ChaMy
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ChaMy

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Isaac_Hughes
I seem to like the demonic angle and how much gore it allows moby to inflict! definitely a little bit slow to broaden the dynamics of the environment!
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zBlackz
Very good! The very first chapters resemble a lot "My Vampire System", and the writing quality is not that good. HOWEVER, around the 8th chapter the history diverts greatly, to the better. The quality of the writing grows substancially chapter by chapter, and around the 50th, becomes very pleasent to read! Main character is a ruthless anti-hero, his actions are a result of the ambient he's raised upon, making them believable. The only thing I frowned upon was how fast the mentality of MC went 180Β°, I'd expect him to ponder a lot more before attempting murder or torture (Therefore I think it lacks development, but it's my personal taste speaking!).
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Allen_Joshua_3475
The story is cool but somehow it's kind of boring on the previous chapters nothing important just some chitchat other than the first flow that's the reason i gave it 4 🌟 stars
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trufflecocoon
many plot holes. you cant get the essence, cant see where it will end up but not that excited to be waited upon. yet, thanks for the effort author-san
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Arif_13
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xavier_roy
This story is top notch in my opinion and easy to read, well not always like when they are describing people being tortured, killed or raped. It's a must to read story and it's a lot more interesting then My vampire system. If you are a weak-heart then be carefull. About the Mc, Moby, he have his own sense of justice he will get revenge if he think he deserved it and will stop the people around him if the mistake was coming from him. There is time when he kill people on a whim but it's not a common thing he do. About the story, well it's all around Moby and since he doesn't want to save the world it's make the story interesting to look at since it's hard to get where it want to get us. It's for me to make a good reviews since a talk french, but i hope you understood what was my point. Good reading.
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