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How come that Percy is the worst dark souls gamer in history. Having 600 deaths in a single run of any soul game, is horrendous. I had about 80 to 90 deaths in dark souls 3, which is my first dark souls game run experienced. and I am not Percy Jackson. Percy would probably be able to complete all the souls games without dying once.

It is a fine bleach fanfic. My main issue is that the riding gets worse and worse with each chapter.

Great story you have based you fanfic on, but it sad that they are no one who has translated the last 150 except MTL. I hope you don’t stop riding on this story

The story is rather average in riding quality, update stability and world background. However he makes a perfect character, there is a yandere and then he just decides to kill her. The most interesting character he has built was kill with no real purpose behind it. All other characters in the story is boring and their character development sucks. The world development is just Bad, there’s nothing special about the world he’s trying to build compared to other stores you could read the only time he had something unique was with the yandere that was kill

The story has a fine plot, and I really like the idea of making a kingdom. But there is no greater character development nor any great Emotional attachments to any of the characters. About the grammar, I am a person who can read MTL and live with it. But the way the author never use she or her and instead only uses he or His. Is the most obvious and annoying grammar errors in the story.

There are more chapters why do you not translate them. And I am talking about 60 more chapters there is all machine translated It’s an extremely nice story that I follow from the start just forgot to give a review