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Zoro_The_Dark
Hello everyone! I have just updated the prologue. Those who have already read the Generation 1 then please read the prologue one more time. It is really very necessary. Those who haven't read the G1 can also read the prologue. It will help y'all in understanding the story easily. Thanks!
And I'm rating this book 5 starts cuz I'm the author and I'm writing this story cuz I like the story!
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Houraji
I only finished read a few first chapters, yet I can hold the temptation no longer... a temptation to write the first review.
The plot and world background is surprisingly more larger than I anticipate. Multiverse and they has their own gods in rule. As a result the powers become unbalance. Thank to that, our MC has a reason to do his adventure to balance the powers under "one world"
Once again this review is based only a few first chapters so I'll write another if I've read more chapters.
Thanks to the Author for his enjoyable story.
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Dumpling_Aunt
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Wow... this book is so well written, got me hooked from the very first chapter. Five stars because it deserves it. Keep going Author.
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ACE_KinGz
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_mystique_
The dimensions and the ranks are written and described brilliantly. it's hard to find such an impressive and intriguing book, It's a must read. The character development is slow paced but progresses along with the story. I like this book and I'm definitely adding this to my library.
GOOD LUCK ZURA! π€
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Shiny_Shirogane
A five star deserving book. I would recommend to my friends.
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Innocent_Author
Yo, Yo, Yo, Speaking of an awesome story, the story has an interesting storyline and OP character.
Please continue the good work and may someday we reach what we want to!:)
(I'm still reading)
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IkuSaari
I don't have the energy to read more than a few chapters right now, but may I say I enjoy how logically driven this story is? There are lots of numbers and it really helps to visualize the events in a 4-dimensional timeline. Also, points for being consistent with the numbers (like the floor that a certain thing is in). Solid, action-packed storyline.
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HarpGrand
Hi author-nim!
Just added this book to my collection.
I am greatly overwhelmed by the sheer number of chapters. Are you human? This skill is beyond human capacity! More power!
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TacoKun
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this.
I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say...
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SoDown
This novel is amazingly detailed and while there some cons to it, the novel is detailed and the MC is reasonably characterized. I feel that this novel should be selected as it is a refreshing twist on a original topic and I would to see where it would go. Not that I really like this novel.
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Cry_Maker
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CoolForniteplayer
Wow, just reading the synopsis gave me chills. this is my first time coming across this kind of story and i must compliment you because it isn't easy to come up with this kind of idea. I applaud the authorππ»,good job.
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yu_tanit
Interesting story. I like the way the author has described the characters and the setting of the story is entertaining. Keep up the good work author!
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Nattychris_22
Well, what do I have to say, this work is nicely done! I mean, I was immersed into the world, and I could vividly imagine the condition like hunters and dungeons. I have to say, the author is playing tricky on timeline, like 2 generations in the plot, it kinda hard to catch, but the author nailed. I hope that author keep on this good work! Great job!!
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Alice_A_Kavanaugh
It is an interesting story. It has magical elements that can lead to entertaining battles and lots of action. The protagonist is a young man full of passion and a sense of what is right who would undoubtedly help those in need with good friends who would cover his back.
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Glenstonx
I could make this a perfect one but I noticed some errors in the story and I hope the author realizes or seen those. Although I don't really read these fantasy novels, it actually piques my interest might continue reading this work!! I commend the author for bringing the imaginative side of my brain into the world of fantasy. Glad I stumbled upon this story!
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Song_Shinyi
I rarely read books of this genre... But... damn !! I just read till the 7th chapter and it got me hooked !!
The whole story just takes me into a fantasy world where I imagine myself over there and fighting the demons and everyone...
Dude, you really write well, Everything is just captivating and pulling you in.
I want to finish it reading by today because I can't keep on waiting. I'm curious !!
And the prologue shook me... I mean why... are they dead ?? Why ??
I was starting to like him and he is not gonna be there ?? Why ??
Anyway... I hope you continue writing and give us more good chapters in the coming days...
Wish you luck !!
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HeheBoi_123
Very good but very gore. It's bloody ***** mess. ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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niddaii2
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pelzy
This is not really my genre, but I love the character development, the style of writing and so on. it looks like this will be a banger. Good job on the work. I wish you luck.
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BREAK_DOWN
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Jo_J
Just to be honest... You have an interesting idea! Compared to other stories of this type, I think it's pretty good. Just... I think it is messy. I would change the construction of the concept.
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Anotoki
Holy crap the story is amazing, the first chapter is attention grabber and well paced, the characters are nicely written but I felt like somethings missing but eh.
Anyway, this novel has bright future and I bet if it keeps improving, writing quality and update stability. It will be appeared in everyone's recommendations, one power stone from me. You deserve it.
This novel is under rated and I don't know why.
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CHENGchangHANJI
This is my new review after catching upto the latest chapter. The writing quality has really improved from Ch 37 or so and the updating stability has also increased. The character design is really good and trust me, the character development is at its finest. World background is also really good. I really love the concept of changing mc with generations or so (ima jojo fan) so that's why I'm lovin this story.
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CULTIVATOR_3253
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