Chapter comments on the chapter A new life of the book Saiyan in Marvel (Completed)

Haven't read an OC schoolmate of Peter Parker centric fanfic before and most of the ones I read are SI Parkers. If you do focus on this I know it will turn out well based on your previous books and the only downside of those book is the story source is not finish yet so you can't get pass Wano with a clear direction. Here you have a road map till End Game if you follow MCU and some gems like Logan, Deadpool, Marvel Netflix, animated series(Xmen evolution would be a good one because they're almost the same age as OC), and especially the COMICS. Thank You for this and I hope this become a regular for you in time.😍🙏😂😂😂😂

For a grade-schooler this is a fairly impressive writing. However at this point Tony Stark was living in California and Peter Parker with living New York there's no way he could have jumped from rooftop to Rooftop to go from one to the other.

bro, there's a massive plothole, how did no one notice the guy has a tail coming out his arse? or did he stuff it in his trousers, even then it should be uncomfortable to sit on your tail since he hasn't trained it

adding this good marvelous sht into my library .. looking up for morr chaps

This is really intriguing and interesting... I hope you continue this Fan-Fic. P.S. good luck!

pretty good kept me interested throughout the entire chap. Thanks for the chapter, looking forward to the future of this fic

So good

It great you should upload more

Its Really Good so far cant wait for more

Loving the story keep up the good work

Moree

Great props for chapter lenght and the contents seems very polished as well, but damn if the MC gives off the vibe of a ton of bricks! He's so stupid and uninteresting, really goofy and simple minded. It's like reading Goku stuck on girls rather than food, so one dimensional and boring. Really don't know if it can be helped since the guy is supposed to be quite mature given reincarnation and all that..

man do it more

a bit too fast for me he got used to his situation a bit too fast plus moving from New York to California and senseless i mean if he flew ok but jumped from building to building c it's nonsense, in all I like as even I never read a fanfic of a saiyan in the MCU

The writing quality itself is pretty good for this site, but the mc is exceptionally stupid.

I don't understand why everyone hates the protagonist, I like and amuse his reactions or reckless actions. Then anyway I think that with the story it will grow or not, but I don't even care. Continue like this Author-sama!

Liking it! I fvcking love it, dude!!!

I think there is something wrong with my tail... It doesn't have any hair and its in the front.

this is amazing his goofy vibe is awesome and thanks author san i like it

Good Work