Okay, Author Here!
I want to thank all the readers who helped me so far, if I had made any mistakes in grammer, characters or vocab.
However because I met a lot of strange comments, this is why I'm writing.
Firstly, please, if you write review ot ar a comment, make sure you read ALL the chapters, because there were some who commented or made one but only read the last chapter.
Secondly. This maybe seem like your every day face slapping novel, but no. Just wait patiently and things will get interesting I promise.
Lastly, the helping but in a bad way. As I always tell, please if there is anything wrong, then please write it down Specifically! There was a lot who helped me that way and I really appreciated them, but there are some who just say This is not good" or "Top tier garbage please change". Okay I will because I always try to make the best for my dear readers, but please. Write it down Specifically.
I hope everything will be fine, so please keep telling me the mistakes if there is and I will change it right away.
Peace and have a nice day!:)
This story does have potential. But there are some problems that I find. If the author reads these hopefully he can answer some of my question that I have. For the record I am caught up to the latest chapter and will continue reading for sure. For the Writing Quality theres alot of grammatical errors and misspelled words that do need to be fixed. English might not be their first language and that's totally cool but theres alot that need to be updated. Story Development is interesting but it feels like a train with no brakes. Very fast paced. This isn't a bad thing but keep in mind that your Character Development bbn and World Building could suffer from the pace your setting. You arent even 100 Chapters in and it feels like he already God level. I believe the story would benefit more if there more time spent on him training his and other powers so we understand everyone's power level. This goes hand in hand with Character Design. Everyone feels flat. Secrecy is good but we know next to nothing about the MCs friend or Best Friend. Nor do we know why William is the way he is. Emma seems to be the classic soft hearted healer. She, in my opinion could be more of a personality or just different. Alice is also very flat so far. Is she suppose to be a companion? is she just a glorified assistant? I have a feeling that she could be so much more, such as taking the initiative and using her animal forms. The MC himself also need a bit more design. Especially when is comes to his background and the World background in general. What happened to his parents and family? What is his motivation to obtain power? What about him makes him be worthy to obtain a Pure Soul? Not to mention this Acedemy. Is it special? How is the MC able to go to a Acedemy even though hes an orphan? The back ground need a lot more fleshing out. Such as the the Countries on Earth. What is the Federation? What's the big deal about the 5 Great Families? What's society and the Government like? What role does the Association play in the Government? Where is the setting of the story? US? Europe? Asia? Or because of how the Calamities changed the landscape, is there even any old Governments left? I feel like so far that the story is sprinting on and not pausing the look at the scenery.
Interesting book, with great potential. However there are some cases when the author makes things a bit dizzs to read, but I think he will get better, so read till chap 55.
Only after that write your opinions.
I like how your first chapter started, I can already tell from there that this is going to be a fantasy one. The writing is on point and the characters were portrayed well and the world background was described pretty well. Nice one author!
This novel is really cool. I like the development and the flow of your plot. You make it easy for the reader to understand your world and that's something amazing.
The character design is fantastic and the writing quality is truly well done.
Author, I will follow your story, it really got me hooked.
Keep up the good work!
Amazing story! There's literally nothing to complain about this book, everything just sits perfectly!
The plot is very interesting, and also written beautifully. The author has the ability to intrigue the readers with his/her writings. I really like this one!
I'm sorry for the late review, but I'm glad to be here! Keep on writing, author! I will be cheering for you.
A good fantasy novel! I read your own review and i think you are actually better than what you said there. The plot is good and the developments are amazing. Unique characters too! Good work, keep it up!
The start of the story was something totally different and I loved it. I don't usually read fantasy stories but this one is good. Like real good. I've only read a couple of chapters and I'm already having a hard time trying to stop myself from reading all of it. The character and world design are unique. I can't wait for how all of this will unfold.
Thank you so much for working hard!
Yooooo this novel is amazing like the Arthur must have send out a literature bait because I'm hooked lol. The characters interesting the plot, lit the pacing of the story is wonderful, keep up the good work
I love this kind of book! The genre is definitely one of my favorites and the author is doing right by it. I am only at chapter 16 (and I'll surely continue reading)but the story really hooked me from the beginning. Aside from a few edits here and there, the author really knows how to write! Well done, author!
Wit a Good flow and good characters I think this has a really good potential.
How sometimes it has some stupid parts, but it will get better if you continue to read.
The soul stone concept is a really interesting idea, so continue writing!
Okay... just finish the latest chapter.
It's not good. The drum part with the clicking and clapping at the same time totally spoils my imagination. It's like R is trying to beatbox.
From the way you write, you really could have a need of punctuation. As well as necessary research.
Sorry it might seem harsh, but this is a sincere review based on my personal taste.
I think this is the best novel of all time.I never had that experience before in this genre because that novel is matching with my preferance.I hope everybody gonna read this novel.Who read this i hope his/her family will be the luckies family in this World.Thank you have a nice day love you all❤❤