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DogPerson
Shameless author here with a 5-star review I will also provide some clarification about the direction this novel is heading. It is more like a Zero to Villain story than a Zero to Hero , with the main protagonist becoming a villain with a twisted sense of justice and a morally ambiguous view on how he should "correct" the world. If you have any questions or observations please reply here (If you enjoyed the story so far please share so others can find it)
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Alex_Stiv
Even thought it seems at first like the classic : " person goes to another dimension and becomes a hero " style of plot , it turns out the story follows a different path and brings some plot twists to the table . Very interesting concept , well written , and with very accurate and realistic fight scenes that make their visualization easier . Great potential ahead
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PlzDontHitMe
Would've given five stars, but author forgot about it and hasn't updated even tho I waited years. Amazing writing. Great story. Honestly only wish it lasted longer
1yr
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KeraaWood
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Rad_Reader
There is not much things in the novel right now but it has great potential and the fights have good scenes. The fmc is not here though. Spoiler: mc has killed many people so far
3yr
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FellowCulitivator
Great read so far.The plot is fascinating and every character that’s introduced is interesting in their on way. Can’t wait to see how the story unfolds from here!!
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Ksaile
Oh my god, where should I start?!. This is my second time trying to write a review after some technical problems I ran into. I’ll try to keep my thoughts as unbiased as possible even though the author is a friend of mine. Now to the Novel. The story is fresh, even though it has borrowed thoughts from other novels there is a very satisfying blend of the author’s own personality and style of writing. I’ll try to keep everything spoiler free so I’m somewhat restricted in what I can say but I want to say this. I really liked what he did with the RPG side if this novel and it definitely gives it a refreshing aura. If you don’t like RPGs don’t worry cause there is an equal side of the story that has nothin to do with rpgs but I’ll leave to find out yourselves😉. As regarding the characters, they are not plentiful but they are well written and portrayed specifically talking about the protagonist. Expect many twists and hang tight cause it’s going to be an crazy ride! One thing that I didn’t like as much as anything else is that I would prefer a bit more variety character wise but there only so much you can do as your first time trying to write a novel so props for that. Before closing this one out I would like to provoke everyone to give this one a try cause it’s truly fresh and aspired by the author’s own personality and I guarantee that it’s very strong first try at writing with vivid battles and images that come alive as you read so stop reading any more reviews and give this one a try!!!
3yr
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Filkouts
Story develops at a great pace. Small easily readable chapters and an interesting backstory of how the world may look at the 22nd century. Characters are intriguing and I love the antihero take. Interested to see where this is headed
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John_Katsanos
I really enjoyed the fight scenes as I find them to be very accurate and it is easy to immerse myself in them Also the injuries don’t have any medical inaccuracies so far Good job
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DaoistV3CpH6
Really good and fun to read so far!! The story is really interesting and makes you wonder how everything will turn out! Looking forward to read what happens next!
3yr
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Twikletoes
Well i am curious to see how the protagonist actually manages to survive without being op So far seems good Keep up the good work Big fan of Julius by the way
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Mr_death_hand
I’m A fan of anti hero stories and thIs book really caught my attention. The author provides us with great scenes in every chapter and the Flow of the story is very nice. I love the fact that this book Has an original story telling and its not the typical anti hero story. this book is one of the best i found so far and i definatelly recommend it
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