Chapter comments on the chapter Chapter 5: Will you merry me of the book Universe Traveller (18+)

What happened suddenly got married, and the author note in the middle of the story disturbs

Wow...thats fast...

That escalated quickly, he kinda just told he died and she went “yup!”? I don’t even think I understood what was happening to him because it happened so fast!

hmm speeeees

where s sauce?

still confused I get the concept of the story but its moving a lil too fast

Si quieres hacer rápido las cosas este capítulo es un ejemplo xd

Thanks for the chapter