Thanks to everyone, this book got a contract!!! why the chapter locked? because writer need money to continue their work [img=recommend] I hope everyone understand [img=recommend]
Mythology + awesome writing style = an awesome novel. I really enjoyed reading it and got too excited so I'm leaving a review to tell everyone to try this novel out.
Should be rated 0. Mc is a pedophile. He βfell in loveβ with his student. Absolute buffoon and weirdo of an author. Should be ashamedπ€‘π€‘π€‘π€‘π€‘π€‘π€‘π€‘πππππ
Woow man!! You really good. Big ups. such great creativity and the way you merge everything is pretty awesome. The book is really good and am addicted to every chapter in the book. Hope you complete whatever you doing and update it more and more. Cause man!! The book is awesome
I like the author's storytelling style. He is observant enough and the references used can make the reader's imagination wander. Overall good. Spirit! Readers will love your work!
This is a really good story
Big ups to the author
Great job mate
And your creativity level is really awesome
I am also an author but the way you bring the whole play together is somtin else. Would recommend this book to any reader out there. Great piece of work
Hey there Author, keep up the good work. The novel is coming great and I know that you can make it even better. So dont lose hope and do your best! πͺπͺ
keep it up author good work........................................................................................................................................................................................................
This is a super great work. A writer who knows what his content is and is ready to reveal it to the readers. That's some great writer. The work is perky and full of life of course. Kudos to the writer.
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I love how greek mythology is incorporated into the story. Greek mythology in itself is already a great piece of art, so I like how the author blends his idea with it. I've seen some grammatical errors here and there, but we all make mistakes so that's not that big of an issue. Keep the good work up author!
This is a good book! I would recommend to readers who are into fantasy and Greek Mythology. Keep up with the good work. I've added it to my library so I can read future chapters.....π
The story has a lot of grammatical issues. There was some sentences that could have been worded differently for a better story flow. A few words were misspelled, and transitioning to the next scene is kind of hard to followed. But, every authors is bound to have a lot to a few writing issues. No one is spare! I have never seen an author with a grammar-free story before. With that said, my honest thought is....I'm a big mythology lover! love, love, love it! This story is right up my ally! I like how the author indicated which gods or goddesses is which, and power. But in the long-run it might be harder to remember which god and power they are.The author could make a page, listing them all or remind the reader at the end of each chapters ( this might be a bit much).
Another thing is the characters. They were appearing one by one, but for those that were introduce at the beginning beside the gods, it was a bit hard to follow. I would think, for me, is that the pacing was a bit too fast. Especially, the emotional distress that Sol had when he was desperately searching for Anya. A short description about their relationship would be great in supporting his action. I feel like there's more it than just a simple teacher and student relationship. There were a few plot hole that I found to be inconsistent, but the story is still in development , so scratch that. Maybe, there's a plot twist that the author is planning on later.
In overall, even thought there are grammatical issues. That could be fix, so there's no need to worry. Beside that the author is doing great! Keep up the good work!
Let's see, a story with greek mythology, check!
Good characters, check!
Good premise and world also check!
Good job, Author you got something good here, the only problem would be a few grammar mistakes here and there (but like I always say it does not ruin or hinder a good story and can be fixed with ease and time) so keep going Author!
Nice mixing of settings to create a unique world for the story. I don't know if I'm meant to laugh or not, but I couldn't help myself when the first chapter had corona as Apollo's fault.
this is my first work, i hope everyone enjoy it. i try to give a feeling of reality it this and bring human's dark side out in words. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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