good start, in all naruto "fanfic", they always start where the plot begins, and it always starts with the typical girls, I'm not complaining, but this is something else, starting with konan, it's something new, I always wonder about that when they reincarnate, they do not recruit her, because Konan is strong and with her role power she is much more versatile in her attacks.
Those homeless people are very nice as there is no pedo or child r@per like in the today's society . For that I am happy as a 6 year old konan didn't get r@ped.
Good start, Konan is one of the best characters of all in my opinion, not only because of his mentality, but also because he started with nothing and strove to be an S rank ninja.
The only thing that bothers me is how forced the situation, he "casually" arrives where she was.
At least make a summary, the one that after a month wandering around the village could meet her.
This is fascinating seeing the world of naruto from this angle the darkside to it sure the anime showed it but with the mc as a pov to it really is interesting to see a realistic sense to the world rather then plot after plot (shoujo anime where everything is predicted from other similar animes)
Sometimes i wonder what kind of people write downright pedo shit and act normal. Having a mature mind means blushing when you see a na*ked 6 yr old kid? Really?
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