It's a very good novel that I like very much from the grammar who is good or the story I have ti say that it is one of the n'est story I have read so far on webnovel and I find it's sad that it''s been dropped.
Nose que quiso hacer el autor, cree que todo lo que hace da risa y la diatraba del personaje hablándose a si mismo cansa te puedes saltar un capítulo completo y entenderías que pasó una mierda encima lo obligan a casarse con una princesa medio dragón porque lo marco con su mordida y en vez de usar dragón como raza eligió humano una mierda
So I remade another review In the first Until chapter 20 or so is good but it become boring and annoying when Mc gets to another world and, He beacame like side Character to the annoying OG beta Mc. Ahhh come on there no point in Mc going there if you will not Get a girl like getting Touya original wives, And here's another thing Mc is forcefully Getting Touya and His wives get together
-Anyway this is your Fanfic but I'm dropping this Or I might came back if you finish the another world shitttt or If you get Mc a Girl there. ARGGG FUCKING BULLSHIT MC
I'm going to be honest. This is probably the best fantasy novel I have read on this website.
The grammar is easily some of the best that I have seen on this site, there are some slight mistakes here and there but it is easily ignored. The paragraph length is great too, not too long nor too short just precise easy to read paragraphs. I could go on more about the grammar/writing but honestly, it would get boring.
The story development so far has been pretty good and always keeps me interested with one thing after another, first, it was the Evolution, then the guild (academy thing? I forgot the name) and after that, it was bits and pieces of the interesting storyline. It's got nearly all the good stuff for a fantasy novel, Different Species, Magic, Strong people, Gods, and the MC is a sort of OP dragon, not OP enough to one shot everyone but strong enough to face off against the dragon prince.
So far the character design has neither been good nor bad, I think it focuses too much on the MC and not enough time making other characters' personality. There is not much but there is enough to have a relative grasp on every character the MC interacts with.
Last of all the chapter length is really great, it's got a few thousand words in each chapter and is easy to read.
Overall it would be 5 stars if there was a bit more character development with other characters although it isn't necessary. It's a really great read and I will definitely stick to it.
*sigh* This rating is supposed to be 4.9 stars😆 but unfortunately they don't allow half stars in ratings. Truthfully, this book is up my taste, this one have great writing quality with just a few minor typos and an interesting world background; hopin' it precedes to my expectations of having it'd different arcs in the different continents.
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Great story I would recommend it to anybody. it honestly disappoints me its so low on the power rankings. deserves a much higher rank. keep up the great story telling. This is much better than your other novel.
A very good book which needs to be more popular, Has a good plot, Mc is OP but not too much where he can just **** anyone up??? A pretty enjoyable book and I also Highly recommend this book for people to read. I only hope this wont be dropped like some other good Fanfics and Great Job Author keep up the good work~
I wish that the updates would be more common it's painful to look at my library lol.. Otherwise the author is great!![img=update][img=update][img=update]
you want a review I will give you one at the best of my abilities that is the story is pretty great so is the writing quality the only problem is that it takes time to update so 4 out of 5
starting is kinda generic but then from there the story starts to pick itself up. waiting how this story develops. waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting
This is a great story, the plot of the story is quite unique and i could say more but that would just ruin it. So if ur curious just try reading it. Its good, i guarantee it.
yoooo nice chapter dude right now i can only give review of 4 since i don t know the story a lot yet so keep the good work pals can t wait for more story
Hi author here~! I'll shamelessly rate myself as such 'cause, as far as I know, I'm the only one who'll be rating this novel~!
Anyway. Please enjoy your time reading~!!!😊
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